2026年上海作业五年级英语上册沪教版五四制第48页答案
Ⅸ. Writing(写作)5%
请以“My animal diary”为题,写一篇不少于50词的日记。
要求:1. 介绍你最喜欢的一种动物,描述其外貌特征、特别的行为或习惯以及你的感受;
2. 语句通顺,书写规范,注意日记格式。
My animal diary

Saturday,12 November Cloudy

Today,I visit the zoo with my parents. We see the giant pandas. Pandas are black and white. They look very fat and cute. Pandas love to eat bamboo. They sit on the ground and hold the bamboo with their hands.

They chew and chew all day long. I want to give them a big hug.

答案

参考范文:
My animal diary
Saturday,12 November Cloudy
Today,I visit the zoo with my parents. We see the giant pandas. Pandas are black and white. They look very fat and cute. Pandas love to eat bamboo. They sit on the ground and hold the bamboo with their hands. They chew and chew all day long. I want to give them a big hug.

解析

【分析】首先明确本题是英语写作题,要求写一篇“My animal diary”的日记,需遵循日记格式,同时完成三个核心要求:介绍喜欢的动物、描述其外貌/行为习惯、表达个人感受。解题思路为:1. 牢记日记的标准格式(先标注日期、天气);2. 选择熟悉且易描写的动物(如大熊猫);3. 按要求依次展开:先写动物外貌特征,再写独特行为/习惯,最后表达自身感受;4. 确保语句通顺、词数达标(不少于50词)。
【解析】按照题目要求,先确定日记格式:开头标注日期和天气;接着介绍和父母去动物园看到的大熊猫,描写其黑白毛色、胖且可爱的外貌;再说明大熊猫爱吃竹子、整天抱着竹子啃的行为习惯;最后表达想拥抱大熊猫的感受,全程保证语句通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】My animal diary
Saturday,12 November Cloudy
Today,I visit the zoo with my parents. We see the giant pandas. Pandas are black and white. They look very fat and cute. Pandas love to eat bamboo. They sit on the ground and hold the bamboo with their hands. They chew and chew all day long. I want to give them a big hug.
【知识点】英语日记写作、动物特征描述
【点评】本题为基础英语写作题,要求清晰,结合日记格式与动物描写,贴近学生日常经历,便于学生发挥,能有效考察学生的基础英语表达能力。
【难度系数】0.8