十五、书面表达。(共12分)
为进一步推进“双减”政策有效实施,许多学校设立了“无作业日”。在这一天,你可以阅读好书,参加体育锻炼,提升劳动技能以及培养兴趣爱好等。请你以“My No-Homework Day”为题,谈一谈你对“无作业日”的看法,包括你在这一天经常做的事情以及你的心情、感受等。
要求:1.主题明确,语句通顺,行文连贯。
2.短文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息。
3.开头已给出,词数在60左右。
参考词汇:play sports, listen to music, clean the rooms...
句型: I usually/often/sometimes... I can... I am...
My No-Homework Day
We have “No-Homework Day” now. I
为进一步推进“双减”政策有效实施,许多学校设立了“无作业日”。在这一天,你可以阅读好书,参加体育锻炼,提升劳动技能以及培养兴趣爱好等。请你以“My No-Homework Day”为题,谈一谈你对“无作业日”的看法,包括你在这一天经常做的事情以及你的心情、感受等。
要求:1.主题明确,语句通顺,行文连贯。
2.短文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息。
3.开头已给出,词数在60左右。
参考词汇:play sports, listen to music, clean the rooms...
句型: I usually/often/sometimes... I can... I am...
My No-Homework Day
We have “No-Homework Day” now. I
don't have to do lots of homework every day. So what do I do? I usually play sports for an hour. I want to keep healthy. Then I listen to English songs for half an hour. I love English songs very much. Sometimes I clean the rooms. It makes me feel better. I also like reading books. It's interesting. I like No-Homework Day.
答案
One possible version:
My No-Homework Day
We have "No-Homework Day" now. I don't have to do lots of homework every day. So what do I do? I usually play sports for an hour. I want to keep healthy. Then I listen to English songs for half an hour. I love English songs very much. Sometimes I clean the rooms. It makes me feel better. I also like reading books. It's interesting. I like No-Homework Day.
My No-Homework Day
We have "No-Homework Day" now. I don't have to do lots of homework every day. So what do I do? I usually play sports for an hour. I want to keep healthy. Then I listen to English songs for half an hour. I love English songs very much. Sometimes I clean the rooms. It makes me feel better. I also like reading books. It's interesting. I like No-Homework Day.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“My No-Homework Day”为题,围绕“无作业日”,需写出当天常做的事及心情感受,开头已给出,词数60左右,不得出现真实信息,要运用参考词汇和指定句型。解题思路:先承接开头说明无作业的状态,再用频率副词列举当天的活动(如运动、听音乐、打扫房间等),最后表达对无作业日的喜爱,确保语句通顺、主题明确。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,说明无作业的情况:I don't have to do lots of homework every day.
2. 用频率副词列举活动:usually play sports(对应参考词汇),then listen to English songs,sometimes clean the rooms,also like reading books;
3. 表达活动意义与感受:说明运动是为了健康,听音乐、打扫房间能带来好心情,读书很有趣,最后点明对无作业日的喜爱,保证词数符合要求,行文连贯。
【答案】
My No-Homework Day
We have "No-Homework Day" now. I don't have to do lots of homework every day. So what do I do? I usually play sports for an hour. I want to keep healthy. Then I listen to English songs for half an hour. I love English songs very much. Sometimes I clean the rooms. It makes me feel better. I also like reading books. It's interesting. I like No-Homework Day.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
作文紧扣“无作业日”主题,运用参考词汇和指定句型,语句通顺连贯,清晰呈现了当天的活动及真实感受,符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求:以“My No-Homework Day”为题,围绕“无作业日”,需写出当天常做的事及心情感受,开头已给出,词数60左右,不得出现真实信息,要运用参考词汇和指定句型。解题思路:先承接开头说明无作业的状态,再用频率副词列举当天的活动(如运动、听音乐、打扫房间等),最后表达对无作业日的喜爱,确保语句通顺、主题明确。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,说明无作业的情况:I don't have to do lots of homework every day.
2. 用频率副词列举活动:usually play sports(对应参考词汇),then listen to English songs,sometimes clean the rooms,also like reading books;
3. 表达活动意义与感受:说明运动是为了健康,听音乐、打扫房间能带来好心情,读书很有趣,最后点明对无作业日的喜爱,保证词数符合要求,行文连贯。
【答案】
My No-Homework Day
We have "No-Homework Day" now. I don't have to do lots of homework every day. So what do I do? I usually play sports for an hour. I want to keep healthy. Then I listen to English songs for half an hour. I love English songs very much. Sometimes I clean the rooms. It makes me feel better. I also like reading books. It's interesting. I like No-Homework Day.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
作文紧扣“无作业日”主题,运用参考词汇和指定句型,语句通顺连贯,清晰呈现了当天的活动及真实感受,符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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