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假设你是某国际学校的学生会成员李华,你发现学校图书馆存在一些问题,请给王校长写一封80—100词的建议信,内容包括:
1.开放时间较短,无法满足学生课后需求；
2.书籍陈旧,尤其是科技类；
3.缺少安静学习区。
参考词汇:improve,especially (adv. 尤其),create (v. 创造)
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions⁰ on how to improve our school library.
First, I would like to suggest keeping the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p. m., more students can study or borrow books after school. ⑥
Second, I think it will be a good idea to add new books. Many books in the library are old, especially in science and technology. Buying newer books and popular storybooks would make stud
more interested in② reading.
Moreover³, I have a suggestion for creating a quiet area. A special quiet space would help students who need to pay attention to⁴ their homework or exams.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. These changes can make our library more helpful and fun. Thank you for⑤ reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点词块
①make suggestions 给建议
②make... more interested in 使……更感兴趣
③moreover 此外(连接副词)
④pay attention to 注意
⑤thank you for 为……表示感谢
高分句子
⑥If it stays open until 6:30 p. m., more students can study or borrow books after school. 如果图书馆开放到下午六点半,更多学生就能在放学后在这里学习或者借书。(if引导条件状语从句)
假设你是某国际学校的学生会成员李华,你发现学校图书馆存在一些问题,请给王校长写一封80—100词的建议信,内容包括:
1.开放时间较短,无法满足学生课后需求；
2.书籍陈旧,尤其是科技类；
3.缺少安静学习区。
参考词汇:improve,especially (adv. 尤其),create (v. 创造)
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架:
优秀范文:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions⁰ on how to improve our school library.
First, I would like to suggest keeping the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p. m., more students can study or borrow books after school. ⑥
Second, I think it will be a good idea to add new books. Many books in the library are old, especially in science and technology. Buying newer books and popular storybooks would make stud
more interested in② reading.Moreover³, I have a suggestion for creating a quiet area. A special quiet space would help students who need to pay attention to⁴ their homework or exams.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. These changes can make our library more helpful and fun. Thank you for⑤ reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点词块
①make suggestions 给建议
②make... more interested in 使……更感兴趣
③moreover 此外(连接副词)
④pay attention to 注意
⑤thank you for 为……表示感谢
高分句子
⑥If it stays open until 6:30 p. m., more students can study or borrow books after school. 如果图书馆开放到下午六点半,更多学生就能在放学后在这里学习或者借书。(if引导条件状语从句)
答案
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on how to improve our school library.
First, I suggest keeping the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p.m., more students can study or borrow books there after school.
Second, we should add new books, because many books in the library are very old, especially the books about science and technology.
Moreover, we can create a quiet study area for students to focus on their schoolwork.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Thank you for reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on how to improve our school library.
First, I suggest keeping the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p.m., more students can study or borrow books there after school.
Second, we should add new books, because many books in the library are very old, especially the books about science and technology.
Moreover, we can create a quiet study area for students to focus on their schoolwork.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Thank you for reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封给王校长的建议信，属于英语应用文写作。需明确体裁为建议信，时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称。写作时要紧扣三个核心要点：延长图书馆开放时间以满足学生课后需求、更新陈旧书籍（尤其是科技类）、创建安静学习区。开头需表明写信目的，中间分点阐述建议，结尾表达希望与感谢，同时要使用题目给出的参考词汇，控制词数在80-100之间，符合书信格式。
【解析】按照建议信的标准结构写作：1. 开头：以学生会成员李华的身份，说明写信是为了给学校图书馆提改进建议；2. 分点提建议：①针对开放时间短，建议延长至下午6:30，方便学生课后学习或借书；②针对书籍陈旧，尤其是科技类，建议添置新书；③针对缺少安静学习区，建议创建该区域供学生专注学习；3. 结尾：表达希望建议有用，感谢校长阅读。写作时注意使用参考词汇，保持时态正确，逻辑连贯，符合书信格式和词数要求。
【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on how to improve our school library.
First, I suggest keeping the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p.m., more students can study or borrow books there after school.
Second, we should add new books, because many books in the library are very old, especially the books about science and technology.
Moreover, we can create a quiet study area for students to focus on their schoolwork.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Thank you for reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、建议信格式
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，恰当运用参考词汇，符合书信格式和词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀建议信。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照建议信的标准结构写作：1. 开头：以学生会成员李华的身份，说明写信是为了给学校图书馆提改进建议；2. 分点提建议：①针对开放时间短，建议延长至下午6:30，方便学生课后学习或借书；②针对书籍陈旧，尤其是科技类，建议添置新书；③针对缺少安静学习区，建议创建该区域供学生专注学习；3. 结尾：表达希望建议有用，感谢校长阅读。写作时注意使用参考词汇，保持时态正确，逻辑连贯，符合书信格式和词数要求。
【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on how to improve our school library.
First, I suggest keeping the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p.m., more students can study or borrow books there after school.
Second, we should add new books, because many books in the library are very old, especially the books about science and technology.
Moreover, we can create a quiet study area for students to focus on their schoolwork.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Thank you for reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、建议信格式
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，恰当运用参考词汇，符合书信格式和词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀建议信。
【难度系数】0.5
