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答案
写作专项
解析
【分析】本题为写作专项类题目，解题思路需围绕写作核心能力展开，聚焦审题、立意、结构搭建、语言润色等写作关键环节，明确写作训练的方向，针对性提升写作综合素养。
【解析】写作专项训练需从写作基础入手，梳理写作基本步骤，强化各环节的练习，逐步夯实写作能力，达成写作专项的训练目标。
【答案】写作专项
【知识点】作文写作、写作技巧
【点评】本题为写作专项训练题，是写作学习中夯实基础、提升能力的重要专项内容，有助于学生系统提升写作水平。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作专项训练需从写作基础入手，梳理写作基本步骤，强化各环节的练习，逐步夯实写作能力，达成写作专项的训练目标。
【答案】写作专项
【知识点】作文写作、写作技巧
【点评】本题为写作专项训练题，是写作学习中夯实基础、提升能力的重要专项内容，有助于学生系统提升写作水平。
【难度系数】0.5
一、(海珠期末)如果你有机会出国旅游,你将会选择哪个国家或城市。请写一篇你的旅游计划,从特点、景物、活动等方面描述你想去的一个国家或城市。(约40个单词,不少于5句话)
If I can travel abroad, I will go to Japan for three days. On the first day, I will see the natural beauty in the country. Japan is famous for the Mount Fuji. On the second day, I will eat some delicious food there. On the last day, I will go shopping and buy some presents for my friends. I'm sure I will have a good time there.
答案
一、If I can travel abroad, I will go to Japan for three days. On the first day, I will see the natural beauty in the country. Japan is famous for the Mount Fuji. On the second day, I will eat some delicious food there. On the last day, I will go shopping and buy some presents for my friends. I'm sure I will have a good time there.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇出国旅游计划，需满足约40词、不少于5句话，且包含选择的国家/城市、特点、景物、活动等内容。解题思路：先确定想去的国家（如日本），再按时间顺序安排旅游行程，依次描述每天的活动（观景、美食、购物等），确保覆盖题目要求的要素，句子数量达标，语言简洁流畅。
【解析】
首先确定旅游目的地为日本，围绕三天行程展开：第一天观赏日本著名自然景观富士山，体现其自然特点；第二天品尝当地美食，展现饮食特色；第三天购物为朋友买礼物，最后表达旅行期待。全程使用一般将来时，符合英语写作要求，句子数量达标，内容覆盖题目要求的特点、景物、活动等要素。
【答案】
If I can travel abroad, I will go to Japan for three days. On the first day, I will see the natural beauty in the country. Japan is famous for the Mount Fuji. On the second day, I will eat some delicious food there. On the last day, I will go shopping and buy some presents for my friends. I'm sure I will have a good time there.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般将来时运用、话题表达（出国旅游）
【点评】
该作答紧扣题目要求，明确选择日本作为旅游目的地，按时间顺序清晰描述了三天的旅游安排，涵盖了景物（富士山）、活动（观景、美食、购物），句子数量达标，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇合格的旅游计划短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇出国旅游计划，需满足约40词、不少于5句话，且包含选择的国家/城市、特点、景物、活动等内容。解题思路：先确定想去的国家（如日本），再按时间顺序安排旅游行程，依次描述每天的活动（观景、美食、购物等），确保覆盖题目要求的要素，句子数量达标，语言简洁流畅。
【解析】
首先确定旅游目的地为日本，围绕三天行程展开：第一天观赏日本著名自然景观富士山，体现其自然特点；第二天品尝当地美食，展现饮食特色；第三天购物为朋友买礼物，最后表达旅行期待。全程使用一般将来时，符合英语写作要求，句子数量达标，内容覆盖题目要求的特点、景物、活动等要素。
【答案】
If I can travel abroad, I will go to Japan for three days. On the first day, I will see the natural beauty in the country. Japan is famous for the Mount Fuji. On the second day, I will eat some delicious food there. On the last day, I will go shopping and buy some presents for my friends. I'm sure I will have a good time there.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般将来时运用、话题表达（出国旅游）
【点评】
该作答紧扣题目要求，明确选择日本作为旅游目的地，按时间顺序清晰描述了三天的旅游安排，涵盖了景物（富士山）、活动（观景、美食、购物），句子数量达标，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇合格的旅游计划短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
二、(黄埔期末)请从以下两个任务中任选其一完成。要求:条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范。
任务一:请根据所给的信息,用英文写一段话介绍J.K. Rowling,不少于5句话,不少于40个词。
任务二:如何做一个有礼貌的孩子?你能给你的朋友提一些建议吗?不少于5句话,不少于40个词。
任务一:请根据所给的信息,用英文写一段话介绍J.K. Rowling,不少于5句话,不少于40个词。
任务二:如何做一个有礼貌的孩子?你能给你的朋友提一些建议吗?不少于5句话,不少于40个词。
任务一: Joanne Kathleen Rowling was born in Bristol, England in 1965. She works as a writer. Her famous book is Harry Potter. It talks about magic and many exciting stories, so many people love it. The book was made into movies later, and she became more and more popular.
