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[2025 河北张家口调研]请认真阅读下列小故事，并根据故事情节，续写故事的发展和结局。
Once upon a time, a young crocodile (鳄鱼) swam to a bank and found a monkey. He said to the monkey, "My mother wants to invite you to dinner. She prepares lots of fruit for you."
"I'd like to, but I can't swim," said the monkey. "I can carry you to the other side of the river," the crocodile said.
"That's great!" The monkey was very happy and jumped onto the back of the crocodile.
The crocodile swam to the middle of the river and said to the monkey, "To tell the truth, it's my mother's birthday today. I will send you to her as her delicious dinner. She likes a monkey's heart best. Ha ha ha..."
写作要求：(1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)词数：70 词左右；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
提示词：in no hurry 不慌不忙地；let sb down 使某人失望；bank 河岸
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Once upon a time, a young crocodile (鳄鱼) swam to a bank and found a monkey. He said to the monkey, "My mother wants to invite you to dinner. She prepares lots of fruit for you."
"I'd like to, but I can't swim," said the monkey. "I can carry you to the other side of the river," the crocodile said.
"That's great!" The monkey was very happy and jumped onto the back of the crocodile.
The crocodile swam to the middle of the river and said to the monkey, "To tell the truth, it's my mother's birthday today. I will send you to her as her delicious dinner. She likes a monkey's heart best. Ha ha ha..."
写作要求：(1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)词数：70 词左右；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
提示词：in no hurry 不慌不忙地；let sb down 使某人失望；bank 河岸
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答案
【参考范文】
Hearing that, the monkey became surprised,
but right away he had an idea. He said to the
crocodile in no hurry, "I'm badly sorry. I came out
so fast that I forgot my heart in the tree on the side
of the bank. I need to get it back. "
In order not to let his mother down, the
crocodile had to swim back to the bank. As soon as
they arrived at the bank, the monkey quickly
jumped off the crocodile and picked up a stone at
the same time. He jumped onto a tree and threw
the stone at the crocodile and shouted, "Give you
my heart!" What a cute and wise monkey!
Hearing that, the monkey became surprised,
but right away he had an idea. He said to the
crocodile in no hurry, "I'm badly sorry. I came out
so fast that I forgot my heart in the tree on the side
of the bank. I need to get it back. "
In order not to let his mother down, the
crocodile had to swim back to the bank. As soon as
they arrived at the bank, the monkey quickly
jumped off the crocodile and picked up a stone at
the same time. He jumped onto a tree and threw
the stone at the crocodile and shouted, "Give you
my heart!" What a cute and wise monkey!
解析
【分析】
首先梳理前文的核心冲突：鳄鱼驮着猴子到河中央，打算把猴子的心送给自己妈妈当生日大餐，猴子身处危险境地。接下来我们顺着寓言故事的常见走向，设计猴子急中生智的脱身情节：首先要自然融入题干给出的三个提示词，先让猴子不慌不忙（in no hurry）编出“把心忘在岸边树上”的借口，抓住鳄鱼不想让妈妈失望（let sb down）的心理，哄骗鳄鱼游回河岸（bank），最后猴子上岸后立刻爬到树上成功脱险，整个情节逻辑通顺，同时控制总词数在要求范围内，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
1. 承接前文冲突：先写猴子听到鳄鱼的话后立刻想出脱身妙计，用提示词in no hurry引出猴子的话术，谎称自己出门太急把心落在岸边的树上了，需要回去取。
2. 推动情节发展：描写鳄鱼的考量，为了不让妈妈失望，用到提示词let sb down，只能掉头往河岸游，对应提示词bank。
3. 收尾结局：写刚到岸边猴子就立刻跳下鳄鱼背，爬到树上成功脱身，完成整个故事，情节连贯完整，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
Hearing that, the monkey became surprised, but right away he had an idea. He said to the crocodile in no hurry, "I'm badly sorry. I came out so fast that I forgot my heart in the tree on the side of the bank. I need to get it back. "
In order not to let his mother down, the crocodile had to swim back to the bank. As soon as they arrived at the bank, the monkey quickly jumped off the crocodile and picked up a stone at the same time. He jumped onto a tree and threw the stone at the crocodile and shouted, "Give you my heart!" What a cute and wise monkey!
【知识点】
英语故事续写，提示词运用，叙事逻辑构建
【点评】
本题属于寓言类短文续写题，既考查学生的英语语句组织和表达能力，也锻炼学生的逻辑想象能力，要求续写内容和前文情节衔接自然，还要将给出的三个提示词合理融入情节，避免生硬堆砌，同时注意词数符合题干要求即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先梳理前文的核心冲突：鳄鱼驮着猴子到河中央，打算把猴子的心送给自己妈妈当生日大餐，猴子身处危险境地。接下来我们顺着寓言故事的常见走向，设计猴子急中生智的脱身情节：首先要自然融入题干给出的三个提示词，先让猴子不慌不忙（in no hurry）编出“把心忘在岸边树上”的借口，抓住鳄鱼不想让妈妈失望（let sb down）的心理，哄骗鳄鱼游回河岸（bank），最后猴子上岸后立刻爬到树上成功脱险，整个情节逻辑通顺，同时控制总词数在要求范围内，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
1. 承接前文冲突：先写猴子听到鳄鱼的话后立刻想出脱身妙计，用提示词in no hurry引出猴子的话术，谎称自己出门太急把心落在岸边的树上了，需要回去取。
2. 推动情节发展：描写鳄鱼的考量，为了不让妈妈失望，用到提示词let sb down，只能掉头往河岸游，对应提示词bank。
3. 收尾结局：写刚到岸边猴子就立刻跳下鳄鱼背，爬到树上成功脱身，完成整个故事，情节连贯完整，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
Hearing that, the monkey became surprised, but right away he had an idea. He said to the crocodile in no hurry, "I'm badly sorry. I came out so fast that I forgot my heart in the tree on the side of the bank. I need to get it back. "
In order not to let his mother down, the crocodile had to swim back to the bank. As soon as they arrived at the bank, the monkey quickly jumped off the crocodile and picked up a stone at the same time. He jumped onto a tree and threw the stone at the crocodile and shouted, "Give you my heart!" What a cute and wise monkey!
【知识点】
英语故事续写，提示词运用，叙事逻辑构建
【点评】
本题属于寓言类短文续写题，既考查学生的英语语句组织和表达能力，也锻炼学生的逻辑想象能力，要求续写内容和前文情节衔接自然，还要将给出的三个提示词合理融入情节，避免生硬堆砌，同时注意词数符合题干要求即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
