五、书面表达
最近,为了进一步加强对学生的管理,许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华,请你根据下面表格的内容提示,用英文给你的笔友Jane写一封信,介绍你校的新校规,并谈谈你的看法。

要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Jane,
Yours,
Li Hua
最近,为了进一步加强对学生的管理,许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华,请你根据下面表格的内容提示,用英文给你的笔友Jane写一封信,介绍你校的新校规,并谈谈你的看法。
要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Jane,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jane,
I'm glad to tell you that our school has worked out some new rules recently.
We must finish our homework on time, and we can't bring mobile phones to school. We need to sleep for about 9 hours every day and exercise for one hour a day. Also, we are supposed to read one good book a week. For safety, we mustn't fight with classmates, and we can't run in the hallways during breaks.
I think these new rules are very useful. They help us form good living and learning habits, and we can grow up better with these rules.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm glad to tell you that our school has worked out some new rules recently.
We must finish our homework on time, and we can't bring mobile phones to school. We need to sleep for about 9 hours every day and exercise for one hour a day. Also, we are supposed to read one good book a week. For safety, we mustn't fight with classmates, and we can't run in the hallways during breaks.
I think these new rules are very useful. They help us form good living and learning habits, and we can grow up better with these rules.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
这是一篇书信类应用文写作,写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇点明我校近期制定了新校规,自然引出介绍内容;
2. 完整覆盖表格所有提示要点:写明要求按时完成作业、禁止携带手机进校园、每日保证约9小时睡眠、每周读一本好书、每天锻炼一小时,安全规则除禁止打架外补充合理内容比如课间不在走廊奔跑,符合要求;
3. 最后表达个人看法,说明新校规能帮助我们养成良好的学习生活习惯,助力成长,整体使用七年级已学的基础句式,控制词数在80左右,保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯。
1. 开篇点明我校近期制定了新校规,自然引出介绍内容;
2. 完整覆盖表格所有提示要点:写明要求按时完成作业、禁止携带手机进校园、每日保证约9小时睡眠、每周读一本好书、每天锻炼一小时,安全规则除禁止打架外补充合理内容比如课间不在走廊奔跑,符合要求;
3. 最后表达个人看法,说明新校规能帮助我们养成良好的学习生活习惯,助力成长,整体使用七年级已学的基础句式,控制词数在80左右,保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯。
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