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六、书面表达。10分
班会上需要同学们介绍自己喜欢的饭店。请根据图片提示,帮Li Hua介绍他
喜欢的饭店。要求语句通顺、连贯,不少于5句话不含已给出内容。
Hello, I'm Li Hua. This is my favourite
restaurant. It's not far from my home.
班会上需要同学们介绍自己喜欢的饭店。请根据图片提示,帮Li Hua介绍他
喜欢的饭店。要求语句通顺、连贯,不少于5句话不含已给出内容。
Hello, I'm Li Hua. This is my favourite
restaurant. It's not far from my home.
When I am hungry or thirsty, I can go to the restaurant.
On the first floor, there is a snack bar and a juice bar.
I can order some food and drinks.
I can enjoy them on the second floor.
I like the sandwiches best.
They're really delicious. What a nice restaurant!
答案
示例：
Hello, I'm Li Hua. This is my
favourite restaurant. It's not far from my
home. When I am hungry or thirsty, I can
go to the restaurant. On the first floor,
there is a snack bar and a juice bar. I can
order some food and drinks. I can enjoy
them on the second floor. I like the
sandwiches best. They're really delicious.
What a nice restaurant!
Hello, I'm Li Hua. This is my
favourite restaurant. It's not far from my
home. When I am hungry or thirsty, I can
go to the restaurant. On the first floor,
there is a snack bar and a juice bar. I can
order some food and drinks. I can enjoy
them on the second floor. I like the
sandwiches best. They're really delicious.
What a nice restaurant!
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：要结合图片信息介绍自己最喜欢的饭店，补充内容不少于5句，语句通顺。第一步先梳理图片给出的所有信息：饭店一共两层，1楼设置了小吃吧和果汁吧，可以提供食物和饮品，2楼是摆放了多套桌椅的用餐区域。接下来按照合理的逻辑顺承给出的开头：先说明自己光顾这家店的场景，再按照从一楼到二楼的空间顺序依次介绍饭店的布局和功能，最后补充自己的饮食喜好、表达对这家店的喜爱，就能自然写出符合要求的完整内容，还能把所有图片提示信息都用到。
【解析】
我们按照空间顺序逐步完成写作：
1. 承接开头给出的内容，先说明自己的到店场景：When I am hungry or thirsty, I can go to the restaurant.
2. 接下来介绍一楼的布局，对应图中1F的两个区域：On the first floor, there is a snack bar and a juice bar.
3. 接着说明一楼的功能：I can order some food and drinks.
4. 再介绍二楼的功能，对应图中2F的用餐区：I can enjoy them on the second floor.
5. 补充个人喜好，贴合小吃吧的食物提示：I like the sandwiches best. They're really delicious.
6. 最后收尾抒发感受，完成全文：What a nice restaurant!
所有内容完全贴合图片提示，语法正确，语句连贯，满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】
Hello, I'm Li Hua. This is my favourite restaurant. It's not far from my home. When I am hungry or thirsty, I can go to the restaurant. On the first floor, there is a snack bar and a juice bar. I can order some food and drinks. I can enjoy them on the second floor. I like the sandwiches best. They're really delicious. What a nice restaurant!
【知识点】
there be句型，地点类书面表达
【点评】
本题是看图辅助的英语介绍类写作题，引导学生按照空间顺序梳理场所信息，合理使用基础句型串联内容，既考察学生对图片信息的提取能力，也锻炼了学生用简单英语描述身边场所的表达能力，整体要求贴合低年级英语写作的考察目标。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：要结合图片信息介绍自己最喜欢的饭店，补充内容不少于5句，语句通顺。第一步先梳理图片给出的所有信息：饭店一共两层，1楼设置了小吃吧和果汁吧，可以提供食物和饮品，2楼是摆放了多套桌椅的用餐区域。接下来按照合理的逻辑顺承给出的开头：先说明自己光顾这家店的场景，再按照从一楼到二楼的空间顺序依次介绍饭店的布局和功能，最后补充自己的饮食喜好、表达对这家店的喜爱，就能自然写出符合要求的完整内容，还能把所有图片提示信息都用到。
【解析】
我们按照空间顺序逐步完成写作：
1. 承接开头给出的内容，先说明自己的到店场景：When I am hungry or thirsty, I can go to the restaurant.
2. 接下来介绍一楼的布局，对应图中1F的两个区域：On the first floor, there is a snack bar and a juice bar.
3. 接着说明一楼的功能：I can order some food and drinks.
4. 再介绍二楼的功能，对应图中2F的用餐区：I can enjoy them on the second floor.
5. 补充个人喜好，贴合小吃吧的食物提示：I like the sandwiches best. They're really delicious.
6. 最后收尾抒发感受，完成全文：What a nice restaurant!
所有内容完全贴合图片提示，语法正确，语句连贯，满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】
Hello, I'm Li Hua. This is my favourite restaurant. It's not far from my home. When I am hungry or thirsty, I can go to the restaurant. On the first floor, there is a snack bar and a juice bar. I can order some food and drinks. I can enjoy them on the second floor. I like the sandwiches best. They're really delicious. What a nice restaurant!
【知识点】
there be句型，地点类书面表达
【点评】
本题是看图辅助的英语介绍类写作题，引导学生按照空间顺序梳理场所信息，合理使用基础句型串联内容，既考察学生对图片信息的提取能力，也锻炼了学生用简单英语描述身边场所的表达能力，整体要求贴合低年级英语写作的考察目标。
【难度系数】
0.7
