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在科技迅速发展的今天，人们的生活发生了很多变化，未来也一定会有新的变化。假定你是李华，你将参加你校英文广播站举办的以“Life in the Future”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇80－100词的英语短文。
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 时态：
4. 写作要点：①
▶▶思路点拨
（温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲）
▶▶结尾句
我认为未来将会越来越好，人们将过着更加美满的生活。（比较级＋and＋比较级）
翻译：
【名言积累】
1. The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. 未来属于那些相信自己梦想之美的人。
2. The best way to predict your future is to create it. 预测未来的最好方法就是创造未来。
▶▶小试身手
Life in the Future
在科技迅速发展的今天，人们的生活发生了很多变化，未来也一定会有新的变化。假定你是李华，你将参加你校英文广播站举办的以“Life in the Future”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇80－100词的英语短文。
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体：
说明文
2. 人称：
第一人称和第三人称
3. 时态：
一般将来时
4. 写作要点：①
交通方面
；②住房方面
；③机器人的使用方面
；④我的感受
▶▶思路点拨
（温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲）
▶▶结尾句
我认为未来将会越来越好，人们将过着更加美满的生活。（比较级＋and＋比较级）
翻译：
I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life.
【名言积累】
1. The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. 未来属于那些相信自己梦想之美的人。
2. The best way to predict your future is to create it. 预测未来的最好方法就是创造未来。
▶▶小试身手
Life in the Future
No one knows what the future will be like. But everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
For me, the future life must be very different from now. First, people will live anywhere they want, like living under the sea or on other planets.
Second, there will be fewer cars on the roads because they will fly in the sky.
Third, robots will play a part in our lives and help us do some easy jobs over and over again.
Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think our world will become better.
答案
▶▶审题指导
1. 说明文 2. 第一人称和第三人称 3. 一般将来时 4. ①交通方面 ②住房方面 ③机器人的使用方面 ④我的感受
▶▶思路点拨
Beginning: No one knows what the future will be like. Everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
Body:under the sea on other planets… flying cars help do easy jobs
Ending:My feelings
▶▶小试身手
One possible version:
【基础版】
Life in the Future
No one knows what the future will be like. But everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
For me, the future life must be very different from now. First, people will live anywhere they want, like living under the sea or on other planets. Second, there will be fewer cars on the roads because they will fly in the sky. Third, robots will play a part in our lives and help us do some easy jobs over and over again. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think our world will become better.
【提升版】
Life in the Future
Although no one knows what the future will be like, everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
As far as I know, the future life must be very different from now. To begin with, we will find the footprints of humans anywhere, under the sea or on other planets. Also, there will be more cars flying in the sky, taking us anywhere interesting. More importantly, robots will play a part in our lives and help with some simple and boring jobs. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life.
1. 说明文 2. 第一人称和第三人称 3. 一般将来时 4. ①交通方面 ②住房方面 ③机器人的使用方面 ④我的感受
▶▶思路点拨
Beginning: No one knows what the future will be like. Everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
Body:under the sea on other planets… flying cars help do easy jobs
Ending:My feelings
▶▶小试身手
One possible version:
【基础版】
Life in the Future
No one knows what the future will be like. But everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
For me, the future life must be very different from now. First, people will live anywhere they want, like living under the sea or on other planets. Second, there will be fewer cars on the roads because they will fly in the sky. Third, robots will play a part in our lives and help us do some easy jobs over and over again. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think our world will become better.
【提升版】
Life in the Future
Although no one knows what the future will be like, everyone has a prediction for their future lives.
As far as I know, the future life must be very different from now. To begin with, we will find the footprints of humans anywhere, under the sea or on other planets. Also, there will be more cars flying in the sky, taking us anywhere interesting. More importantly, robots will play a part in our lives and help with some simple and boring jobs. Last but not least, it's possible for people to have more free time to relax.
I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life.
