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六、在生活或学习中，当你情绪低落的时候，你是如何积极应对的呢？你们学校要举办一场题为“Don’t Worry. Be Happy!”的英语演讲活动，请你结合自己的实际经历，并根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加比赛。
要点提示：
1. Did you have an unhappy experience? What was it?
2. How did you deal with it?
3. What do you learn from it?
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 90词左右(文中已给出部分不计入总词数)。
Don’t Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is “Don’t Worry. Be Happy!”.
要点提示：
1. Did you have an unhappy experience? What was it?
2. How did you deal with it?
3. What do you learn from it?
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 90词左右(文中已给出部分不计入总词数)。
Don’t Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is “Don’t Worry. Be Happy!”.
I'd like to share one of my experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided talking about the competition after that. My mum noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started practising again. I recorded myself to check my progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later, I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive mind and regular action, we can turn worries into wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided talking about the competition after that. My mum noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started practising again. I recorded myself to check my progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later, I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive mind and regular action, we can turn worries into wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is "Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided talking about the competition after that. My mum noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started practising again. I recorded myself to check my progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later, I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive mind and regular action, we can turn worries into wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is "Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided talking about the competition after that. My mum noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started practising again. I recorded myself to check my progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later, I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive mind and regular action, we can turn worries into wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【解析】
首先开篇点明演讲主题，接着紧扣题目要点展开：先讲述自己一次演讲比赛失利的不愉快经历，再描述在妈妈鼓励下重新练习、寻求老师指导的应对方法，最后总结从中获得的感悟。写作结合实际经历，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的文体特点和字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is "Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided talking about the competition after that. My mum noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started practising again. I recorded myself to check my progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later, I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive mind and regular action, we can turn worries into wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、叙事类英语写作、积极情感表达
【点评】
本文紧扣演讲主题和题目要求，结构清晰完整，以自身真实经历为内容载体，叙事条理分明，情感真挚自然，语言表达流畅规范，符合字数要求，能有效传递积极乐观的生活态度，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先开篇点明演讲主题，接着紧扣题目要点展开：先讲述自己一次演讲比赛失利的不愉快经历，再描述在妈妈鼓励下重新练习、寻求老师指导的应对方法，最后总结从中获得的感悟。写作结合实际经历，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的文体特点和字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is "Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided talking about the competition after that. My mum noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started practising again. I recorded myself to check my progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later, I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive mind and regular action, we can turn worries into wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、叙事类英语写作、积极情感表达
【点评】
本文紧扣演讲主题和题目要求，结构清晰完整，以自身真实经历为内容载体，叙事条理分明，情感真挚自然，语言表达流畅规范，符合字数要求，能有效传递积极乐观的生活态度，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
