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四、书面表达。
学校英语社团将举办以“LuckyMoney(压岁钱) Budget”为主题的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：你对自己的压岁钱做过预算吗?平时你是怎么规划使用压岁钱的?有什么新的计划和打算?可适当发挥，不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Learning to manage money is reallyimportant.
I hope all of you can also planfor your lucky money. Thank you forlistening!
学校英语社团将举办以“LuckyMoney(压岁钱) Budget”为主题的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：你对自己的压岁钱做过预算吗?平时你是怎么规划使用压岁钱的?有什么新的计划和打算?可适当发挥，不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Learning to manage money is reallyimportant.
Today, I'd like to talk about how to manage lucky money.
In the past, I never made a budget for my lucky money. I just spent it without thinking, buying snacks and drinks. Soon, I had nothing left. After reading an article, I realized making a budget would help me save money for important things. I have decided to change. First, I will put my lucky money into my piggy bank. Then, I will divide the money into three parts. The first part is for books. The second part will be used to help people in need. The last part is for daily needs. I will write down what I buy to see how I spend the money.
I hope all of you can also planfor your lucky money. Thank you forlistening!
答案
Today, I'd like to talk about how to manage lucky money.
In the past, I never made a budget for my lucky money. I just spent it without thinking, buying snacks and drinks. Soon, I had nothing left.
After reading an article, I realized making a budget would help me save money for important things. I have decided to change. First, I will put my lucky money into my piggy bank. Then, I will divide the money into three parts. The first part is for books. The second part will be used to help people in need. The last part is for daily needs. I will write down what I buy to see how I spend the money.
In the past, I never made a budget for my lucky money. I just spent it without thinking, buying snacks and drinks. Soon, I had nothing left.
After reading an article, I realized making a budget would help me save money for important things. I have decided to change. First, I will put my lucky money into my piggy bank. Then, I will divide the money into three parts. The first part is for books. The second part will be used to help people in need. The last part is for daily needs. I will write down what I buy to see how I spend the money.
解析
【分析】本题要求完成以“LuckyMoney Budget”为主题的英语演讲稿，需结合已给开头和结尾，涵盖三个核心要点：自身是否对压岁钱做过预算、平时如何规划使用压岁钱、新的计划与打算。写作时要注意演讲稿的口语化特点，时态需结合过去（描述过往做法）和将来（阐述未来计划），内容要具体充实，满足不少于80词的要求，紧扣主题展开。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接已给开头句，引出“管理压岁钱”的主题；2. 描述过去的情况：未对压岁钱做预算，随意购买零食、饮料等物品，很快花光；3. 说明改变的契机：阅读文章后意识到预算能帮助储蓄重要资金；4. 阐述规划：将压岁钱存入储蓄罐，分成三部分（用于买书、帮助有需要的人、日常需求），记录消费明细；5. 自然过渡到已给结尾，呼应主题。
【答案】Today, I'd like to talk about how to manage lucky money.
In the past, I never made a budget for my lucky money. I just spent it without thinking, buying snacks and drinks. Soon, I had nothing left.
After reading an article, I realized making a budget would help me save money for important things. I have decided to change. First, I will put my lucky money into my piggy bank. Then, I will divide the money into three parts. The first part is for books. The second part will be used to help people in need. The last part is for daily needs. I will write down what I buy to see how I spend the money.
【知识点】英语书面表达（演讲稿）、一般过去时、一般将来时
【点评】本文紧扣“压岁钱预算”主题，结构清晰，通过对比过往与现在的做法，体现了对金钱管理的认知提升，内容具体充实，语言流畅，符合演讲稿的要求和字数规定。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接已给开头句，引出“管理压岁钱”的主题；2. 描述过去的情况：未对压岁钱做预算，随意购买零食、饮料等物品，很快花光；3. 说明改变的契机：阅读文章后意识到预算能帮助储蓄重要资金；4. 阐述规划：将压岁钱存入储蓄罐，分成三部分（用于买书、帮助有需要的人、日常需求），记录消费明细；5. 自然过渡到已给结尾，呼应主题。
【答案】Today, I'd like to talk about how to manage lucky money.
In the past, I never made a budget for my lucky money. I just spent it without thinking, buying snacks and drinks. Soon, I had nothing left.
After reading an article, I realized making a budget would help me save money for important things. I have decided to change. First, I will put my lucky money into my piggy bank. Then, I will divide the money into three parts. The first part is for books. The second part will be used to help people in need. The last part is for daily needs. I will write down what I buy to see how I spend the money.
【知识点】英语书面表达（演讲稿）、一般过去时、一般将来时
【点评】本文紧扣“压岁钱预算”主题，结构清晰，通过对比过往与现在的做法，体现了对金钱管理的认知提升，内容具体充实，语言流畅，符合演讲稿的要求和字数规定。
【难度系数】0.6
