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Ⅴ. 写作指导
英语课上，老师要求大家根据提示以“My Memory Challenge”为主题写一篇短文。
提示：
（1）点明自己面临的记忆挑战；
（2）描述自己设定的目标；
（3）具体说明自己尝试的解决方法；
英语课上，老师要求大家根据提示以“My Memory Challenge”为主题写一篇短文。
提示：
（1）点明自己面临的记忆挑战；
（2）描述自己设定的目标；
（3）具体说明自己尝试的解决方法；
答案
参考范文：
My Memory Challenge
I used to face a big memory challenge: every time I finished reciting new English words, I would forget most of them only a few days later, and I could hardly keep new vocabulary in mind for long.
To change this situation, I set a clear goal: I would master all the 90 core words in Unit 2 of our textbook within one week, make sure I could spell every word correctly and use them to make proper sentences.
Then I tried many practical methods. First, I split each long word into small parts according to its pronunciation, which made it far easier to remember. Second, I made small word cards and took them with me, I spent 10 minutes reviewing words during the break between classes. Third, I asked my deskmate to test my word memory every evening. Finally, I finished my challenge successfully, and my ability to memorize new words improved a lot.
My Memory Challenge
I used to face a big memory challenge: every time I finished reciting new English words, I would forget most of them only a few days later, and I could hardly keep new vocabulary in mind for long.
To change this situation, I set a clear goal: I would master all the 90 core words in Unit 2 of our textbook within one week, make sure I could spell every word correctly and use them to make proper sentences.
Then I tried many practical methods. First, I split each long word into small parts according to its pronunciation, which made it far easier to remember. Second, I made small word cards and took them with me, I spent 10 minutes reviewing words during the break between classes. Third, I asked my deskmate to test my word memory every evening. Finally, I finished my challenge successfully, and my ability to memorize new words improved a lot.
解析
【分析】
写作时需紧扣提示的三个核心要点展开：首先点明自身面临的具体记忆挑战（如记英语单词易遗忘等）；其次明确设定的可落地目标（如在规定时间内掌握特定内容并达到相应要求）；最后详细说明尝试的具体解决方法，确保内容具体、结构清晰，贴合主题“My Memory Challenge”。
【解析】
按照提示要求分三部分组织内容：1. 点明记忆挑战：描述记英语单词后易遗忘的具体问题；2. 设定目标：明确一周内掌握单元核心词，要求会拼写并能造句；3. 说明方法：列举拆分单词、制作卡片复习、同桌测试等具体方法，最终体现挑战的完成情况，使文章完整充实。
【答案】
参考范文：
My Memory Challenge
I used to face a big memory challenge: every time I finished reciting new English words, I would forget most of them only a few days later, and I could hardly keep new vocabulary in mind for long.
To change this situation, I set a clear goal: I would master all the 90 core words in Unit 2 of our textbook within one week, make sure I could spell every word correctly and use them to make proper sentences.
Then I tried many practical methods. First, I split each long word into small parts according to its pronunciation, which made it far easier to remember. Second, I made small word cards and took them with me, I spent 10 minutes reviewing words during the break between classes. Third, I asked my deskmate to test my word memory every evening. Finally, I finished my challenge successfully, and my ability to memorize new words improved a lot.
【知识点】
英语话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，严格遵循提示的三个要点展开，内容具体充实，有明确的事例和方法，结构清晰，符合英语写作的基本要求，能完整展现记忆挑战的过程与结果。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作时需紧扣提示的三个核心要点展开：首先点明自身面临的具体记忆挑战（如记英语单词易遗忘等）；其次明确设定的可落地目标（如在规定时间内掌握特定内容并达到相应要求）；最后详细说明尝试的具体解决方法，确保内容具体、结构清晰，贴合主题“My Memory Challenge”。
【解析】
按照提示要求分三部分组织内容：1. 点明记忆挑战：描述记英语单词后易遗忘的具体问题；2. 设定目标：明确一周内掌握单元核心词，要求会拼写并能造句；3. 说明方法：列举拆分单词、制作卡片复习、同桌测试等具体方法，最终体现挑战的完成情况，使文章完整充实。
【答案】
参考范文：
My Memory Challenge
I used to face a big memory challenge: every time I finished reciting new English words, I would forget most of them only a few days later, and I could hardly keep new vocabulary in mind for long.
To change this situation, I set a clear goal: I would master all the 90 core words in Unit 2 of our textbook within one week, make sure I could spell every word correctly and use them to make proper sentences.
Then I tried many practical methods. First, I split each long word into small parts according to its pronunciation, which made it far easier to remember. Second, I made small word cards and took them with me, I spent 10 minutes reviewing words during the break between classes. Third, I asked my deskmate to test my word memory every evening. Finally, I finished my challenge successfully, and my ability to memorize new words improved a lot.
【知识点】
英语话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，严格遵循提示的三个要点展开，内容具体充实，有明确的事例和方法，结构清晰，符合英语写作的基本要求，能完整展现记忆挑战的过程与结果。
【难度系数】
0.6
