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根据下面的内容要点写一篇 80-100 词的短文。
内容要点：1.贝多芬，德国作曲家（1770-1827）；2.自幼爱好音乐，弹钢琴；3.28岁得了耳病，18年后完全耳聋；4.在此期间，他继续工作；5.他的大部分作品都出自这个时期；6.你认为……
注意：1.短文必须包括所给要点；要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2.第6点必须用2-3句话展开合理想象。
内容要点：1.贝多芬，德国作曲家（1770-1827）；2.自幼爱好音乐，弹钢琴；3.28岁得了耳病，18年后完全耳聋；4.在此期间，他继续工作；5.他的大部分作品都出自这个时期；6.你认为……
注意：1.短文必须包括所给要点；要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2.第6点必须用2-3句话展开合理想象。
Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827.
When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well.
At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears and he became fully deaf 18 years later.
During the time he still went on working hard and wrote most of his works.
I think I can learn a lot from him.
He is such a lover of music. Even when he suffered deafness, he insisted on music creation.
Although I have difficulty in learning English, I will try my best to overcome it.
答案
Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827.
When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears and he became fully deaf 18 years later. During the time he still went on working hard and wrote most of his works.
I think I can learn a lot from him. He is such a lover of music. Even when he suffered deafness, he insisted on music creation. Although I have difficulty in learning English, I will try my best to overcome it.
When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears and he became fully deaf 18 years later. During the time he still went on working hard and wrote most of his works.
I think I can learn a lot from him. He is such a lover of music. Even when he suffered deafness, he insisted on music creation. Although I have difficulty in learning English, I will try my best to overcome it.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇人物介绍类英语短文写作，需严格覆盖所有给定要点。首先开篇介绍贝多芬的身份、国籍与生卒年份；接着叙述他早年对音乐的爱好及钢琴特长；再说明28岁患耳疾、18年后全聋的经历；随后点明患病期间坚持创作，多数作品出自该阶段；最后围绕第6点展开2-3句合理感想，确保语句通顺、词数符合80-100的要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分步完成：1. 开篇点明Beethoven是德国作曲家，生卒年份为1770年至1827年；2. 描述他自幼喜爱音乐，钢琴弹奏出色；3. 说明他28岁时出现耳疾，18年后完全耳聋；4. 强调患病期间仍坚持创作，多数作品出自该阶段；5. 展开感想，结合自身学习感悟，体现从贝多芬身上学到的坚持精神，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827.
When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears and he became fully deaf 18 years later. During the time he still went on working hard and wrote most of his works.
I think I can learn a lot from him. He is such a lover of music. Even when he suffered deafness, he insisted on music creation. Although I have difficulty in learning English, I will try my best to overcome it.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、人物介绍类写作
【点评】
本题考查人物介绍类英语短文的写作能力，要求准确覆盖所有给定要点，并合理展开个人感想，注重语句连贯性与内容完整性，是初中英语常见写作题型，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇人物介绍类英语短文写作，需严格覆盖所有给定要点。首先开篇介绍贝多芬的身份、国籍与生卒年份；接着叙述他早年对音乐的爱好及钢琴特长；再说明28岁患耳疾、18年后全聋的经历；随后点明患病期间坚持创作，多数作品出自该阶段；最后围绕第6点展开2-3句合理感想，确保语句通顺、词数符合80-100的要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分步完成：1. 开篇点明Beethoven是德国作曲家，生卒年份为1770年至1827年；2. 描述他自幼喜爱音乐，钢琴弹奏出色；3. 说明他28岁时出现耳疾，18年后完全耳聋；4. 强调患病期间仍坚持创作，多数作品出自该阶段；5. 展开感想，结合自身学习感悟，体现从贝多芬身上学到的坚持精神，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827.
When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears and he became fully deaf 18 years later. During the time he still went on working hard and wrote most of his works.
I think I can learn a lot from him. He is such a lover of music. Even when he suffered deafness, he insisted on music creation. Although I have difficulty in learning English, I will try my best to overcome it.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、人物介绍类写作
【点评】
本题考查人物介绍类英语短文的写作能力，要求准确覆盖所有给定要点，并合理展开个人感想，注重语句连贯性与内容完整性，是初中英语常见写作题型，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
