2026年阳光同学素养学练评五年级英语下册剑桥版武汉专版第82页答案
八Writing. 写作。
请结合所给思维导图,思考自己的旅行计划,以“My Travel Plan”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 不少于50词。2. 条理清楚,语言流畅。3. 书写正确、规范。

My Travel Plan





答案

参考范文:
My Travel Plan
I am going to visit Beijing this Saturday with my family. We are so excited. I will travel there by plane. It will take us two hours. I am going to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen Square. My father and my mother are going to watch Peking Opera. I am going to eat Beijing roast duck with my brother. That will be fun.

解析

【分析】
写作时需围绕题目“My Travel Plan”,结合思维导图的五个核心要素(时间When、地点Where、同行人员Who、交通方式How、活动内容What)展开。第一步,选定旅行的相关信息,确定时间、地点、同行者、交通方式;第二步,补充具体活动和感受,让短文内容充实;第三步,使用一般将来时(be going to/will结构)表达计划,确保语言正确、字数达标(不少于50词),条理清晰。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:表达未来计划需用一般将来时,常用结构为“be going to + 动词原形”或“will + 动词原形”;2. 梳理思维导图要素:从思维导图中选取合适内容,如时间选this Saturday,地点选Beijing,同行者选my family,交通选by plane,活动选参观景点、吃美食等;3. 组织语句:先点明整体旅行计划,再依次说明时间、地点、同行人员、交通方式,最后补充具体活动和个人感受,使内容连贯;4. 检查修正:确保语法正确、拼写无误,字数符合要求,满足题目“条理清楚、语言流畅”的要求。
【答案】
My Travel Plan
I am going to visit Beijing this Saturday with my family. We are so excited. I will travel there by plane. It will take us two hours. I am going to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen Square. My father and my mother are going to watch Peking Opera. I am going to eat Beijing roast duck with my brother. That will be fun.
【知识点】
一般将来时、英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣思维导图的五个维度,结构清晰,用一般将来时准确表达旅行计划,内容具体充实,加入了活动细节和个人感受,语言流畅自然,完全符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.3