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Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed out about the problems. I want you to know you're not alone.
When I face problems, I try to stay calm. My favourite colour, blue, helps me a lot. It reminds me of a peaceful sky or a calm ocean, which makes me feel relaxed. Just take a moment to breathe and imagine that colours can clear my mind.
I also want to encourage you with what I've learned: a calm and positive attitude can make problems feel smaller. You are a strong person, and I believe you can get through this. Let's talk more soon—I'm here for you.
Hope my advice helps. Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed out about the problems. I want you to know you're not alone.
When I face problems, I try to stay calm. My favourite colour, blue, helps me a lot. It reminds me of a peaceful sky or a calm ocean, which makes me feel relaxed. Just take a moment to breathe and imagine that colours can clear my mind.
I also want to encourage you with what I've learned: a calm and positive attitude can make problems feel smaller. You are a strong person, and I believe you can get through this. Let's talk more soon—I'm here for you.
Hope my advice helps. Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语单元主题写作题，要求以李华的身份给朋友Peter写一封信，针对他的压力问题进行安慰并给出合理建议，需结合自身经历（如喜欢蓝色带来平静），语言要真诚得体，符合书信格式。
【解析】
写作需遵循书信格式，分四部分完成：1. 开头问候并表达对Peter压力的安慰；2. 结合自身经历（蓝色带来平静的感受）说明应对压力的方法；3. 提出积极态度的重要性并鼓励对方；4. 结尾表达期待回信的意愿。
【答案】
Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed out about the problems. I want you to know you're not alone.
When I face problems, I try to stay calm. My favourite colour, blue, helps me a lot. It reminds me of a peaceful sky or a calm ocean, which makes me feel relaxed. Just take a moment to breathe and imagine that colours can clear my mind.
I also want to encourage you with what I've learned: a calm and positive attitude can make problems feel smaller. You are a strong person, and I believe you can get through this. Let's talk more soon—I'm here for you.
Hope my advice helps. Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、单元主题写作、建议类应用文写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰，以具体事例支撑观点，语言真挚自然，符合安慰鼓励的语境，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语单元主题写作题，要求以李华的身份给朋友Peter写一封信，针对他的压力问题进行安慰并给出合理建议，需结合自身经历（如喜欢蓝色带来平静），语言要真诚得体，符合书信格式。
【解析】
写作需遵循书信格式，分四部分完成：1. 开头问候并表达对Peter压力的安慰；2. 结合自身经历（蓝色带来平静的感受）说明应对压力的方法；3. 提出积极态度的重要性并鼓励对方；4. 结尾表达期待回信的意愿。
【答案】
Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed out about the problems. I want you to know you're not alone.
When I face problems, I try to stay calm. My favourite colour, blue, helps me a lot. It reminds me of a peaceful sky or a calm ocean, which makes me feel relaxed. Just take a moment to breathe and imagine that colours can clear my mind.
I also want to encourage you with what I've learned: a calm and positive attitude can make problems feel smaller. You are a strong person, and I believe you can get through this. Let's talk more soon—I'm here for you.
Hope my advice helps. Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、单元主题写作、建议类应用文写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰，以具体事例支撑观点，语言真挚自然，符合安慰鼓励的语境，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
