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假定你是李华，上周末你受朋友之邀到南昌旅游。请你用英语给朋友 Mike 写一封电子邮件，介绍这次的旅游经历，内容包括：
1. 参观了南昌美术馆，看到了很多名画；
2. 去了附近的乡村、钓鱼、采摘水果、品尝美食等；
3. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 80 词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike.
How's it going?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
1. 参观了南昌美术馆，看到了很多名画；
2. 去了附近的乡村、钓鱼、采摘水果、品尝美食等；
3. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 80 词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike.
How's it going?
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
【写作指导】
1. 审题
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般过去时为主
写作要点：1. 旅游经历；2. 个人感受。
2. 谋篇
第一部分：说明写信的目的
I'm glad to tell you... /I'd like to share... with you.
第二部分：叙述上周末在南昌所做的事情，可适当增加细节或者表达自己的看法
First，... After that，... In the evening，we tried... for dinner. The food was so...
第三部分：谈谈自己对这次出行的感受
The trip was... and I... /I think this trip was... but...
3. 成文
Dear Mike，
How's it going? I am glad to tell you what I did last weekend.
I was invited to take a trip to Nanchang. First，we paid a visit to the Nanchang Art Museum，where we saw many famous paintings. Most of them were really amazing. After that，we went to a nearby village. We went fishing there，and at the same time we tasted the fresh fruits picked from the trees. How happy we were! In the evening，we tried some special local food for dinner. The food was so delicious.
The trip was unforgettable and Nanchang is a place worth visiting.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
1. 审题
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般过去时为主
写作要点：1. 旅游经历；2. 个人感受。
2. 谋篇
第一部分：说明写信的目的
I'm glad to tell you... /I'd like to share... with you.
第二部分：叙述上周末在南昌所做的事情，可适当增加细节或者表达自己的看法
First，... After that，... In the evening，we tried... for dinner. The food was so...
第三部分：谈谈自己对这次出行的感受
The trip was... and I... /I think this trip was... but...
3. 成文
Dear Mike，
How's it going? I am glad to tell you what I did last weekend.
I was invited to take a trip to Nanchang. First，we paid a visit to the Nanchang Art Museum，where we saw many famous paintings. Most of them were really amazing. After that，we went to a nearby village. We went fishing there，and at the same time we tasted the fresh fruits picked from the trees. How happy we were! In the evening，we tried some special local food for dinner. The food was so delicious.
The trip was unforgettable and Nanchang is a place worth visiting.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
1. 审题：人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主，需涵盖参观南昌美术馆、乡村活动及个人感受三个核心要点。
2. 谋篇：
开篇：表明写信意图，说明是为分享南昌旅游经历。
主体：依次叙述参观美术馆的见闻、乡村钓鱼、采摘、品尝美食等活动，可适当添加细节增强生动性。
结尾：抒发对此次旅行的感受。
3. 成文：运用恰当衔接词（如First, After that）使行文连贯，用贴合语境的表达丰富内容。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How's it going? I am glad to tell you what I did last weekend.
I was invited to take a trip to Nanchang. First，we paid a visit to the Nanchang Art Museum，where we saw many famous paintings. Most of them were really amazing. After that，we went to a nearby village. We went fishing there，and at the same time we tasted the fresh fruits picked from the trees. How happy we were! In the evening，we tried some special local food for dinner. The food was so delicious.
The trip was unforgettable and Nanchang is a place worth visiting.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时运用、游记类写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要点，内容完整连贯，时态运用准确，衔接自然，语言表达地道，符合词数要求，生动展现了南昌旅游经历与个人感受，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 审题：人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主，需涵盖参观南昌美术馆、乡村活动及个人感受三个核心要点。
2. 谋篇：
开篇：表明写信意图，说明是为分享南昌旅游经历。
主体：依次叙述参观美术馆的见闻、乡村钓鱼、采摘、品尝美食等活动，可适当添加细节增强生动性。
结尾：抒发对此次旅行的感受。
3. 成文：运用恰当衔接词（如First, After that）使行文连贯，用贴合语境的表达丰富内容。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How's it going? I am glad to tell you what I did last weekend.
I was invited to take a trip to Nanchang. First，we paid a visit to the Nanchang Art Museum，where we saw many famous paintings. Most of them were really amazing. After that，we went to a nearby village. We went fishing there，and at the same time we tasted the fresh fruits picked from the trees. How happy we were! In the evening，we tried some special local food for dinner. The food was so delicious.
The trip was unforgettable and Nanchang is a place worth visiting.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时运用、游记类写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要点，内容完整连贯，时态运用准确，衔接自然，语言表达地道，符合词数要求，生动展现了南昌旅游经历与个人感受，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
