十、书面表达(本题有1小题,共20分)
假设你叫李华,上周你跟父母去了成都研究基地(the Chengdu Research Base)看大熊猫,你的外国笔友 Mike 对这次活动非常感兴趣,请你结合以下信息,用英语写一封回信,分享一下你的经历和感受,并给出一些建议。

注意:1.信中需包含所有信息,并适当发挥;
2.信中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数70左右;信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend!
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你叫李华,上周你跟父母去了成都研究基地(the Chengdu Research Base)看大熊猫,你的外国笔友 Mike 对这次活动非常感兴趣,请你结合以下信息,用英语写一封回信,分享一下你的经历和感受,并给出一些建议。
注意:1.信中需包含所有信息,并适当发挥;
2.信中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数70左右;信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend!
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I couldn't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda key ring for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips. First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden. Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I couldn't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda key ring for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips. First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden. Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达中的书信写作题,要求给外国笔友Mike写回信分享去成都大熊猫研究基地的经历。解题思路:1. 承接开头,说明当时的天气情况(晴朗炎热);2. 描述活动:看可爱的熊猫(可补充拍照)、买礼物(给Mike);3. 给出参观的注意事项(禁止喂食、保持安静);4. 适当发挥,使内容连贯,符合词数要求,注意书信格式,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
首先承接开头,用让步状语从句引出天气情况,接着描述核心活动(看熊猫的感受、拍照、买礼物),再分点给出参观建议,最后衔接结尾,确保覆盖所有给定信息并适当拓展,符合书信格式和词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I couldn't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda key ring for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips. First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden. Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题写作(旅行经历)
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息并进行英语书面表达的能力,要求结合给定表格内容完成书信,贴近学生生活,既考查基础表达,又要求适当拓展,符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达中的书信写作题,要求给外国笔友Mike写回信分享去成都大熊猫研究基地的经历。解题思路:1. 承接开头,说明当时的天气情况(晴朗炎热);2. 描述活动:看可爱的熊猫(可补充拍照)、买礼物(给Mike);3. 给出参观的注意事项(禁止喂食、保持安静);4. 适当发挥,使内容连贯,符合词数要求,注意书信格式,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
首先承接开头,用让步状语从句引出天气情况,接着描述核心活动(看熊猫的感受、拍照、买礼物),再分点给出参观建议,最后衔接结尾,确保覆盖所有给定信息并适当拓展,符合书信格式和词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I couldn't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda key ring for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips. First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden. Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题写作(旅行经历)
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息并进行英语书面表达的能力,要求结合给定表格内容完成书信,贴近学生生活,既考查基础表达,又要求适当拓展,符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.5
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