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八、书面表达
假设你是顾华，英国学生苏珊给你写了一封邮件介绍自己，同时也想了解你的生活。请认真阅读苏珊的邮件，并写一封邮件回复她。词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
My dream is to be
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
假设你是顾华，英国学生苏珊给你写了一封邮件介绍自己，同时也想了解你的生活。请认真阅读苏珊的邮件，并写一封邮件回复她。词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport. We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy.
My dream is to be
a pianist
in the future.What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
答案
Sample writing:
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport. We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport. We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的邮件写作题，要求以顾华的身份回复苏珊的邮件。解题思路：首先明确苏珊邮件中提及的自身信息，回复时需对应介绍自己的生活（年级、学校、爱好、梦想），同时回应苏珊提出的两个问题（你的梦想是什么？你最喜欢学校生活的哪一点？），遵循邮件格式，保证词数达标，语言符合初中生表达水平。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头说明自己的年级；2. 介绍学校与喜欢的科目；3. 介绍朋友及共同活动；4. 介绍自身爱好与花费的时间；5. 说明自己的梦想；6. 最后回应苏珊的两个问题，完成邮件。
【答案】
Sample writing:
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport. We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、英语词汇运用、英语句型表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定邮件语境完成回复，需整合自身信息并呼应对方问题，是初中生常见写作题型，能有效考查学生的语言组织与应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达中的邮件写作题，要求以顾华的身份回复苏珊的邮件。解题思路：首先明确苏珊邮件中提及的自身信息，回复时需对应介绍自己的生活（年级、学校、爱好、梦想），同时回应苏珊提出的两个问题（你的梦想是什么？你最喜欢学校生活的哪一点？），遵循邮件格式，保证词数达标，语言符合初中生表达水平。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头说明自己的年级；2. 介绍学校与喜欢的科目；3. 介绍朋友及共同活动；4. 介绍自身爱好与花费的时间；5. 说明自己的梦想；6. 最后回应苏珊的两个问题，完成邮件。
【答案】
Sample writing:
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport. We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、英语词汇运用、英语句型表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定邮件语境完成回复，需整合自身信息并呼应对方问题，是初中生常见写作题型，能有效考查学生的语言组织与应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
