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【写作导引】
本单元以“时代变迁”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①探讨事物相较往昔的变迁；②讨论时代变迁对我们生活的影响；③探究变化是如何发生的；④探寻你能为家乡做些什么。
【写作任务】
过去几十年，随着经济的发展，我们的家乡经历了翻天覆地的变化，这些变化深刻地影响着我们的生活。假如你是李明，你们学校校报“英语专栏”举行以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题的征文比赛。请写一篇英语短文投稿应征。
要点：从交通、生活条件、通讯方式等方面展开。
要求：必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening-up, especially in the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
本单元以“时代变迁”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①探讨事物相较往昔的变迁；②讨论时代变迁对我们生活的影响；③探究变化是如何发生的；④探寻你能为家乡做些什么。
【写作任务】
过去几十年，随着经济的发展，我们的家乡经历了翻天覆地的变化，这些变化深刻地影响着我们的生活。假如你是李明，你们学校校报“英语专栏”举行以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题的征文比赛。请写一篇英语短文投稿应征。
要点：从交通、生活条件、通讯方式等方面展开。
要求：必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening-up, especially in the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
答案
Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening-up, especially in the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, people here used to travel on foot or by bike, and the roads were narrow and full of mud on rainy days. Now wide and clean roads run across the whole town, we can take buses, subways or private cars to reach any place we want conveniently.
Besides, people's living conditions have improved a lot. Decades ago, most families lived in small old houses and could hardly get enough food. Now plenty of bright high-rise apartments stand in the community, people can enjoy all kinds of delicious food and go travelling to different places during holidays.
What's more, the communication way has changed greatly. People only sent letters to contact faraway relatives in the old days. Now almost everyone has a smartphone, we can talk to others and even see them face to face on the screen anytime.
I feel so proud of my hometown's development. I will study hard and try my best to make it more beautiful in the future.
Since the reform and opening-up, especially in the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, people here used to travel on foot or by bike, and the roads were narrow and full of mud on rainy days. Now wide and clean roads run across the whole town, we can take buses, subways or private cars to reach any place we want conveniently.
Besides, people's living conditions have improved a lot. Decades ago, most families lived in small old houses and could hardly get enough food. Now plenty of bright high-rise apartments stand in the community, people can enjoy all kinds of delicious food and go travelling to different places during holidays.
What's more, the communication way has changed greatly. People only sent letters to contact faraway relatives in the old days. Now almost everyone has a smartphone, we can talk to others and even see them face to face on the screen anytime.
I feel so proud of my hometown's development. I will study hard and try my best to make it more beautiful in the future.
解析
【分析】首先明确本次写作主题为“Great Changes in My Hometown”，需从交通、生活条件、通讯方式三个指定方面展开，采用“过去-现在”的对比手法呈现变化，开头已给出，结尾需抒发对家乡发展的自豪之情，符合校报征文正式且真挚的语气，确保覆盖所有要点并适当发挥。
【解析】1. 交通方面：对比过去步行/自行车出行、道路窄泥泞，现在有宽阔道路，可乘坐公交、地铁或私家车，体现交通便利；2. 生活条件方面：对比过去住小旧房子、食物不足，现在住高层公寓、享受美食和旅游，体现生活水平提升；3. 通讯方面：对比过去写信联系远方亲友，现在用智能手机视频通话，体现通讯方式的进步；最后表达对家乡发展的自豪，以及未来为家乡努力的决心，完成征文内容。
【答案】Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening-up, especially in the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, people here used to travel on foot or by bike, and the roads were narrow and full of mud on rainy days. Now wide and clean roads run across the whole town, we can take buses, subways or private cars to reach any place we want conveniently.
Besides, people's living conditions have improved a lot. Decades ago, most families lived in small old houses and could hardly get enough food. Now plenty of bright high-rise apartments stand in the community, people can enjoy all kinds of delicious food and go travelling to different places during holidays.
What's more, the communication way has changed greatly. People only sent letters to contact faraway relatives in the old days. Now almost everyone has a smartphone, we can talk to others and even see them face to face on the screen anytime.
I feel so proud of my hometown's development. I will study hard and try my best to make it more beautiful in the future.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文采用“过去与现在对比”的结构，紧扣题目要求的三个要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合校报征文的规范，很好地展现了家乡的时代变迁。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 交通方面：对比过去步行/自行车出行、道路窄泥泞，现在有宽阔道路，可乘坐公交、地铁或私家车，体现交通便利；2. 生活条件方面：对比过去住小旧房子、食物不足，现在住高层公寓、享受美食和旅游，体现生活水平提升；3. 通讯方面：对比过去写信联系远方亲友，现在用智能手机视频通话，体现通讯方式的进步；最后表达对家乡发展的自豪，以及未来为家乡努力的决心，完成征文内容。
【答案】Great Changes in My Hometown
Since the reform and opening-up, especially in the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, people here used to travel on foot or by bike, and the roads were narrow and full of mud on rainy days. Now wide and clean roads run across the whole town, we can take buses, subways or private cars to reach any place we want conveniently.
