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某报社正举办英语征文竞赛，其主题为“构建和谐社区”。假设你是 Tony，住在湘江社区，请以“How to Create a Harmonious Community”为题写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的看法。
要求：1. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、地址、学校等相关信息；
2. 文中应写出自己补充的三个观点；
3. 书写工整，语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于 80(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：harmonious 和谐的
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community.
某报社正举办英语征文竞赛，其主题为“构建和谐社区”。假设你是 Tony，住在湘江社区，请以“How to Create a Harmonious Community”为题写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的看法。
要求：1. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、地址、学校等相关信息；
2. 文中应写出自己补充的三个观点；
3. 书写工整，语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于 80(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：harmonious 和谐的
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community.
I think our community is beautiful, but I hope it will be harmonious. What should we do to create a harmonious community? Here are my ideas.
First, it's important to create harmonious families. Children in each family should respect their parents and follow their good advice. When they make decisions, they had better tell their parents their thoughts. When they have time, it is necessary for them to talk
with the old in their families.
Second, as the members in the community, we should be friendly to each other. Once someone is in trouble, others should try their best to help him or her.
Third, we should get along well with nature. Therefore, we should take care of flowers, and don't throw away rubbish everywhere. Then our environment will become better and better.
答案
One possible version:
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community. I think our community is beautiful, but I hope it will be harmonious. What should we do to create a harmonious community? Here are my ideas.
First, it's important to create harmonious families. Children in each family should respect their parents and follow their good advice. When they make decisions, they had better tell their parents their thoughts. When they have time, it is necessary for them to talk
with the old in their families.
Second, as the members in the community, we should be friendly to each other. Once someone is in trouble, others should try their best to help him or her.
Third, we should get along well with nature. Therefore, we should take care of flowers, and don't throw away rubbish everywhere. Then our environment will become better and better.
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community. I think our community is beautiful, but I hope it will be harmonious. What should we do to create a harmonious community? Here are my ideas.
First, it's important to create harmonious families. Children in each family should respect their parents and follow their good advice. When they make decisions, they had better tell their parents their thoughts. When they have time, it is necessary for them to talk
with the old in their families.
Second, as the members in the community, we should be friendly to each other. Once someone is in trouble, others should try their best to help him or her.
Third, we should get along well with nature. Therefore, we should take care of flowers, and don't throw away rubbish everywhere. Then our environment will become better and better.
解析
【解析】
本题要求以“How to Create a Harmonious Community”为题写一篇英语征文，需围绕家人、邻里、人与自然三个方面补充观点，结合自身社区生活完成写作，需符合词数要求，保证语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community. I think our community is beautiful, but I hope it will be harmonious. What should we do to create a harmonious community? Here are my ideas.
First, it's important to create harmonious families. Children in each family should respect their parents and follow their good advice. When they make decisions, they had better tell their parents their thoughts. When they have time, it is necessary for them to talk with the old in their families.
Second, as the members in the community, we should be friendly to each other. Once someone is in trouble, others should try their best to help him or her.
Third, we should get along well with nature. Therefore, we should take care of flowers, and don't throw away rubbish everywhere. Then our environment will become better and better.
【知识点】
应用文写作；社区类话题；和谐主题表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查学生英语写作与语言组织能力，引导学生关注社区和谐建设，培养学生的社区责任感。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以“How to Create a Harmonious Community”为题写一篇英语征文，需围绕家人、邻里、人与自然三个方面补充观点，结合自身社区生活完成写作，需符合词数要求，保证语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community. I think our community is beautiful, but I hope it will be harmonious. What should we do to create a harmonious community? Here are my ideas.
First, it's important to create harmonious families. Children in each family should respect their parents and follow their good advice. When they make decisions, they had better tell their parents their thoughts. When they have time, it is necessary for them to talk with the old in their families.
Second, as the members in the community, we should be friendly to each other. Once someone is in trouble, others should try their best to help him or her.
Third, we should get along well with nature. Therefore, we should take care of flowers, and don't throw away rubbish everywhere. Then our environment will become better and better.
【知识点】
应用文写作；社区类话题；和谐主题表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查学生英语写作与语言组织能力，引导学生关注社区和谐建设，培养学生的社区责任感。
【难度系数】
0.7
