写作例析
沟通，是一道彩虹，用炫彩的桥梁架起心与心的方向。青少年处于人生中最重要的阶段，恰当的沟通可以让生活充满阳光与温暖。
某校以“学会沟通，让心更近”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，结合亲身经历，选择一个内容，写一篇短文，谈谈你对沟通的理解。

内容包括：★ your opinion about communication
★ an experience you had
★ the influence that communication leaves on you
要求：词数80~100。
[审题指导]
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 话题：如何恰当沟通、交流
3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
[思路点拨]

[精彩范文]
The Magic of Communication
I think of communication as a rainbow bridge that brings hearts together. It’s so important for teens, filling our days with sunshine and warmth.
96 英语 八上R
At school, I found that open communication makes a big difference. Once, our project almost failed because we kept our thoughts to ourselves. When we finally shared and listened, everything got better. This taught me the value of open communication for understanding and teamwork. Good communication also makes me more confident and helps me make strong friendships.
So I am sure we can create a friendly world if we learn to communicate well.
高分点评：1. 文章思路清晰，按总—分—总的结构进行分段写作，结构紧凑。 2. 正确、合理地使用两种时态，使文章条理清晰。 3. 使用了if引导的条件状语从句以及make sb. + adj. 等句式和短语，使文章内容更丰富充实。
实战演练
在我们日常生活中，及时沟通很重要。通过沟通，误会和分歧能有效化解，矛盾与冲突可以及时化解。请以“Communication Is Important”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过沟通解决问题的经历，或谈谈沟通给我们带来的好处。
提示：1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve a problem through communication?
3. What did you learn from the experience?
要求：词数80~100。
Communication Is Important

Communication Is Important
It's important to learn to communicate well with others. I think the most useful skill in communicating better is to respect others.
Last year I went travelling with my good friend. When I made the plan, he disagreed. We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. Later, I thought his advice was better. I said sorry to him and then we had a good trip.
In my opinion, everyone should learn how to get on well with others and learn to listen to and understand others. We should also respect others politely.
【思路分析】第一段写沟通的重要性；第二段写实际经历；第三段总结观点。