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下周英语课的主题是“介绍自己”。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格中的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。要求:1. 语句通顺，语意连贯;2. 不少于 60 词。
下周英语课的主题是“介绍自己”。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格中的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。要求:1. 语句通顺，语意连贯;2. 不少于 60 词。
答案
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old, and I come from the nice city Dalian. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I. My parents love me very much, and we live a happy life together. My favourite food is beef noodles, I think they are really delicious. I am very happy to meet all of you here, and I hope we can become good friends later.
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old, and I come from the nice city Dalian. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I. My parents love me very much, and we live a happy life together. My favourite food is beef noodles, I think they are really delicious. I am very happy to meet all of you here, and I hope we can become good friends later.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语自我介绍写作题，解题思路为：1. 用礼貌的问候语开启自我介绍；2. 依据表格提示，依次介绍姓名、年龄、来自的城市、家庭成员、最喜欢的食物；3. 补充合适的连接词和细节内容，让语句通顺连贯，满足不少于60词的要求。
【解析】
写作时，先以“Hello, everyone!”作为开头，接着说明自己的姓名是Li Hua，年龄12岁，来自大连；然后介绍家庭成员有爸爸、妈妈和自己，补充家庭幸福的细节；最后说明最喜欢的食物是牛肉面，表达对同学的友好以及希望成为朋友的愿望，确保语句通顺、语意连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old, and I come from the nice city Dalian. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I. My parents love me very much, and we live a happy life together. My favourite food is beef noodles, I think they are really delicious. I am very happy to meet all of you here, and I hope we can become good friends later.
【知识点】
英语写作、自我介绍表达
【点评】
本题考查基础的英语信息整合与写作能力，要求根据给定表格内容完成自我介绍，需注意语句连贯和字数要求，是英语写作的基础题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一道英语自我介绍写作题，解题思路为：1. 用礼貌的问候语开启自我介绍；2. 依据表格提示，依次介绍姓名、年龄、来自的城市、家庭成员、最喜欢的食物；3. 补充合适的连接词和细节内容，让语句通顺连贯，满足不少于60词的要求。
【解析】
写作时，先以“Hello, everyone!”作为开头，接着说明自己的姓名是Li Hua，年龄12岁，来自大连；然后介绍家庭成员有爸爸、妈妈和自己，补充家庭幸福的细节；最后说明最喜欢的食物是牛肉面，表达对同学的友好以及希望成为朋友的愿望，确保语句通顺、语意连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old, and I come from the nice city Dalian. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I. My parents love me very much, and we live a happy life together. My favourite food is beef noodles, I think they are really delicious. I am very happy to meet all of you here, and I hope we can become good friends later.
【知识点】
英语写作、自我介绍表达
【点评】
本题考查基础的英语信息整合与写作能力，要求根据给定表格内容完成自我介绍，需注意语句连贯和字数要求，是英语写作的基础题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
素材积累 ＞＞
[开头句]
1. Hi, I'm Pauline Lee, and I'm 14 years old. （自我介绍）
2. This is my new classmate. （介绍他人）
3. Let me tell you something about me. （开篇引入）
[中间句]
1. I live in Singapore with my big family. （居住情况）
2. My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite place is the Great Wall. （个人喜好）
3. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. （兴趣爱好）
[结尾句]
1. Would you like to be my friend? （发出邀请）
2. Please write to me soon and tell me about yourself. （期盼回复）
[名言警句]
1. A life without a friend is a life without sunshine. 人生没有朋友，犹如生活没有阳光。
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
写作演练＞＞
假如你是 Linda Black，你在网上新交了一个朋友王林。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，向你的同学们介绍一下他。
要求:1. 须包含表格中的全部信息，可适当发挥;2. 60词左右。
[思路点拨]
