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审时态:一般现在时 审主题
《二十一世纪学生英文报》正在举办英语写作大赛,请以“My best friend”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你最好的朋友Simon。 审人称:以第三人称为主 审词数
My best friend
写作支架
开头 — 介绍最好的朋友的外貌 → Simon is my best friend. He has eyes and he always on his face. He is than me.
中间 — 介绍他的性格和擅长的事情 → He is . He help others. He always in need. When I , he always .（高分句式1）
He drawing and he is the Art Club at our school.
结尾 — 最好的朋友的未来计划和自己的感受 → Simon would like when he .（高分句式2）
I hope his dream .
I feel .
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智慧背囊
The only way to have a friend is to be one. 拥有朋友的唯一方法就是自己先成为一个朋友。
True friendship comes when the silence between two people is comfortable. 真正的友谊在于两人之间沉默时也感到舒适。
优秀范文
My best friend
Simon is my best friend. He has big eyes and he always has a smile on his face. He is taller and stronger¹ than me.
He is both kind and helpful. He is always ready to help others. He always gives up his seat to someone² on the bus in need². When I feel unhappy, he always tries to cheer me up. He is good at² drawing and he is a member of the Art Club at our school.
Simon would like to be an artist when he grows up.³ I hope his dream can come true. I feel very lucky to have such a good friend.
亮点评析
①形容词的比较级是本单元的重点语法,达到了学以致用的目的。
②give up one's seat to sb.、in need和be good at的运用说明了人物的品性和擅长的事情。
③含when引导的时间状语从句的主从复合句的运用表明了人物的未来计划。
审时态:一般现在时 审主题
《二十一世纪学生英文报》正在举办英语写作大赛,请以“My best friend”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你最好的朋友Simon。 审人称:以第三人称为主 审词数
My best friend
写作支架
开头 — 介绍最好的朋友的外貌 → Simon is my best friend. He has eyes and he always on his face. He is than me.
中间 — 介绍他的性格和擅长的事情 → He is . He help others. He always in need. When I , he always .（高分句式1）
He drawing and he is the Art Club at our school.
结尾 — 最好的朋友的未来计划和自己的感受 → Simon would like when he .（高分句式2）
I hope his dream .
I feel .
8
智慧背囊
The only way to have a friend is to be one. 拥有朋友的唯一方法就是自己先成为一个朋友。
True friendship comes when the silence between two people is comfortable. 真正的友谊在于两人之间沉默时也感到舒适。
优秀范文
My best friend
Simon is my best friend. He has big eyes and he always has a smile on his face. He is taller and stronger¹ than me.
He is both kind and helpful. He is always ready to help others. He always gives up his seat to someone² on the bus in need². When I feel unhappy, he always tries to cheer me up. He is good at² drawing and he is a member of the Art Club at our school.
Simon would like to be an artist when he grows up.³ I hope his dream can come true. I feel very lucky to have such a good friend.
亮点评析
①形容词的比较级是本单元的重点语法,达到了学以致用的目的。
②give up one's seat to sb.、in need和be good at的运用说明了人物的品性和擅长的事情。
③含when引导的时间状语从句的主从复合句的运用表明了人物的未来计划。
答案
【解析】：本题是译林版八年级上册的人物主题写作题，要求以"My best friend"为题，使用一般现在时、以第三人称为主完成80词左右的短文，写作可按照三步完成：
1. 开篇直接点明介绍对象是Simon，从五官、身高维度描述外貌，合理运用本单元核心语法形容词比较级，贴合写作要求；
2. 中间部分围绕友善、乐于助人的性格展开，搭配公交让座、安慰情绪低落的自己的具体事例体现人物品性，同时介绍他擅长画画、是学校美术俱乐部成员的特长，使用本单元重点短语be ready to、give up one's seat to sb.、be good at，搭配when引导的时间状语从句提升句式丰富度；
3. 结尾说明Simon未来想成为艺术家的计划，表达对他梦想成真的祝愿，以及自己拥有这样的好友十分幸运的感受，整体内容完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. big
2. has a smile
3. taller and stronger
4. both kind and helpful
5. is always ready to
6. gives up his seat to someone
7. feel unhappy
8. tries to cheer me up
9. is good at
10. a member of
11. to be an artist
12. grows up
13. can come true
14. very lucky to have such a good friend
完整参考范文：
My best friend
Simon is my best friend. He has big eyes and he always has a smile on his face. He is taller and stronger than me.
He is both kind and helpful. He is always ready to help others. He always gives up his seat to someone on the bus in need. When I feel unhappy, he always tries to cheer me up. He is good at drawing and he is a member of the Art Club at our school.
Simon would like to be an artist when he grows up. I hope his dream can come true. I feel very lucky to have such a good friend.
1. 开篇直接点明介绍对象是Simon，从五官、身高维度描述外貌，合理运用本单元核心语法形容词比较级，贴合写作要求；
2. 中间部分围绕友善、乐于助人的性格展开，搭配公交让座、安慰情绪低落的自己的具体事例体现人物品性，同时介绍他擅长画画、是学校美术俱乐部成员的特长，使用本单元重点短语be ready to、give up one's seat to sb.、be good at，搭配when引导的时间状语从句提升句式丰富度；
3. 结尾说明Simon未来想成为艺术家的计划，表达对他梦想成真的祝愿，以及自己拥有这样的好友十分幸运的感受，整体内容完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. big
2. has a smile
3. taller and stronger
4. both kind and helpful
5. is always ready to
6. gives up his seat to someone
7. feel unhappy
8. tries to cheer me up
9. is good at
10. a member of
11. to be an artist
12. grows up
13. can come true
14. very lucky to have such a good friend
完整参考范文：
My best friend
Simon is my best friend. He has big eyes and he always has a smile on his face. He is taller and stronger than me.
He is both kind and helpful. He is always ready to help others. He always gives up his seat to someone on the bus in need. When I feel unhappy, he always tries to cheer me up. He is good at drawing and he is a member of the Art Club at our school.
Simon would like to be an artist when he grows up. I hope his dream can come true. I feel very lucky to have such a good friend.