任务二: It is important for us to be polite in daily life, and here are some tips. First, remember to knock on the door before you walk into a room. Second, use some polite words, such as "please" "thank you" "excuse me" and "sorry". Third, don't stop others when he or she is talking. Finally, don't say anything that may hurt others. If you are nice to others, they will be nice to you, too.
任务二: It is important for us to be polite in daily life, and here are some tips. First, remember to knock on the door before you walk into a room. Second, use some polite words, such as "please" "thank you" "excuse me" and "sorry". Third, don't stop others when he or she is talking. Finally, don't say anything that may hurt others. If you are nice to others, they will be nice to you, too.
答案
二、任务一: Joanne Kathleen Rowling was born in Bristol, England in 1965. She works as a writer. Her famous book is Harry Potter. It talks about magic and many exciting stories, so many people love it. The book was made into movies later, and she became more and more popular.
任务二: It is important for us to be polite in daily life, and here are some tips. First, remember to knock on the door before you walk into a room. Second, use some polite words, such as "please" "thank you" "excuse me" and "sorry". Third, don't stop others when he or she is talking. Finally, don't say anything that may hurt others. If you are nice to others, they will be nice to you, too.
任务二: It is important for us to be polite in daily life, and here are some tips. First, remember to knock on the door before you walk into a room. Second, use some polite words, such as "please" "thank you" "excuse me" and "sorry". Third, don't stop others when he or she is talking. Finally, don't say anything that may hurt others. If you are nice to others, they will be nice to you, too.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作二选一题型，需根据要求完成写作。若选择任务一，需先提取给定的人物信息（姓名、出生地、出生年份、职业、作品），再补充合理内容（如作品的内容或影响力），确保语句连贯、字数达标；若选择任务二，需围绕“做有礼貌的孩子”这一主题，分点给出具体、可行的建议，结合日常场景，保证条理清晰、语句通顺，满足不少于5句、不少于40词的要求。
【解析】
任务一的写作步骤：1. 开篇介绍J.K.罗琳的基本信息：姓名、出生时间与地点；2. 说明她的职业是作家；3. 介绍代表作《哈利·波特》，补充其内容特点或受欢迎程度；4. 收尾说明她的影响力，确保符合字数要求。任务二的写作步骤：1. 开篇点明有礼貌的重要性；2. 分点列举具体建议（如进门敲门、使用礼貌用语、不打断他人、不伤害他人）；3. 总结礼貌的意义，使内容完整连贯。
【答案】
二、任务一: Joanne Kathleen Rowling was born in Bristol, England in 1965. She works as a writer. Her famous book is Harry Potter. It talks about magic and many exciting stories, so many people love it. The book was made into movies later, and she became more and more popular.
任务二: It is important for us to be polite in daily life, and here are some tips. First, remember to knock on the door before you walk into a room. Second, use some polite words, such as "please" "thank you" "excuse me" and "sorry". Third, don't stop others when he or she is talking. Finally, don't say anything that may hurt others. If you are nice to others, they will be nice to you, too.
