九 假如你是Linda,你想向大家介绍自己平时的活动和喜好,请根据下面的信息提示写一篇英文短文。(8分)
要求:1. 条理清晰,语句通顺、连贯,可适当扩充;
2. 书写规范,不少于5句话。
要求:1. 条理清晰,语句通顺、连贯,可适当扩充;
2. 书写规范,不少于5句话。
Hello, I'm Linda. My birthday is on August 15th. And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting.
On the weekend, I usually go for a walk.
Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.
答案
参考范文:
Hello, I'm Linda. My birthday is on August 15th. And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting. On the weekend, I usually go for a walk. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.
Hello, I'm Linda. My birthday is on August 15th. And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting. On the weekend, I usually go for a walk. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Linda的身份写英文短文介绍自己的活动和喜好,解题思路为:1. 开头打招呼并点明身份;2. 补充个人基本信息(如生日);3. 说明最喜欢的季节及该季节能开展的活动;4. 描述周末的日常活动;5. 确保语句通顺、不少于5句,适当扩充内容使短文连贯。
【解析】
首先用“Hello, I'm Linda.”点明身份;接着介绍生日“My birthday is on August 15th.”;然后说明最喜欢的季节及相关活动:“And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting.”;最后描述周末活动:“On the weekend, I usually go for a walk. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.”,整体符合条理清晰、语句连贯的要求,满足字数规定。
【答案】
Hello, I'm Linda. My birthday is on August 15th. And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting. On the weekend, I usually go for a walk. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;一般现在时;季节与日常活动表达
【点评】
该范文符合题目要求,以自我介绍为核心,涵盖了个人基本信息、喜好季节及对应活动、周末日常活动,条理清晰,语句通顺连贯,适当扩充了内容,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以Linda的身份写英文短文介绍自己的活动和喜好,解题思路为:1. 开头打招呼并点明身份;2. 补充个人基本信息(如生日);3. 说明最喜欢的季节及该季节能开展的活动;4. 描述周末的日常活动;5. 确保语句通顺、不少于5句,适当扩充内容使短文连贯。
【解析】
首先用“Hello, I'm Linda.”点明身份;接着介绍生日“My birthday is on August 15th.”;然后说明最喜欢的季节及相关活动:“And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting.”;最后描述周末活动:“On the weekend, I usually go for a walk. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.”,整体符合条理清晰、语句连贯的要求,满足字数规定。
【答案】
Hello, I'm Linda. My birthday is on August 15th. And my favourite season is spring. It's warm. I can fly kites. It's very interesting. On the weekend, I usually go for a walk. Sometimes I go shopping with my mother.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;一般现在时;季节与日常活动表达
【点评】
该范文符合题目要求,以自我介绍为核心,涵盖了个人基本信息、喜好季节及对应活动、周末日常活动,条理清晰,语句通顺连贯,适当扩充了内容,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.6
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