10月4日是世界动物日(World Animal Day),请你以“Save the wild animals”为题,用英语写一则100词左右的倡议书,呼吁大家一起行动保护野生动物。内容包括:
1.简要介绍野生动物的现状,分析其数量减少的原因;
2.谈谈保护野生动物的重要性,并提出保护的方法;
3.呼吁大家一起行动保护野生动物,使我们的家园更美好。
Save the wild animals



写作支架
开头 现状以及原因 → Animals are . But the number of some wild animals is . That is because . Besides, too much hunting and pollution also .（高分句式1）
中间 保护的重要性以及方法 → There is no doubtat . So we must . We should stop . At the same time, it’s important to .
结尾 发出倡议,呼吁行动 → If everyone tries their best to , our home will become .（高分句式2）Let’s .

优秀范文
Save the wild animals
Animals are our friends. But the number of some wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller. That is because¹ their living space is becoming less and less. Besides², too much hunting and pollution also cause the disappearance of² wild animals.
There is no doubt that¹ every animal helps keep the balance in nature. So we must save the wild animals. We should stop polluting the environment and hunting. At the same time², it’s important to build more nature reserves for them.
If everyone tries their best to protect wild animals, our home will become better and better.³ Let’s take action now.³
亮点评析
①使用 That is because...、There is no doubt that...高级句型,体现出扎实的写作功底,是加分项。
②高级词汇 besides、cause the disappearance of...、at the same time 是文章的亮点,提升了文章的档次。
③文章结尾使用主从复合句和祈使句发出倡议,再次点明主题。