2026年上海作业五年级英语上册沪教版五四制第67页答案
Ⅸ. Writing(写作)5%
请以“My wonderful school life”为题,写一篇不少于50词的短文。要求语句通顺,书写规范。



答案

参考范文:
My wonderful school life
My school life is wonderful. I joined the Gardening Club this year. We study many plants there. I love watching morning glories and taking photos of water lilies. At breaks,I play traditional games. I often play Chinese yo-yo with friends. It is great fun. I also take care of my health. I do eye exercises twice a day. I sometimes play tug of war on the playground. My school life is full of joy. I love it very much.

解析

【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My wonderful school life”,需围绕“精彩的校园生活”展开,选取校园中具体的、能体现“精彩”的事例(如社团活动、课间游戏、健康习惯等),确保语句通顺、内容连贯,字数不少于50词,最后总结表达对校园生活的喜爱。
【解析】写作时可遵循“总-分-总”结构:1. 开篇点明主题,说明校园生活很精彩;2. 分述具体事例:加入园艺社团的活动、课间玩传统游戏、注重健康的行为;3. 结尾总结,表达对校园生活的喜爱。
【答案】My wonderful school life
My school life is wonderful. I joined the Gardening Club this year. We study many plants there. I love watching morning glories and taking photos of water lilies. At breaks,I play traditional games. I often play Chinese yo-yo with friends. It is great fun. I also take care of my health. I do eye exercises twice a day. I sometimes play tug of war on the playground. My school life is full of joy. I love it very much.
【知识点】英语写作、校园话题表达
【点评】范文围绕主题选取了校园社团、课间活动、健康习惯等具体事例,内容充实,语句通顺,符合字数要求,准确表达了对校园生活的喜爱,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6