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Unit 4大单元 主题写作训练
描述如何保持健康
一、思路点拨
二、素材积累
三、小试牛刀
根据所给提示仿写句子。
1. I should drink enough water.
2. I should also get enough sleep.
3. Don’t eat too much candy.
4. I shouldn’t go to bed too late.
描述如何保持健康
一、思路点拨
二、素材积累
三、小试牛刀
根据所给提示仿写句子。
1. I should drink enough water.
We should eat healthy food.
(we, eat healthy food)2. I should also get enough sleep.
We should also exercise every day.
(we, exercise, every day)3. Don’t eat too much candy.
Don't check the phone (in bed) so often.
(check the phone, so often)4. I shouldn’t go to bed too late.
We shouldn't watch TV so often.
(we, watch TV, so often)答案
1. We should eat healthy food.
2. We should also exercise every day.
3. Don't check the phone (in bed) so often.
4. We shouldn't watch TV so often.
2. We should also exercise every day.
3. Don't check the phone (in bed) so often.
4. We shouldn't watch TV so often.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语仿写题，需根据示例句子的结构，结合括号内的提示词完成句子转换：一是注意人称从I转换为we；二是正确使用情态动词should/shouldn't或祈使句否定形式；三是保持句子结构与原句一致，将提示词合理融入。
【解析】
1. 原句结构为“I should + 动词短语”，提示人称是we，动词短语是eat healthy food，故转换为We should eat healthy food。
2. 原句含also，提示人称是we，动词短语是exercise every day，故转换为We should also exercise every day。
3. 原句为祈使句否定形式“Don’t + 动词短语”，提示动词短语是check the phone, so often，故转换为Don't check the phone so often。
4. 原句结构为“I shouldn’t + 动词短语”，提示人称是we，动词短语是watch TV, so often，故转换为We shouldn't watch TV so often。
【答案】
1. We should eat healthy food.
2. We should also exercise every day.
3. Don't check the phone so often.
4. We shouldn't watch TV so often.
【知识点】
情态动词should的用法，祈使句的否定形式，人称代词转换
【点评】
本题围绕健康话题考查基础句型仿写，核心是掌握人称转换和常用健康建议的表达，属于英语基础应用类题目，难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.8
本题为英语仿写题，需根据示例句子的结构，结合括号内的提示词完成句子转换：一是注意人称从I转换为we；二是正确使用情态动词should/shouldn't或祈使句否定形式；三是保持句子结构与原句一致，将提示词合理融入。
【解析】
1. 原句结构为“I should + 动词短语”，提示人称是we，动词短语是eat healthy food，故转换为We should eat healthy food。
2. 原句含also，提示人称是we，动词短语是exercise every day，故转换为We should also exercise every day。
3. 原句为祈使句否定形式“Don’t + 动词短语”，提示动词短语是check the phone, so often，故转换为Don't check the phone so often。
4. 原句结构为“I shouldn’t + 动词短语”，提示人称是we，动词短语是watch TV, so often，故转换为We shouldn't watch TV so often。
【答案】
1. We should eat healthy food.
2. We should also exercise every day.
3. Don't check the phone so often.
4. We shouldn't watch TV so often.
【知识点】
情态动词should的用法，祈使句的否定形式，人称代词转换
【点评】
本题围绕健康话题考查基础句型仿写，核心是掌握人称转换和常用健康建议的表达，属于英语基础应用类题目，难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.8
四、一展身手
以“Stay healthy”为题，从饮食健康、坚持运动、其他良好习惯等方面写一写我们如何才能保持健康。不少于50词。
以“Stay healthy”为题，从饮食健康、坚持运动、其他良好习惯等方面写一写我们如何才能保持健康。不少于50词。
Stay healthy
It's important for us to stay healthy. What should we do?
We should eat healthy food and get enough sleep. We should also exercise every day. We can play ball games or jump rope outside.
Don't check the phone in bed or watch TV so often. It's bad for our eyes. We shouldn't eat too much candy. It's bad for our teeth.
If we can keep the good habits, we can stay healthy.
答案
Stay healthy
It's important for us to stay healthy. What should we do?
We should eat healthy food and get enough sleep. We should also exercise every day. We can play ball games or jump rope outside. Don't check the phone in bed or watch TV so often. It's bad for our eyes. We shouldn't eat too much candy. It's bad for our teeth. If we can keep the good habits, we can stay healthy.
It's important for us to stay healthy. What should we do?
We should eat healthy food and get enough sleep. We should also exercise every day. We can play ball games or jump rope outside. Don't check the phone in bed or watch TV so often. It's bad for our eyes. We shouldn't eat too much candy. It's bad for our teeth. If we can keep the good habits, we can stay healthy.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“Stay healthy”，需围绕饮食健康、坚持运动、其他良好习惯三个方面展开。第一步，开篇点明保持健康的重要性，引出下文具体做法；第二步，分点阐述措施：饮食上要吃健康食物、少吃糖果，运动上每天锻炼（如打球、跳绳），其他习惯要保证充足睡眠、不熬夜看手机/电视；第三步，总结坚持好习惯就能保持健康，同时确保词数不少于50，语言通顺。
【解析】按照写作思路，先开篇点题，再从饮食、运动、日常习惯三个维度说明保持健康的具体做法，最后总结，形成完整短文，内容紧扣主题，符合要求。
【答案】Stay healthy
It's important for us to stay healthy. What should we do?
We should eat healthy food and get enough sleep. We should also exercise every day. We can play ball games or jump rope outside. Don't check the phone in bed or watch TV so often. It's bad for our eyes. We shouldn't eat too much candy. It's bad for our teeth. If we can keep the good habits, we can stay healthy.
【知识点】英语话题写作、健康话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题，从饮食、运动、日常习惯三个方面展开，结构清晰，内容具体，符合词数要求，语言通顺自然。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作思路，先开篇点题，再从饮食、运动、日常习惯三个维度说明保持健康的具体做法，最后总结，形成完整短文，内容紧扣主题，符合要求。
【答案】Stay healthy
It's important for us to stay healthy. What should we do?
We should eat healthy food and get enough sleep. We should also exercise every day. We can play ball games or jump rope outside. Don't check the phone in bed or watch TV so often. It's bad for our eyes. We shouldn't eat too much candy. It's bad for our teeth. If we can keep the good habits, we can stay healthy.
【知识点】英语话题写作、健康话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题，从饮食、运动、日常习惯三个方面展开，结构清晰，内容具体，符合词数要求，语言通顺自然。
【难度系数】0.6
