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（二）书面表达。（满分20分）
岁月有悠然瞬间，生活有松弛时刻。你校英文报正在举办以“A relaxing experience”为题的征文活动。请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，分享一次令你身心放松的经历。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息；
2. 100词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
A relaxing experience
Everyone has his or her own way to relax when feeling stressed. The most relaxing one I want to share is to
岁月有悠然瞬间，生活有松弛时刻。你校英文报正在举办以“A relaxing experience”为题的征文活动。请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，分享一次令你身心放松的经历。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息；
2. 100词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
A relaxing experience
Everyone has his or her own way to relax when feeling stressed. The most relaxing one I want to share is to
答案
One possible version:
A relaxing experience
Everyone has his or her own way to relax when feeling stressed. The most relaxing one I want to share is to listen to music.
Several days ago, I felt much stressed because the final examination is coming. There were so many lessons that I had little time to review them all. What's worse, I was weak in Physics, so I stayed up late every night to study it, which made me feel anxious and tired. In order to relieve my pressure, I listened to some soft music during my break. After listening to music, I felt much relaxed, and I could continue to study more efficiently.
From this experience I learnt that when we feel stressed, we can set what we are doing aside and take a break for a while. After that, we can go on to do it more efficiently.
A relaxing experience
Everyone has his or her own way to relax when feeling stressed. The most relaxing one I want to share is to listen to music.
Several days ago, I felt much stressed because the final examination is coming. There were so many lessons that I had little time to review them all. What's worse, I was weak in Physics, so I stayed up late every night to study it, which made me feel anxious and tired. In order to relieve my pressure, I listened to some soft music during my break. After listening to music, I felt much relaxed, and I could continue to study more efficiently.
From this experience I learnt that when we feel stressed, we can set what we are doing aside and take a break for a while. After that, we can go on to do it more efficiently.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“A relaxing experience”为题，需涵盖三个核心要点：介绍自己的放松方式、分享对应的个人经历、说明该方式对自己的影响。解题思路为：首先选定一种具体的放松方式（如听音乐），接着结合自身真实的压力场景（如考试临近）详细描述经历，最后点明该方式带来的积极影响，写作时需注意语言通顺、无真实信息、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：明确自己最放松的方式是听音乐；
2. 分享经历：描述考试前因物理薄弱、熬夜学习而焦虑疲惫，为缓解压力选择听轻音乐；
3. 说明影响：听音乐后身心放松，后续学习效率提升，总结出劳逸结合的重要性。写作时注意用词准确，语句连贯，符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
A relaxing experience
Everyone has his or her own way to relax when feeling stressed. The most relaxing one I want to share is to listen to music.
Several days ago, I felt much stressed because the final examination is coming. There were so many lessons that I had little time to review them all. What's worse, I was weak in Physics, so I stayed up late every night to study it, which made me feel anxious and tired. In order to relieve my pressure, I listened to some soft music during my break. After listening to music, I felt much relaxed, and I could continue to study more efficiently.
From this experience I learnt that when we feel stressed, we can set what we are doing aside and take a break for a while. After that, we can go on to do it more efficiently.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，内容具体生动，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“A relaxing experience”为题，需涵盖三个核心要点：介绍自己的放松方式、分享对应的个人经历、说明该方式对自己的影响。解题思路为：首先选定一种具体的放松方式（如听音乐），接着结合自身真实的压力场景（如考试临近）详细描述经历，最后点明该方式带来的积极影响，写作时需注意语言通顺、无真实信息、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：明确自己最放松的方式是听音乐；
2. 分享经历：描述考试前因物理薄弱、熬夜学习而焦虑疲惫，为缓解压力选择听轻音乐；
3. 说明影响：听音乐后身心放松，后续学习效率提升，总结出劳逸结合的重要性。写作时注意用词准确，语句连贯，符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
A relaxing experience
Everyone has his or her own way to relax when feeling stressed. The most relaxing one I want to share is to listen to music.
Several days ago, I felt much stressed because the final examination is coming. There were so many lessons that I had little time to review them all. What's worse, I was weak in Physics, so I stayed up late every night to study it, which made me feel anxious and tired. In order to relieve my pressure, I listened to some soft music during my break. After listening to music, I felt much relaxed, and I could continue to study more efficiently.
From this experience I learnt that when we feel stressed, we can set what we are doing aside and take a break for a while. After that, we can go on to do it more efficiently.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，内容具体生动，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
