七、Read and write. 假如你是Jack,请记录自己日常一天的活动或者周末活动。(5分)
要求:1.契合主题,内容完整,不少于五句话;
2.结构合理,语义连贯;
3.语法准确,书写规范。
参考词汇:get up, have breakfast/lunch/dinner, have ... class, play sports, go shopping, do homework, clean my room, go to bed...
参考句型:I... in the morning/afternoon/evening. On the weekend, I usually/often/sometimes/...
My
I am
要求:1.契合主题,内容完整,不少于五句话;
2.结构合理,语义连贯;
3.语法准确,书写规范。
参考词汇:get up, have breakfast/lunch/dinner, have ... class, play sports, go shopping, do homework, clean my room, go to bed...
参考句型:I... in the morning/afternoon/evening. On the weekend, I usually/often/sometimes/...
My
happy weekend
(day/weekend)I am
Jack
. I have a happy weekend.
On Saturday morning, I get up at 8:00 and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon, I do my homework first and then clean my room. In the evening, I usually watch TV with my parents.
On Sunday, I often go shopping with my mother in the morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. I eat dinner at 7:00 and go to bed at 9:30. I really enjoy my weekend.
On Saturday morning, I get up at 8:00 and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon, I do my homework first and then clean my room. In the evening, I usually watch TV with my parents.
On Sunday, I often go shopping with my mother in the morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. I eat dinner at 7:00 and go to bed at 9:30. I really enjoy my weekend.
答案
My happy weekend
I am Jack. I have a happy weekend.
On Saturday morning, I get up at 8:00 and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon, I do my homework first and then clean my room. In the evening, I usually watch TV with my parents.
On Sunday, I often go shopping with my mother in the morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. I eat dinner at 7:00 and go to bed at 9:30. I really enjoy my weekend.
I am Jack. I have a happy weekend.
On Saturday morning, I get up at 8:00 and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon, I do my homework first and then clean my room. In the evening, I usually watch TV with my parents.
On Sunday, I often go shopping with my mother in the morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. I eat dinner at 7:00 and go to bed at 9:30. I really enjoy my weekend.
解析
【分析】首先确定写作主题为“我的周末”,契合题目要求;开头点明身份是Jack,引出主题;接着分周六、周日的早中晚时段,运用参考词汇和参考句型描述具体活动,确保内容连贯、不少于五句话;最后表达对周末的感受,完成写作。
【解析】第一步,确定标题为“My happy weekend”,明确写作主题;第二步,开头介绍自己:“I am Jack. I have a happy weekend.”;第三步,分时段描述周六活动:周六早上8点起床和家人吃早餐,下午先做作业再打扫房间,晚上和父母看电视;第四步,描述周日活动:早上和妈妈购物,下午和朋友打篮球,7点吃晚餐,9点半睡觉;第五步,结尾表达对周末的喜爱,使内容完整连贯。
【答案】My happy weekend
I am Jack. I have a happy weekend.
On Saturday morning, I get up at 8:00 and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon, I do my homework first and then clean my room. In the evening, I usually watch TV with my parents.
On Sunday, I often go shopping with my mother in the morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. I eat dinner at 7:00 and go to bed at 9:30. I really enjoy my weekend.
【知识点】一般现在时、日常活动英语表达、英语短文写作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题,结构清晰,运用了题目给定的参考词汇和句型,语法准确,内容完整连贯,符合小学英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步,确定标题为“My happy weekend”,明确写作主题;第二步,开头介绍自己:“I am Jack. I have a happy weekend.”;第三步,分时段描述周六活动:周六早上8点起床和家人吃早餐,下午先做作业再打扫房间,晚上和父母看电视;第四步,描述周日活动:早上和妈妈购物,下午和朋友打篮球,7点吃晚餐,9点半睡觉;第五步,结尾表达对周末的喜爱,使内容完整连贯。
【答案】My happy weekend
I am Jack. I have a happy weekend.
On Saturday morning, I get up at 8:00 and have breakfast with my family. In the afternoon, I do my homework first and then clean my room. In the evening, I usually watch TV with my parents.
On Sunday, I often go shopping with my mother in the morning and play basketball with my friends in the afternoon. I eat dinner at 7:00 and go to bed at 9:30. I really enjoy my weekend.
【知识点】一般现在时、日常活动英语表达、英语短文写作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题,结构清晰,运用了题目给定的参考词汇和句型,语法准确,内容完整连贯,符合小学英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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