【知识点】
英语写作、英文信息整合、建议表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见写作题型，二选一的设置兼顾不同学生的优势，既考查学生对给定信息的运用能力，也考查学生的逻辑表达能力，要求符合英文写作规范，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作二选一题型，需根据要求完成写作。若选择任务一，需先提取给定的人物信息（姓名、出生地、出生年份、职业、作品），再补充合理内容（如作品的内容或影响力），确保语句连贯、字数达标；若选择任务二，需围绕“做有礼貌的孩子”这一主题，分点给出具体、可行的建议，结合日常场景，保证条理清晰、语句通顺，满足不少于5句、不少于40词的要求。
【解析】
任务一的写作步骤：1. 开篇介绍J.K.罗琳的基本信息：姓名、出生时间与地点；2. 说明她的职业是作家；3. 介绍代表作《哈利·波特》，补充其内容特点或受欢迎程度；4. 收尾说明她的影响力，确保符合字数要求。任务二的写作步骤：1. 开篇点明有礼貌的重要性；2. 分点列举具体建议（如进门敲门、使用礼貌用语、不打断他人、不伤害他人）；3. 总结礼貌的意义，使内容完整连贯。
【答案】
二、任务一: Joanne Kathleen Rowling was born in Bristol, England in 1965. She works as a writer. Her famous book is Harry Potter. It talks about magic and many exciting stories, so many people love it. The book was made into movies later, and she became more and more popular.
任务二: It is important for us to be polite in daily life, and here are some tips. First, remember to knock on the door before you walk into a room. Second, use some polite words, such as "please" "thank you" "excuse me" and "sorry". Third, don't stop others when he or she is talking. Finally, don't say anything that may hurt others. If you are nice to others, they will be nice to you, too.
【知识点】
英语写作、英文信息整合、建议表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见写作题型，二选一的设置兼顾不同学生的优势，既考查学生对给定信息的运用能力，也考查学生的逻辑表达能力，要求符合英文写作规范，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
三、(荔湾期末)在“守株待兔”这个故事中,农民最终还是没等到第二只兔子过来。请你用英语复述、评论、改写或续写这个故事(四选一),要求内容符合主题,观点明确,情节合理,语句通顺,意思连贯,拼写正确,语法无误,标点正确,书写规范,不少于5句话和45个单词。
请先在所选的题目后面的括号里打“√”。复述(
请先在所选的题目后面的括号里打“√”。复述(
√
) 评论(√
) 改写(√
) 续写(√
)One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. A farmer picked it up and cooked it. From then on, the farmer stopped working and waited for another hare to appear. But hares never came again. Don't wait for another hare. Go for it!
The farmer is too lazy. He wants to get something without working. That's not good. He should work hard and grow vegetables in the field. He shouldn't wait for a hare to appear. No pain, no gain. We should study hard, too. Go for it!
One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. The farmer took it back home and cooked it. He felt happy. So the farmer worked harder in the field the next day. He thought there would be more vegetables to eat.
The farmer knew he should work hard. He started to grow vegetables again. After one year, there were a lot of vegetables in the field. Suddenly, another hare appeared, hit the big tree and died. He took it back home and cooked it. But he still worked in the field the next day. He didn't wait for another hare.
The farmer is too lazy. He wants to get something without working. That's not good. He should work hard and grow vegetables in the field. He shouldn't wait for a hare to appear. No pain, no gain. We should study hard, too. Go for it!
One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. The farmer took it back home and cooked it. He felt happy. So the farmer worked harder in the field the next day. He thought there would be more vegetables to eat.
The farmer knew he should work hard. He started to grow vegetables again. After one year, there were a lot of vegetables in the field. Suddenly, another hare appeared, hit the big tree and died. He took it back home and cooked it. But he still worked in the field the next day. He didn't wait for another hare.
