六、书面表达(满分20分)
66. 假定你是李华,昨日你校举办了学生英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件,向你的朋友 John 介绍本次活动。
1. 比赛时间;
2. 比赛地点;
3. 比赛情况;
4. 比赛结果;
5. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 根据提示要点写作,并适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名等信息。
Dear John,
I'm so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday.





Yours,
Li Hua

66. 参考范文:
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday.
It took place on the school playground at 3 p.m. 20 students took an active part in this wonderful event. All the students gathered to be the listeners. The speeches covered many subjects and most of the competitors performed well.
One of my classmates shared his thoughts about protecting our Earth. He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. No wonder he won the first prize.
This competition helps us improve spoken English and learn more knowledge at the same time. We all look forward to joining it next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析:[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,考生应注意要点齐全,并可适当补充细节描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。说明写信的目的是与 John 分享昨天的英语演讲比赛;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍这次演讲比赛的信息;
第三步,书写结语。表达这次比赛对提升英语口语和学习知识的帮助,以及大家对下次比赛的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①competition 比赛
②perform 表演,表现
③realise 意识到
[高分句型]
He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. (so...that...引导结果状语从句)