I Think and write(书面表达)
你也一定很爱你的家人吧!在一些特殊的日子里,你做过哪些让他们开心的事情?请结合下面的思维导图写一篇50词左右的短文。

Making my happy
你也一定很爱你的家人吧!在一些特殊的日子里,你做过哪些让他们开心的事情?请结合下面的思维导图写一篇50词左右的短文。
Making my happy
答案
Making my mother happy
Last Sunday was my mother's birthday. I cleaned the whole house and cooked a bowl of noodles for her. My mother was very happy and said "Thank you, my dear child". I felt so nice and I love my warm family very much.
Last Sunday was my mother's birthday. I cleaned the whole house and cooked a bowl of noodles for her. My mother was very happy and said "Thank you, my dear child". I felt so nice and I love my warm family very much.
解析
【分析】
本题是结合思维导图的英语书面表达题,解题思路为:先确定写作主题,再根据思维导图的四个问题(时间、对象、对方感受、自身感受),用一般过去时串联信息,组织成50词左右的通顺短文,确保内容贴合生活、语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 确定主题:以“Making my mother happy”为标题;
2. 回答时间问题:用“Last Sunday was my mother's birthday”点明特殊日子;
3. 说明对象与做的事:明确是为妈妈,写具体行动“cleaned the whole house and cooked a bowl of noodles”;
4. 描述对方感受:写妈妈的反应“was very happy and said 'Thank you, my dear child'”;
5. 表达自身感受:写自己的心情“felt so nice and I love my warm family very much”,调整语句使整体连贯。
【答案】
Making my mother happy
Last Sunday was my mother's birthday. I cleaned the whole house and cooked a bowl of noodles for her. My mother was very happy and said "Thank you, my dear child". I felt so nice and I love my warm family very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;一般过去时;情景写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图引导写作,贴近生活场景,考查学生信息整合与英语表达能力,学生只需按思维导图梳理内容即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是结合思维导图的英语书面表达题,解题思路为:先确定写作主题,再根据思维导图的四个问题(时间、对象、对方感受、自身感受),用一般过去时串联信息,组织成50词左右的通顺短文,确保内容贴合生活、语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 确定主题:以“Making my mother happy”为标题;
2. 回答时间问题:用“Last Sunday was my mother's birthday”点明特殊日子;
3. 说明对象与做的事:明确是为妈妈,写具体行动“cleaned the whole house and cooked a bowl of noodles”;
4. 描述对方感受:写妈妈的反应“was very happy and said 'Thank you, my dear child'”;
5. 表达自身感受:写自己的心情“felt so nice and I love my warm family very much”,调整语句使整体连贯。
【答案】
Making my mother happy
Last Sunday was my mother's birthday. I cleaned the whole house and cooked a bowl of noodles for her. My mother was very happy and said "Thank you, my dear child". I felt so nice and I love my warm family very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;一般过去时;情景写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图引导写作,贴近生活场景,考查学生信息整合与英语表达能力,学生只需按思维导图梳理内容即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
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