Besides, people's living conditions have improved a lot. Decades ago, most families lived in small old houses and could hardly get enough food. Now plenty of bright high-rise apartments stand in the community, people can enjoy all kinds of delicious food and go travelling to different places during holidays.
What's more, the communication way has changed greatly. People only sent letters to contact faraway relatives in the old days. Now almost everyone has a smartphone, we can talk to others and even see them face to face on the screen anytime.
I feel so proud of my hometown's development. I will study hard and try my best to make it more beautiful in the future.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文采用“过去与现在对比”的结构，紧扣题目要求的三个要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合校报征文的规范，很好地展现了家乡的时代变迁。
【难度系数】0.6
跟踪演练
假如你是李华，你们学校英语校刊举办以“Great Changes around Me”为题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇文章进行投稿。
要点:1. 过去什么样；2. 现在什么样；3. 你的感受。
要求:1. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
假如你是李华，你们学校英语校刊举办以“Great Changes around Me”为题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇文章进行投稿。
要点:1. 过去什么样；2. 现在什么样；3. 你的感受。
要求:1. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. There were only a few small shops and the roads were narrow.
Public transportation was inconvenient, making it difficult to travel. However, things have changed greatly.
Now, there are modern shopping malls, wide and smooth roads, and an efficient public transportation system.
The environment has also improved with more green spaces and parks.
I feel very lucky to witness these changes. They have made life more convenient and enjoyable, and I am proud of the progress my community has made.
答案
写作提优练
范文：
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. There were only a few small shops and the roads were narrow. Public transportation was inconvenient, making it difficult to travel. However, things have changed greatly. Now, there are modern shopping malls, wide and smooth roads, and an efficient public transportation system. The environment has also improved with more green spaces and parks.
I feel very lucky to witness these changes. They have made life more convenient and enjoyable, and I am proud of the progress my community has made.
范文：
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. There were only a few small shops and the roads were narrow. Public transportation was inconvenient, making it difficult to travel. However, things have changed greatly. Now, there are modern shopping malls, wide and smooth roads, and an efficient public transportation system. The environment has also improved with more green spaces and parks.
I feel very lucky to witness these changes. They have made life more convenient and enjoyable, and I am proud of the progress my community has made.
解析
【分析】
首先明确征文主题为“Great Changes around Me”，需围绕“过去的状况、现在的变化、个人感受”三个核心要点展开。第一步，承接已给开头，用对比结构描述过去身边的情况（如居住区域的不发达、设施简陋）；第二步，转折引出现在的变化，对应过去的不足，补充现代化设施、便利交通及环境改善等细节；第三步，结合自身经历表达真实感受，确保文章连贯自然，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头描述过去状况：使用“used to”结构，说明居住区域过去的落后，如仅有少量小店、道路狭窄、交通不便；
2. 转折写现在的变化：用“However”引出，对应过去的不足，描述现在的现代化商场、宽阔平整的道路、高效的公共交通，以及新增绿地公园等环境改善；
3. 表达个人感受：说明自己见证变化的幸运，以及变化带来的便利和对社区进步的自豪，使文章完整。
【答案】
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. There were only a few small shops and the roads were narrow. Public transportation was inconvenient, making it difficult to travel. However, things have changed greatly. Now, there are modern shopping malls, wide and smooth roads, and an efficient public transportation system. The environment has also improved with more green spaces and parks.
I feel very lucky to witness these changes. They have made life more convenient and enjoyable, and I am proud of the progress my community has made.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、对比描写、观点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，通过过去与现在的对比清晰展现了身边的变化，语言连贯流畅，用词准确恰当，真实表达了作者的感受，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确征文主题为“Great Changes around Me”，需围绕“过去的状况、现在的变化、个人感受”三个核心要点展开。第一步，承接已给开头，用对比结构描述过去身边的情况（如居住区域的不发达、设施简陋）；第二步，转折引出现在的变化，对应过去的不足，补充现代化设施、便利交通及环境改善等细节；第三步，结合自身经历表达真实感受，确保文章连贯自然，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头描述过去状况：使用“used to”结构，说明居住区域过去的落后，如仅有少量小店、道路狭窄、交通不便；
2. 转折写现在的变化：用“However”引出，对应过去的不足，描述现在的现代化商场、宽阔平整的道路、高效的公共交通，以及新增绿地公园等环境改善；
3. 表达个人感受：说明自己见证变化的幸运，以及变化带来的便利和对社区进步的自豪，使文章完整。
【答案】
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. There were only a few small shops and the roads were narrow. Public transportation was inconvenient, making it difficult to travel. However, things have changed greatly. Now, there are modern shopping malls, wide and smooth roads, and an efficient public transportation system. The environment has also improved with more green spaces and parks.
I feel very lucky to witness these changes. They have made life more convenient and enjoyable, and I am proud of the progress my community has made.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、对比描写、观点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，要点齐全，通过过去与现在的对比清晰展现了身边的变化，语言连贯流畅，用词准确恰当，真实表达了作者的感受，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
