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常言道:"家是心灵的港湾,亲情是永恒的灯火。"家庭生活中有许多温馨的时刻,常常成为我们心中珍贵的回忆。这些回忆不仅能带给我们温暖的感动,还能通过记录与他人分享,让我们更加珍惜家庭生活的每一刻。请以 "Sweet memories with my family" 为题,分享一段美好的时光。内容包括:
1.讲述一段你和家人一起度过的美好时光;2.分享这段回忆给你带来的感受。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life.
写作支架
优秀范文
Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life. The one that warms my heart most² is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side² in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients. Mom taught me to fold² dumplings into² boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on² our favourite show. When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled³ warm and inviting. We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family². They remind me how lucky I am³ to have such warm love around me.
亮点评析
①开门见山,引出话题。
②运用定语从句、side by side、fold...into、put on、宾语从句这些高分短语和句式,丰富文章内容,使语言更为流畅、准确,为文章增色不少。
③使用 smell、be 两个连系动词,将单元语法巧妙融入到写作中,学以致用。
1.讲述一段你和家人一起度过的美好时光;2.分享这段回忆给你带来的感受。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life.
The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients.
Mom taught me to fold dumplings into boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on our favourite show.
When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled warm and inviting.
We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family. They remind me how lucky I am to have such warm love around me.
写作支架
优秀范文
Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life. The one that warms my heart most² is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side² in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients. Mom taught me to fold² dumplings into² boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on² our favourite show. When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled³ warm and inviting. We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family². They remind me how lucky I am³ to have such warm love around me.
亮点评析
①开门见山,引出话题。
②运用定语从句、side by side、fold...into、put on、宾语从句这些高分短语和句式,丰富文章内容,使语言更为流畅、准确,为文章增色不少。
③使用 smell、be 两个连系动词,将单元语法巧妙融入到写作中,学以致用。
答案
Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life. The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients. Mom taught me to fold dumplings into boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on our favourite show. When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled warm and inviting. We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family. They remind me how lucky I am to have such warm love around me.
亮点评析
①开门见山,引出话题。
②运用定语从句、side by side、fold...into、put on、宾语从句这些高分短语和句式,丰富文章内容,使语言更为流畅、准确,为文章增色不少。
③使用 smell、be 两个连系动词,将单元语法巧妙融入到写作中,学以致用。
There are many sweet memories in my family life. The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients. Mom taught me to fold dumplings into boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on our favourite show. When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled warm and inviting. We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family. They remind me how lucky I am to have such warm love around me.
亮点评析
①开门见山,引出话题。
②运用定语从句、side by side、fold...into、put on、宾语从句这些高分短语和句式,丰富文章内容,使语言更为流畅、准确,为文章增色不少。
③使用 smell、be 两个连系动词,将单元语法巧妙融入到写作中,学以致用。
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语记叙文写作题，要求以“Sweet memories with my family”为题，分享与家人共度的美好时光及感受。解题思路：首先用定语从句引出最温暖的家庭回忆，开门见山；接着具体描述去年除夕夜的温馨场景，通过家人分工准备食物、吃饭时的细节展现家庭温暖，运用高分短语和句式丰富内容；最后总结感悟，表达对家庭温暖的珍惜，确保行文连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】按照写作要求，结合给定支架和优秀范文，步骤如下：1. 开头：用“The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.”引出核心回忆，紧扣主题；2. 中间：详细描写除夕夜的活动，如家人在厨房并肩准备食物，妈妈教包饺子，爸爸布置餐桌，火锅沸腾时的温馨氛围，吃饭时分享趣事，运用“worked side by side”“fold...into”等短语，使内容具体生动；3. 结尾：通过坐在餐桌旁的感悟，用宾语从句表达对家庭温暖的珍惜，升华主题，确保词数约100词，行文连贯。
【答案】Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life. The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients. Mom taught me to fold dumplings into boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on our favourite show. When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled warm and inviting. We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family. They remind me how lucky I am to have such warm love around me.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、定语从句、常用动词短语运用
【点评】这篇范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，分为引出回忆、具体叙述、表达感受三部分，运用了定语从句、高分短语等丰富语言，生动展现了家庭的温馨，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作要求，结合给定支架和优秀范文，步骤如下：1. 开头：用“The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.”引出核心回忆，紧扣主题；2. 中间：详细描写除夕夜的活动，如家人在厨房并肩准备食物，妈妈教包饺子，爸爸布置餐桌，火锅沸腾时的温馨氛围，吃饭时分享趣事，运用“worked side by side”“fold...into”等短语，使内容具体生动；3. 结尾：通过坐在餐桌旁的感悟，用宾语从句表达对家庭温暖的珍惜，升华主题，确保词数约100词，行文连贯。
【答案】Sweet memories with my family
There are many sweet memories in my family life. The one that warms my heart most is the New Year's Eve we spent together last year.
That night, we worked side by side in the kitchen, preparing dumplings and hot pot ingredients. Mom taught me to fold dumplings into boat shapes, while Dad set the table and put on our favourite show. When the hot pot bubbled, the whole room smelled warm and inviting. We laughed and shared funny stories while eating our homemade food.
Sitting around the table, I realized that these small moments are the true magic of family. They remind me how lucky I am to have such warm love around me.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、定语从句、常用动词短语运用
【点评】这篇范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，分为引出回忆、具体叙述、表达感受三部分，运用了定语从句、高分短语等丰富语言，生动展现了家庭的温馨，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
