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朋友似一面清澈的镜子,照见我们未曾发现的自己,引领我们走向更广阔的天地。我校英语报社举办以“My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey”为题的征文活动,请根据以下要点,写一篇征文。
→审主题
要点:1.你与好友相似还是不同?主要体现在哪些方面?
2.分享一次你们共同的经历。
3.这段友谊如何让你变成更好的一个人?
→审人称:第一、三人称
审时态:以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
要求:1.词数90左右;2.作文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
→审词数
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
优秀范文
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well¹. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while² I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common¹. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to³ finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up¹. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others⁴. Thanks to her⁵, I’ve learned to open up¹ and become more confident.
初中英语
八年级
上册
人教版
亮点评析
①用丰富的动词短语get along well、have something in common、cheer...up、open up等展现作者的语言功底；
②用while引导并列分句,对比作者与好友的不同点；
③用too...to结构生动地展示比赛中紧张的心情；
④用省略that的宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句展示了作者的转变；
⑤结尾用Thanks to回扣主题,直指对朋友的感谢之情,总结了这段友谊带来的益处。
朋友似一面清澈的镜子,照见我们未曾发现的自己,引领我们走向更广阔的天地。我校英语报社举办以“My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey”为题的征文活动,请根据以下要点,写一篇征文。
→审主题
要点:1.你与好友相似还是不同?主要体现在哪些方面?
2.分享一次你们共同的经历。
3.这段友谊如何让你变成更好的一个人?
→审人称:第一、三人称
审时态:以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
要求:1.词数90左右;2.作文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
→审词数
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
优秀范文
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well¹. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while² I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common¹. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to³ finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up¹. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others⁴. Thanks to her⁵, I’ve learned to open up¹ and become more confident.
初中英语
八年级
上册
人教版
亮点评析
①用丰富的动词短语get along well、have something in common、cheer...up、open up等展现作者的语言功底；
②用while引导并列分句,对比作者与好友的不同点；
③用too...to结构生动地展示比赛中紧张的心情；
④用省略that的宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句展示了作者的转变；
⑤结尾用Thanks to回扣主题,直指对朋友的感谢之情,总结了这段友谊带来的益处。
答案
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others. Thanks to her, I’ve learned to open up and become more confident.
My best friend and I are different but get along well. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others. Thanks to her, I’ve learned to open up and become more confident.
解析
本题为人教版八年级上册英语主题写作题，写作要求如下：1. 审题：主题为“My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey”，需要覆盖全部三个指定要点，人称使用第一、第三人称，时态以一般现在时（介绍人物性格、日常爱好）和一般过去时（叙述过往共同经历）为主，词数控制在90词左右。2. 写作思路：开篇点明自己和好友性格有差异但相处融洽，分别说明双方性格的不同点，再点明二人的共同爱好，完成第一个要点；中间段选取共同参加绘画比赛的经历，描述自己遇到困境时好友的鼓励与帮助，完成第二个要点；结尾回扣“朋友像镜子”的主题，点明这段友谊给自己带来的成长与改变，完成第三个要点。3. 行文使用了八年级核心的while对比并列结构、too...to（太……而不能）结构，搭配课标要求的常用动词短语，符合该年级的知识范围要求。
