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十三、短文写作。(7分)
暑假之后,我们就成为中学生了。从这个假期开始,让我们努力成为更好的自己!
要求:1. 根据思维导图的提示写一段话,不少于50个单词;
2. 内容不少于提示中的3个方面,并可以发挥想象,适当添加;
3. 结构完整,条理清晰,注意时态正确,语句通顺,书写规范,标点正确;
4. 请勿提及真实姓名和学校名称。
After the summer holidays, I will become a middle school student. To be a better self, I
暑假之后,我们就成为中学生了。从这个假期开始,让我们努力成为更好的自己!
要求:1. 根据思维导图的提示写一段话,不少于50个单词;
2. 内容不少于提示中的3个方面,并可以发挥想象,适当添加;
3. 结构完整,条理清晰,注意时态正确,语句通顺,书写规范,标点正确;
4. 请勿提及真实姓名和学校名称。
After the summer holidays, I will become a middle school student. To be a better self, I
will make some plans. First, I will have good living habits. I will go to bed early and get up early every day. I will also eat more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. Second, for learning, I am going to read English every morning and do homework carefully. Third, I will help my parents do housework at weekends, such as sweeping the floor and washing dishes. Also, I plan to play basketball twice a week to keep healthy. I believe I can become a better me!
答案
One possible version:
After the summer holidays, I will
become a middle school student. To be a
better self, I will make some plans. First, I
will have good living habits. I will go to bed
early and get up early every day. I will also
eat more healthy food like fruit and
vegetables. Second, for learning, I am going
to read English every morning and do
homework carefully. Third, I will help my
parents do housework at weekends, such as
sweeping the floor and washing dishes. Also,
I plan to play basketball twice a week to keep
healthy. I believe I can become a better me!
After the summer holidays, I will
become a middle school student. To be a
better self, I will make some plans. First, I
will have good living habits. I will go to bed
early and get up early every day. I will also
eat more healthy food like fruit and
vegetables. Second, for learning, I am going
to read English every morning and do
homework carefully. Third, I will help my
parents do housework at weekends, such as
sweeping the floor and washing dishes. Also,
I plan to play basketball twice a week to keep
healthy. I believe I can become a better me!
解析
【分析】本题是英语短文写作题，要求根据思维导图提示，围绕“成为更好的自己”主题写不少于50词的短文。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述暑假后的计划，需用一般将来时（will/be going to结构）；2. 选材：从思维导图的生活习惯、学习、家务、运动休闲中选至少3个，结合具体内容充实文章；3. 结构：用First、Second等连接词，让条理清晰；4. 收尾：表达对未来的信心，呼应主题。
【解析】首先开头点题，说明暑假后成为中学生，要做更好的自己并制定计划；接着分点阐述：第一，生活习惯方面，早睡早起、吃健康食物；第二，学习方面，每天读英语、认真做作业；第三，家务方面，周末帮父母做家务（如扫地、洗碗）；第四，运动方面，每周打两次篮球保持健康；最后总结，表达能成为更好的自己的信心。写作时注意时态正确、语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
After the summer holidays, I will become a middle school student. To be a better self, I will make some plans. First, I will have good living habits. I will go to bed early and get up early every day. I will also eat more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. Second, for learning, I am going to read English every morning and do homework carefully. Third, I will help my parents do housework at weekends, such as sweeping the floor and washing dishes. Also, I plan to play basketball twice a week to keep healthy. I believe I can become a better me!
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般将来时
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生英语综合运用能力，既要求围绕主题合理组织内容，又注重时态、语句通顺等基础写作要求，同时引导学生树立积极的自我提升意识，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开头点题，说明暑假后成为中学生，要做更好的自己并制定计划；接着分点阐述：第一，生活习惯方面，早睡早起、吃健康食物；第二，学习方面，每天读英语、认真做作业；第三，家务方面，周末帮父母做家务（如扫地、洗碗）；第四，运动方面，每周打两次篮球保持健康；最后总结，表达能成为更好的自己的信心。写作时注意时态正确、语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
After the summer holidays, I will become a middle school student. To be a better self, I will make some plans. First, I will have good living habits. I will go to bed early and get up early every day. I will also eat more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. Second, for learning, I am going to read English every morning and do homework carefully. Third, I will help my parents do housework at weekends, such as sweeping the floor and washing dishes. Also, I plan to play basketball twice a week to keep healthy. I believe I can become a better me!
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般将来时
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生英语综合运用能力，既要求围绕主题合理组织内容，又注重时态、语句通顺等基础写作要求，同时引导学生树立积极的自我提升意识，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.5
