[佳作赏析]
[经典例题]
近期，金鸡湖学校即将开展学习经验分享交流活动。作为高年级的学长学姐们，你们将以“How to learn English well”为主题，面向七年级的学弟学妹们开展演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 你学习英语过程中经历过的一件事；
2. 这件事对你的启发；
3. 你对七年级同学们的建议。
写作要求：1. 不能在作文中出现学校真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
[高分范文]
Dear younger students，
① As we all know, English is one of the most important languages in the world. Today I'd like to tell you how to learn English well.
In the past, I had trouble learning English.
② To begin with, I was afraid to talk with others in English. It was also hard for me to memorize new words. Besides, I often made mistakes in grammar.
③ How did I deal with my problems? First of all, I improved my spoken English by watching English programmes on TV. It helped a lot. I'm not afraid of speaking English in public now. Later on, I found the best way to memorize new words was reading aloud to practise the pronunciation.
Then I learned a lot about grammar not only by taking notes but also by doing lots of exercises.
In a word, it's important for us to know how to learn English well.
④ If we keep practising English, we'll learn it better and better.
[名师点评]
短文为演讲稿，要求学生结合自己的经历提出学好英语的建议。
① 开头简洁明了，直接点明英语的重要性，从而引出主题——介绍学好英语的方法；
② to begin with、besides、first of all、later on的使用使短文条理清晰、行文流畅；
③ 该句用how引导的特殊疑问句提出问题，引出下文；
④ 结尾句使用了if引导的条件状语从句，强调学好英语要坚持练习，做到首尾呼应，使短文结构合理。
[素材积累]
[开头句]
1. Nowadays, learning English well is important for many of us in this global world.
2. Many people find English hard to learn.
[中间句]
1. Watching films in English is a good way to learn the language.
2. We can train our writing ability by writing English diaries or short articles regularly.
[结尾句]
1. In a word, with consistent effort and the right methods, we can surely learn English well and enjoy the benefits it brings.
2. It is hard to learn a new language, but if we do it in the right way, it will be a lot easier.
[名言警句]
1. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
2. There is no end to learning. 学无止境。
[写作演练]

Dear younger students,
As we all know, English is very important for us. I used to be afraid of speaking English and did badly in it. Later, I joined the English corner and kept practicing every week, and I made great progress soon.
This experience tells us practice is the key to English learning. I advise you to speak English bravely, read English aloud every morning and take notes carefully in class. If you keep working hard, you can learn English well easily.

本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题为"How to learn English well"，写作需覆盖三个核心要点：一是叙述自己学习英语过程中的一段经历，二是点明该经历带来的学习启发，三是给七年级学弟学妹提出实用的英语学习建议。写作时要注意行文逻辑连贯，使用恰当的连接词让内容条理清晰，语言符合演讲稿的口语化风格，词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实校名和人名。

[小试身手]
为了鼓励大家学好英语，汤姆准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和提
示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题。提示：
1. When did you start learning English?
2. How do you learn English?
3. What do you think is difficult to learn?
4. What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先引出英语学习的话题,再按提示介绍开始学习英语的时间、学习方法及难学之处,最后分享其他学习英语的好方法并鼓励大家学好英语。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
My English learning

(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)

One possible version:
My English learning
English is important. Here is my learning experience.
I started learning English when I was in Grade Three. I usually learn it by reading English books and magazines. They help me learn more words and expressions. And I often practise speaking English with my classmates after class. However, I think grammar is really hard for me to master.
There are some other useful ways too. For example, watching English movies can improve my listening skills and listening to English songs helps me remember words easily. I hope we can all learn English well by using these methods.