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七、书面表达。7分
今天是李华的生日,我们正在他家里为他庆祝生日。请根据思维导图和所给提示,以"Li Hua's
birthday"为题,补全介绍李华生日的短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,适当发挥想象;
2. 30词左右不包含所给词。
Li Hua's birthday
Today is Li Hua's birthday. It is on
It is ten o'clock in the morning. We are at Li Hua's house. Look! We are having a party in the
living room. Some boys are
Hua's dad
It's time for the cake now. Li Hua is making wishes. He wants to
He
We
今天是李华的生日,我们正在他家里为他庆祝生日。请根据思维导图和所给提示,以"Li Hua's
birthday"为题,补全介绍李华生日的短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,适当发挥想象;
2. 30词左右不包含所给词。
Li Hua's birthday
Today is Li Hua's birthday. It is on
the second of July
.It is ten o'clock in the morning. We are at Li Hua's house. Look! We are having a party in the
living room. Some boys are
playing games
. Some girls are watching TV
. LiHua's dad
is making a birthday cake with fruit
and his mum is cooking dishes
in the kitchen.It's time for the cake now. Li Hua is making wishes. He wants to
have a robot
.He
wants to swim well
too.We
have a lot of fun
at the party.答案
范文：
Li Hua's birthday
Today is Li Hua's birthday. It is on the second of July.
It is ten o'clock in the morning. We are at Li Hua's house. Look! We are having a party in the living room. Some boys are playing games. Some girls are watching TV. Li Hua's dad is making a birthday cake with fruit and his mum is cooking dishes in the kitchen.
It's time for the cake now. Li Hua is making wishes. He wants to have a robot. He wants to swim well too.
We have a lot of fun at the party.
Li Hua's birthday
Today is Li Hua's birthday. It is on the second of July.
It is ten o'clock in the morning. We are at Li Hua's house. Look! We are having a party in the living room. Some boys are playing games. Some girls are watching TV. Li Hua's dad is making a birthday cake with fruit and his mum is cooking dishes in the kitchen.
It's time for the cake now. Li Hua is making wishes. He wants to have a robot. He wants to swim well too.
We have a lot of fun at the party.
解析
【分析】
解题思路：本题是根据思维导图补全英语短文，主题为李华的生日。需先提取思维导图中日期、活动、愿望、感受的信息，同时注意短文时态为现在进行时（描述正在进行的动作），结合语境适当发挥，保证语句通顺连贯。步骤：1. 补全日期空，对应思维导图的2 July；2. 补全男孩、女孩、父母的活动，用现在进行时结构；3. 补全愿望空，对应思维导图的have...和swim well；4. 补全感受空，对应思维导图的have fun。
【解析】
1. 日期：思维导图显示生日是7月2日，英语日期表达为“the + 序数词 + of + 月份”，故填the second of July；
2. 男孩活动：思维导图中男孩对应play，结合生日派对语境，用现在进行时填playing games；
3. 女孩活动：思维导图中女孩对应watch，用现在进行时填watching TV；
4. 爸爸活动：思维导图中Mr Li对应make，主语是第三人称单数，现在进行时结构为is + doing，填is making a birthday cake；
5. 妈妈活动：思维导图中Mrs Li对应cook，现在进行时填is cooking dishes；
6. 第一个愿望：思维导图中have...，结合语境填have a robot；
7. 第二个愿望：思维导图中swim well，故填wants to swim well；
8. 感受：思维导图中have fun，填have a lot of fun。
【答案】
Li Hua's birthday
Today is Li Hua's birthday. It is on the second of July.
It is ten o'clock in the morning. We are at Li Hua's house. Look! We are having a party in the living room. Some boys are playing games. Some girls are watching TV. Li Hua's dad is making a birthday cake with fruit and his mum is cooking dishes in the kitchen.
It's time for the cake now. Li Hua is making wishes. He wants to have a robot. He wants to swim well too.
We have a lot of fun at the party.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时、日期表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生信息提取与英语写作能力，要求掌握现在进行时用法，能根据给定信息合理补全短文，难度适中，适合初中低年级学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
解题思路：本题是根据思维导图补全英语短文，主题为李华的生日。需先提取思维导图中日期、活动、愿望、感受的信息，同时注意短文时态为现在进行时（描述正在进行的动作），结合语境适当发挥，保证语句通顺连贯。步骤：1. 补全日期空，对应思维导图的2 July；2. 补全男孩、女孩、父母的活动，用现在进行时结构；3. 补全愿望空，对应思维导图的have...和swim well；4. 补全感受空，对应思维导图的have fun。
【解析】
1. 日期：思维导图显示生日是7月2日，英语日期表达为“the + 序数词 + of + 月份”，故填the second of July；
2. 男孩活动：思维导图中男孩对应play，结合生日派对语境，用现在进行时填playing games；
3. 女孩活动：思维导图中女孩对应watch，用现在进行时填watching TV；
4. 爸爸活动：思维导图中Mr Li对应make，主语是第三人称单数，现在进行时结构为is + doing，填is making a birthday cake；
5. 妈妈活动：思维导图中Mrs Li对应cook，现在进行时填is cooking dishes；
6. 第一个愿望：思维导图中have...，结合语境填have a robot；
7. 第二个愿望：思维导图中swim well，故填wants to swim well；
8. 感受：思维导图中have fun，填have a lot of fun。
【答案】
Li Hua's birthday
Today is Li Hua's birthday. It is on the second of July.
It is ten o'clock in the morning. We are at Li Hua's house. Look! We are having a party in the living room. Some boys are playing games. Some girls are watching TV. Li Hua's dad is making a birthday cake with fruit and his mum is cooking dishes in the kitchen.
It's time for the cake now. Li Hua is making wishes. He wants to have a robot. He wants to swim well too.
We have a lot of fun at the party.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时、日期表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生信息提取与英语写作能力，要求掌握现在进行时用法，能根据给定信息合理补全短文，难度适中，适合初中低年级学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