1. 思路:① 重点介绍王林的基本情况;② 从姓名、年龄、班级、年级等几个方面着手，让文章层次分明，逻辑性强。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. Hi, I'm Pauline Lee, and I'm 14 years old. （自我介绍）
2. This is my new classmate. （介绍他人）
3. Let me tell you something about me. （开篇引入）
[中间句]
1. I live in Singapore with my big family. （居住情况）
2. My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite place is the Great Wall. （个人喜好）
3. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. （兴趣爱好）
[结尾句]
1. Would you like to be my friend? （发出邀请）
2. Please write to me soon and tell me about yourself. （期盼回复）
[名言警句]
1. A life without a friend is a life without sunshine. 人生没有朋友，犹如生活没有阳光。
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
写作演练＞＞
假如你是 Linda Black，你在网上新交了一个朋友王林。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，向你的同学们介绍一下他。
要求:1. 须包含表格中的全部信息，可适当发挥;2. 60词左右。
[思路点拨]
1. 思路:① 重点介绍王林的基本情况;② 从姓名、年龄、班级、年级等几个方面着手，让文章层次分明，逻辑性强。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
写作专训 Project
One possible version:
My name is Linda Black. I have a new friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is 13 years old. Wang Lin is from Beijing, China. He is a middle school student. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. Wang Lin lives with his father, his mother and his brother. His favourite sport is basketball. I'm happy to be friends with him. He is a nice boy.
One possible version:
My name is Linda Black. I have a new friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is 13 years old. Wang Lin is from Beijing, China. He is a middle school student. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. Wang Lin lives with his father, his mother and his brother. His favourite sport is basketball. I'm happy to be friends with him. He is a nice boy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语介绍类短文写作题，解题思路：①明确写作身份为Linda Black，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；②需覆盖王林的姓名、年龄、籍贯、年级班级、家庭情况、喜好等全部指定信息；③结构上采用“引出新朋友—介绍具体信息—表达交友感受”的逻辑，控制字数在60词左右，确保语言简洁流畅。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇说明自己身份并引出新朋友王林；2. 依次介绍王林的基本信息：姓名、年龄、来自北京、七年级三班；3. 补充家庭情况（与父母、哥哥同住）和喜好（篮球）；4. 表达与王林交友的开心，确保所有信息点完整，符合一般现在时和第三人称的要求。
【答案】
My name is Linda Black. I have a new friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is 13 years old. Wang Lin is from Beijing, China. He is a middle school student. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. Wang Lin lives with his father, his mother and his brother. His favourite sport is basketball. I'm happy to be friends with him. He is a nice boy.
【知识点】
英语介绍类短文写作、一般现在时运用、英语写作基本规范
【点评】
本题考查初中英语基础写作能力，要求学生整合指定信息，运用正确时态人称完成交友介绍类短文，符合日常交际语境，是常见的写作训练题，侧重基础语言运用。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语介绍类短文写作题，解题思路：①明确写作身份为Linda Black，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；②需覆盖王林的姓名、年龄、籍贯、年级班级、家庭情况、喜好等全部指定信息；③结构上采用“引出新朋友—介绍具体信息—表达交友感受”的逻辑，控制字数在60词左右，确保语言简洁流畅。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇说明自己身份并引出新朋友王林；2. 依次介绍王林的基本信息：姓名、年龄、来自北京、七年级三班；3. 补充家庭情况（与父母、哥哥同住）和喜好（篮球）；4. 表达与王林交友的开心，确保所有信息点完整，符合一般现在时和第三人称的要求。
【答案】
My name is Linda Black. I have a new friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is 13 years old. Wang Lin is from Beijing, China. He is a middle school student. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. Wang Lin lives with his father, his mother and his brother. His favourite sport is basketball. I'm happy to be friends with him. He is a nice boy.
【知识点】
英语介绍类短文写作、一般现在时运用、英语写作基本规范
【点评】
本题考查初中英语基础写作能力，要求学生整合指定信息，运用正确时态人称完成交友介绍类短文，符合日常交际语境，是常见的写作训练题，侧重基础语言运用。
【难度系数】
0.6
