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假如你是李华，下周你们学校即将举办毕业典礼，你被选为学生代表上台发言。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意:1.词数100左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! Our three-year junior high school life will come to an end soon.
Thanks for your listening!
假如你是李华，下周你们学校即将举办毕业典礼，你被选为学生代表上台发言。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意:1.词数100左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! Our three-year junior high school life will come to an end soon.
Looking back, I still clearly remember the happy days we spent together. We laughed, studied and grew side by side, and every warm moment is a precious memory I will keep forever. I want to say thank you to our teachers for your endless patience and careful guidance, and to my dear classmates for your selfless help and true friendship when I was in trouble.
For the future, I will keep working hard to realize my dream of becoming a useful person. I will never forget what I have learnt here and carry these sweet memories with me.
Wish everyone a bright and wonderful future ahead!
Thanks for your listening!
答案
One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! Our three-year junior high school life will come to an end soon.
Looking back, I still clearly remember the happy days we spent together. We laughed, studied and grew side by side, and every warm moment is a precious memory I will keep forever. I want to say thank you to our teachers for your endless patience and careful guidance, and to my dear classmates for your selfless help and true friendship when I was in trouble.
For the future, I will keep working hard to realize my dream of becoming a useful person. I will never forget what I have learnt here and carry these sweet memories with me. Wish everyone a bright and wonderful future ahead!
Thanks for your listening!
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! Our three-year junior high school life will come to an end soon.
Looking back, I still clearly remember the happy days we spent together. We laughed, studied and grew side by side, and every warm moment is a precious memory I will keep forever. I want to say thank you to our teachers for your endless patience and careful guidance, and to my dear classmates for your selfless help and true friendship when I was in trouble.
For the future, I will keep working hard to realize my dream of becoming a useful person. I will never forget what I have learnt here and carry these sweet memories with me. Wish everyone a bright and wonderful future ahead!
Thanks for your listening!
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以学生代表身份撰写毕业典礼演讲稿，需围绕思维导图的三个核心要点展开：回顾三年初中生活、感谢老师与同学、说明未来计划。解题思路：先承接已给开头，围绕“回顾”回忆初中的美好相处时光，接着自然过渡到“感谢”，分别向老师（耐心指导）和同学（帮助与友谊）表达谢意，最后阐述“未来计划”（努力实现梦想），注意控制词数，语言连贯，符合演讲的真挚语气，避免真实信息。
【解析】首先，承接开头后，用具体细节（共同学习、欢笑）体现初中生活的珍贵回忆；然后过渡到感谢部分，分别对老师的耐心指导、同学的帮助表达谢意；最后说明未来会努力实现梦想，呼应主题。确保语句通顺，符合演讲稿的语境，词数符合要求。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! Our three-year junior high school life will come to an end soon.
Looking back, I still clearly remember the happy days we spent together. We laughed, studied and grew side by side, and every warm moment is a precious memory I will keep forever. I want to say thank you to our teachers for your endless patience and careful guidance, and to my dear classmates for your selfless help and true friendship when I was in trouble.
For the future, I will keep working hard to realize my dream of becoming a useful person. I will never forget what I have learnt here and carry these sweet memories with me. Wish everyone a bright and wonderful future ahead!
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作，初中英语写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的三个要点，情感真挚，语言流畅，符合学生代表的身份，是一篇合格的毕业典礼演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先，承接开头后，用具体细节（共同学习、欢笑）体现初中生活的珍贵回忆；然后过渡到感谢部分，分别对老师的耐心指导、同学的帮助表达谢意；最后说明未来会努力实现梦想，呼应主题。确保语句通顺，符合演讲稿的语境，词数符合要求。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! Our three-year junior high school life will come to an end soon.
Looking back, I still clearly remember the happy days we spent together. We laughed, studied and grew side by side, and every warm moment is a precious memory I will keep forever. I want to say thank you to our teachers for your endless patience and careful guidance, and to my dear classmates for your selfless help and true friendship when I was in trouble.
For the future, I will keep working hard to realize my dream of becoming a useful person. I will never forget what I have learnt here and carry these sweet memories with me. Wish everyone a bright and wonderful future ahead!
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作，初中英语写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的三个要点，情感真挚，语言流畅，符合学生代表的身份，是一篇合格的毕业典礼演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.6
