六、书面表达。
你将参加你校英文报“My Study Tour”主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向该报投稿,向大家分享一下你研学旅行的经历(天气、地点、在那里学到了什么以及你的感受等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
My Study Tour
你将参加你校英文报“My Study Tour”主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向该报投稿,向大家分享一下你研学旅行的经历(天气、地点、在那里学到了什么以及你的感受等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于60;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
My Study Tour
答案
My Study Tour
Last month, I went to the natural history museum for our school study tour. It was sunny and warm that day, all of us felt very excited on the bus.
In the museum, we saw different kinds of dinosaur fossils and many old animal samples. The guide told us lots of interesting facts about nature. I learned much knowledge that I can't get from textbooks, and I also took many notes and took lots of photos.
This study tour is really wonderful. I had a great fun and I know the nature is so amazing. I hope I can take part in more such nice trips later.
Last month, I went to the natural history museum for our school study tour. It was sunny and warm that day, all of us felt very excited on the bus.
In the museum, we saw different kinds of dinosaur fossils and many old animal samples. The guide told us lots of interesting facts about nature. I learned much knowledge that I can't get from textbooks, and I also took many notes and took lots of photos.
This study tour is really wonderful. I had a great fun and I know the nature is so amazing. I hope I can take part in more such nice trips later.
解析
这是一篇七年级水平的命题记叙文写作,写作可按照以下思路完成:
1. 开篇点明研学旅行的基本信息:出行时间、当日天气、前往的地点,直接切入主题;
2. 主体部分描述研学过程的相关活动,清晰写明自己在行程中学到的内容,覆盖题干要求的所有核心要点;
3. 结尾抒发个人感受,点明研学旅行的意义,保证词数不少于60,全部使用七年级已学的词汇和基础句式,避免超纲表达,不出现真实姓名、校名,做到语言流畅通顺。
1. 开篇点明研学旅行的基本信息:出行时间、当日天气、前往的地点,直接切入主题;
2. 主体部分描述研学过程的相关活动,清晰写明自己在行程中学到的内容,覆盖题干要求的所有核心要点;
3. 结尾抒发个人感受,点明研学旅行的意义,保证词数不少于60,全部使用七年级已学的词汇和基础句式,避免超纲表达,不出现真实姓名、校名,做到语言流畅通顺。
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