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现代技术的进步使我们的学习方式发生了变化，通过网络进行学习正变得越来越受欢迎。假定你是李华，打算参加学校英语俱乐部组织的关于线上学习主题的征稿活动。请以“Online Learning”为题，写一篇文章谈谈你对线上学习的看法。
写作要点：
1. 对线上学习的看法；
2. 喜欢或不喜欢线上学习的理由。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
2. 词数 80 左右(短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing.
写作要点：
1. 对线上学习的看法；
2. 喜欢或不喜欢线上学习的理由。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
2. 词数 80 左右(短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing.
答案
【写作指导】
1. 审题
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
注意事项：根据提示内容进行写作，信息要点应齐全，可适当发挥；适当运用衔接词，以使文章条理更清晰、行文更连贯
2. 谋篇
第一部分：说明线上学习越来越受欢迎，表达自己对线上学习的看法
Online learning is becoming more and more popular. I really enjoy/can't stand learning on the Internet.
第二部分：说明喜欢/不喜欢线上学习的理由
Firstly，... Secondly，... What's more，...
3. 成文
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing. Online learning is becoming more and more popular. I enjoy learning on the Internet.
Firstly，I can have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way，I can have more freedom to arrange my life. Secondly，I can have online communication with people all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. What's more，online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet，I can access information，connect with people，and get to know what's going on around the world immediately. That's really wonderful!
1. 审题
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
注意事项：根据提示内容进行写作，信息要点应齐全，可适当发挥；适当运用衔接词，以使文章条理更清晰、行文更连贯
2. 谋篇
第一部分：说明线上学习越来越受欢迎，表达自己对线上学习的看法
Online learning is becoming more and more popular. I really enjoy/can't stand learning on the Internet.
第二部分：说明喜欢/不喜欢线上学习的理由
Firstly，... Secondly，... What's more，...
3. 成文
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing. Online learning is becoming more and more popular. I enjoy learning on the Internet.
Firstly，I can have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way，I can have more freedom to arrange my life. Secondly，I can have online communication with people all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. What's more，online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet，I can access information，connect with people，and get to know what's going on around the world immediately. That's really wonderful!
解析
【解析】
1. 审题：人称以第一、三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，需覆盖“对线上学习的看法”和“喜欢/不喜欢的理由”核心要点，可适当拓展，合理使用衔接词增强行文连贯性。
2. 谋篇：开篇点明线上学习的流行趋势并表明自身态度；中间借助Firstly、Secondly、What's more等衔接词分条阐述理由；结尾可呼应观点强化感受。
3. 写作需控制词数在80左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
【答案】
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing. Online learning is becoming more and more popular. I enjoy learning on the Internet.
Firstly，I can have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way，I can have more freedom to arrange my life. Secondly，I can have online communication with people all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. What's more，online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet，I can access information，connect with people，and get to know what's going on around the world immediately. That's really wonderful!
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、一般现在时运用、衔接词使用
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，观点明确，理由详实且层次分明，衔接词的恰当使用让行文流畅自然，内容饱满符合词数限制，完美完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 审题：人称以第一、三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，需覆盖“对线上学习的看法”和“喜欢/不喜欢的理由”核心要点，可适当拓展，合理使用衔接词增强行文连贯性。
2. 谋篇：开篇点明线上学习的流行趋势并表明自身态度；中间借助Firstly、Secondly、What's more等衔接词分条阐述理由；结尾可呼应观点强化感受。
3. 写作需控制词数在80左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
【答案】
Online Learning
With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing. Online learning is becoming more and more popular. I enjoy learning on the Internet.
Firstly，I can have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way，I can have more freedom to arrange my life. Secondly，I can have online communication with people all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. What's more，online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet，I can access information，connect with people，and get to know what's going on around the world immediately. That's really wonderful!
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、一般现在时运用、衔接词使用
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求，观点明确，理由详实且层次分明，衔接词的恰当使用让行文流畅自然，内容饱满符合词数限制，完美完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