答案
三、复述(√)
One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. A farmer picked it up and cooked it. From then on, the farmer stopped working and waited for another hare to appear. But hares never came again. Don't wait for another hare. Go for it!
评论(√)
The farmer is too lazy. He wants to get something without working. That's not good. He should work hard and grow vegetables in the field. He shouldn't wait for a hare to appear. No pain, no gain. We should study hard, too. Go for it!
改写(√)
One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. The farmer took it back home and cooked it. He felt happy. So the farmer worked harder in the field the next day. He thought there would be more vegetables to eat.
续写(√)
The farmer knew he should work hard. He started to grow vegetables again. After one year, there were a lot of vegetables in the field. Suddenly, another hare appeared, hit the big tree and died. He took it back home and cooked it. But he still worked in the field the next day. He didn't wait for another hare.
One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. A farmer picked it up and cooked it. From then on, the farmer stopped working and waited for another hare to appear. But hares never came again. Don't wait for another hare. Go for it!
评论(√)
The farmer is too lazy. He wants to get something without working. That's not good. He should work hard and grow vegetables in the field. He shouldn't wait for a hare to appear. No pain, no gain. We should study hard, too. Go for it!
改写(√)
One day, a hare hit a big tree and then it died. The farmer took it back home and cooked it. He felt happy. So the farmer worked harder in the field the next day. He thought there would be more vegetables to eat.
续写(√)
The farmer knew he should work hard. He started to grow vegetables again. After one year, there were a lot of vegetables in the field. Suddenly, another hare appeared, hit the big tree and died. He took it back home and cooked it. But he still worked in the field the next day. He didn't wait for another hare.
解析
【分析】首先需从复述、评论、改写、续写中选择一项完成任务，这里选择续写，因为续写可承接原故事，体现核心寓意（不抱侥幸、需劳动），符合要求；写作时要紧扣原故事中农民的转变，情节合理，观点明确，确保语句通顺、语法正确，满足字数要求。
【解析】第一步：在续写后的括号内打“√”；第二步：续写内容需承接原故事，突出农民放弃守株待兔、回归劳动的转变，具体内容如下：The farmer knew he should work hard instead of waiting for luck. He started to plow the field and plant seeds again. Every day, he worked hard from morning to evening. After several months, his field grew lots of fresh vegetables. One day, a hare ran fast and hit the big tree nearby, dying. But this time, the farmer didn’t stop working. He just took the hare home and cooked it, then went back to his field to continue working.
【答案】续写(√)
The farmer knew he should work hard instead of waiting for luck. He started to plow the field and plant seeds again. Every day, he worked hard from morning to evening. After several months, his field grew lots of fresh vegetables. One day, a hare ran fast and hit the big tree nearby, dying. But this time, the farmer didn’t stop working. He just took the hare home and cooked it, then went back to his field to continue working.
【知识点】英语写作、寓言故事理解
【点评】本题考查学生对寓言故事的理解及英语写作能力，要求续写内容紧扣主题，体现正确价值观，语句通顺、语法正确，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步：在续写后的括号内打“√”；第二步：续写内容需承接原故事，突出农民放弃守株待兔、回归劳动的转变，具体内容如下：The farmer knew he should work hard instead of waiting for luck. He started to plow the field and plant seeds again. Every day, he worked hard from morning to evening. After several months, his field grew lots of fresh vegetables. One day, a hare ran fast and hit the big tree nearby, dying. But this time, the farmer didn’t stop working. He just took the hare home and cooked it, then went back to his field to continue working.
【答案】续写(√)
The farmer knew he should work hard instead of waiting for luck. He started to plow the field and plant seeds again. Every day, he worked hard from morning to evening. After several months, his field grew lots of fresh vegetables. One day, a hare ran fast and hit the big tree nearby, dying. But this time, the farmer didn’t stop working. He just took the hare home and cooked it, then went back to his field to continue working.
【知识点】英语写作、寓言故事理解
【点评】本题考查学生对寓言故事的理解及英语写作能力，要求续写内容紧扣主题，体现正确价值观，语句通顺、语法正确，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.6
