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Ⅴ. Think and write.（写作。）
结合所学知识，写一篇题为“A day in space”的短文，介绍中国航天员在太空的生活及工作，不少于5句话。
要点：1.介绍中国航天员探索太空的工具；
2.介绍中国航天员的生活；
3.介绍中国航天员的工作；
4.介绍中国航天员的其他活动。
A day in space
结合所学知识，写一篇题为“A day in space”的短文，介绍中国航天员在太空的生活及工作，不少于5句话。
要点：1.介绍中国航天员探索太空的工具；
2.介绍中国航天员的生活；
3.介绍中国航天员的工作；
4.介绍中国航天员的其他活动。
A day in space
It is special to be a taikonaut.
Taikonauts use a spaceship to fly into space.
In the morning, they use a wet cloth to wash their faces. They plant vegetables and rice in space.
They give space classes to children. In the afternoon, they do exercise to stay healthy.
They can see the sunrise and sunset many times a day. The view is amazing.
答案
参考范文：
A day in space
It is special to be a taikonaut. Taikonauts use a spaceship to fly into space. In the morning, they use a wet cloth to wash their faces. They plant vegetables and rice in space. They give space classes to children. In the afternoon, they do exercise to stay healthy. They can see the sunrise and sunset many times a day. The view is amazing.
A day in space
It is special to be a taikonaut. Taikonauts use a spaceship to fly into space. In the morning, they use a wet cloth to wash their faces. They plant vegetables and rice in space. They give space classes to children. In the afternoon, they do exercise to stay healthy. They can see the sunrise and sunset many times a day. The view is amazing.
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确题目要求：写题为“A day in space”的短文，不少于5句话，需包含四个要点：中国航天员探索太空的工具、太空生活、太空工作、其他活动。接着构思写作结构：开头点明太空生活的特殊性，依次围绕四个要点展开，最后补充感受，确保句子数量达标，语言简单准确，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】1. 确定核心要点：围绕中国航天员的太空一天，覆盖工具（spaceship）、生活（洗漱）、工作（种植、授课）、其他（锻炼、看日出）；2. 组织语言：用简单句串联内容，如先点题，再写乘坐宇宙飞船，接着描述洗漱、种植蔬菜、太空授课、锻炼、看日出日落等细节；3. 检查确认：确保句子不少于5句，所有要点均覆盖，语法正确。
【答案】参考范文：
A day in space
It is special to be a taikonaut. Taikonauts use a spaceship to fly into space. In the morning, they use a wet cloth to wash their faces. They plant vegetables and rice in space. They give space classes to children. In the afternoon, they do exercise to stay healthy. They can see the sunrise and sunset many times a day. The view is amazing.
【知识点】英语短文写作、太空话题词汇、要点式写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖四个指定要点，句子连贯自然，词汇准确恰当，符合初中英语写作的规范，是合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 确定核心要点：围绕中国航天员的太空一天，覆盖工具（spaceship）、生活（洗漱）、工作（种植、授课）、其他（锻炼、看日出）；2. 组织语言：用简单句串联内容，如先点题，再写乘坐宇宙飞船，接着描述洗漱、种植蔬菜、太空授课、锻炼、看日出日落等细节；3. 检查确认：确保句子不少于5句，所有要点均覆盖，语法正确。
【答案】参考范文：
A day in space
It is special to be a taikonaut. Taikonauts use a spaceship to fly into space. In the morning, they use a wet cloth to wash their faces. They plant vegetables and rice in space. They give space classes to children. In the afternoon, they do exercise to stay healthy. They can see the sunrise and sunset many times a day. The view is amazing.
【知识点】英语短文写作、太空话题词汇、要点式写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖四个指定要点，句子连贯自然，词汇准确恰当，符合初中英语写作的规范，是合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.6
