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[武汉模拟]2024年巴黎奥运会恰好在暑期举行,相信大家或多或少收看了一些转播的比赛项目。请根据问题提示,结合你所了解的比赛情况,写篇80~100词的英语短文,介绍一下。
1. Which event do you like best?
2. Who is your favourite athlete? /Which is your favourite team?
3. What do you think of the game results?
4. What have you learned from him/her/the team?
I watched the Paris Olympic Games during the summer vacation of 2024.
[审题指导]1. 体裁:说明文
2. 人称:以第一、三人称为主
3. 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
I watched the Paris Olympic Games during the summer vacation of 2024. Here I'd like to share my thoughts of watching the games with you.
All the athletes and sports teams impressed me a lot. Our Chinese team won a total of 40 gold medals, tying with the US for first place.
To tell you the truth, I like volleyball best. So what I admire most is our Chinese Women's Volleyball Team. This team competed against the strong Turkish Team in the quarter-final. Our players overcame difficulties and fought very bravely although they failed to reach the podium.
Anyway, their fighting spirit has always inspired me to work hard. Never give up and keep fighting!
高分点评: 1. 思路清晰, 段落整齐。2. never give up, to tell you the truth, share ... with 等亮点词汇, 展示了作者扎实的基本功。3. although 引导的让步状语从句以及what引导的主语从句的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
[武汉模拟]2024年巴黎奥运会恰好在暑期举行,相信大家或多或少收看了一些转播的比赛项目。请根据问题提示,结合你所了解的比赛情况,写篇80~100词的英语短文,介绍一下。
1. Which event do you like best?
2. Who is your favourite athlete? /Which is your favourite team?
3. What do you think of the game results?
4. What have you learned from him/her/the team?
I watched the Paris Olympic Games during the summer vacation of 2024.
[审题指导]1. 体裁:说明文
2. 人称:以第一、三人称为主
3. 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
I watched the Paris Olympic Games during the summer vacation of 2024. Here I'd like to share my thoughts of watching the games with you.
All the athletes and sports teams impressed me a lot. Our Chinese team won a total of 40 gold medals, tying with the US for first place.
To tell you the truth, I like volleyball best. So what I admire most is our Chinese Women's Volleyball Team. This team competed against the strong Turkish Team in the quarter-final. Our players overcame difficulties and fought very bravely although they failed to reach the podium.
Anyway, their fighting spirit has always inspired me to work hard. Never give up and keep fighting!
高分点评: 1. 思路清晰, 段落整齐。2. never give up, to tell you the truth, share ... with 等亮点词汇, 展示了作者扎实的基本功。3. although 引导的让步状语从句以及what引导的主语从句的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
答案
Here I'd like to share my thoughts of watching the games with you.
All the athletes impressed me deeply. Our Chinese team got 40 gold medals and tied for first place in the medal table. To tell you the truth, my favourite event is table tennis, and my favourite player is Sun Yingsha. She performed excellently and won three gold medals in the competition. Her hard-working and persistent spirit always inspires me to keep moving forward in my study.
All the athletes impressed me deeply. Our Chinese team got 40 gold medals and tied for first place in the medal table. To tell you the truth, my favourite event is table tennis, and my favourite player is Sun Yingsha. She performed excellently and won three gold medals in the competition. Her hard-working and persistent spirit always inspires me to keep moving forward in my study.
解析
本题是英语写作题，要求围绕2024年巴黎奥运会的观赛经历完成80~100词的短文，写作要点需覆盖指定的4个问题：最喜爱的赛事项目、最喜爱的运动员/队伍、对赛事结果的看法、从喜爱对象身上学到的品质。写作时以第一、三人称为主，主要使用一般过去时，按照分享观赛感受→评价赛事结果→介绍喜爱的对象→阐述收获感悟的逻辑行文，可适当运用亮点短语和复合句提升表达质量，保证内容连贯、词数达标。
实战演练
在这个充满挑战与机遇的时代,奥运精神不仅是体育竞技中的灯塔,更是我们每个人人生旅途中的宝贵指南。让我们以奥运之名,书写属于自己的精彩篇章,共同创造更加辉煌的未来!请以"The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most"为题写一篇80~100词的演讲稿。
内容包括:1.你理解的奥运精神有哪些?2.奥运精神给你的成长带来了什么启示?3.对你影响最深的奥运精神是什么?它是如何影响你的?
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most
在这个充满挑战与机遇的时代,奥运精神不仅是体育竞技中的灯塔,更是我们每个人人生旅途中的宝贵指南。让我们以奥运之名,书写属于自己的精彩篇章,共同创造更加辉煌的未来!请以"The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most"为题写一篇80~100词的演讲稿。
内容包括:1.你理解的奥运精神有哪些?2.奥运精神给你的成长带来了什么启示?3.对你影响最深的奥运精神是什么?它是如何影响你的?
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most
The Olympic spirit means friendship, respect, and never giving up. It teaches us to work hard and play fair. It also shows that we can be strong and kind at the same time.
The Olympic spirit has taught me that winning isn't everything. It's about trying your best. It has helped me understand that it's okay to fail, as long as you learn from it and keep going.
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most is the idea of perseverance. I have faced many challenges in my life, but the Olympic spirit encourages me to keep trying.
This has helped me in school and in sports, making me more determined to succeed.
答案
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most
The Olympic spirit means friendship, respect, and never giving up. It teaches us to work hard and play fair. It also shows that we can be strong and kind at the same time.
The Olympic spirit has taught me that winning isn't everything. It's about trying your best. It has helped me understand that it's okay to fail, as long as you learn from it and keep going.
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most is the idea of perseverance. I have faced many challenges in my life, but the Olympic spirit encourages me to keep trying. This has helped me in school and in sports, making me more determined to succeed.
【思路分析】第一步,介绍你理解的奥运精神有哪些;第二步,介绍奥运精神给你的成长带来了什么启示;第三步,介绍对你影响最深的奥运精神是什么以及它是如何影响你的。
The Olympic spirit means friendship, respect, and never giving up. It teaches us to work hard and play fair. It also shows that we can be strong and kind at the same time.
The Olympic spirit has taught me that winning isn't everything. It's about trying your best. It has helped me understand that it's okay to fail, as long as you learn from it and keep going.
The Olympic spirit that has influenced me most is the idea of perseverance. I have faced many challenges in my life, but the Olympic spirit encourages me to keep trying. This has helped me in school and in sports, making me more determined to succeed.
【思路分析】第一步,介绍你理解的奥运精神有哪些;第二步,介绍奥运精神给你的成长带来了什么启示;第三步,介绍对你影响最深的奥运精神是什么以及它是如何影响你的。
