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假如你是李辉，你的美国笔友 Peter给你发邮件，想要了解你开学第一周的校园生活，请你给他回复邮件。要点如下：
1.谈论学习内容；
2.描述校园活动；
3.表达个人感受。
[审题指导]
1.体裁：应用文；2.人称：以第一人称为主；
3.时态：以一般现在时为主。
[思路构建]
点明主旨，
I'm very happy to tell yousomething about my school life.
引出下文
We have... lessons a day.
学习内容及校
My first lesson is...
园活动：可按
My favourite lesson is...
Myschoollife
照课程和活图1 There are lots of clubs. We can...的时间顺序进
行介绍
I'm now a member of... club
because...
总结个人感
My school life is busy, but Ienjoy my colourful school life!
受和收获
[精彩范文]
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail! I'm very happy to tell yousomething about my school life.
At school, we have three lessons in the morning andtwo lessons in the afternoon. My first lesson is math.My favourite lesson is English. In English class, I oftenput up my hand to answer English questions. Sometimesthe question is difficult but I want to try my best. So myEnglish teacher often praises me for my hard work. I feelvery happy! Besides, there are lots of interesting clubsin my school. We can draw, dance, play ball games in theclubs. I like playing ping-pong best, so I'm now a memberof the ping-pong club.
All in all, my school life is busy, but I enjoy mycolourful school life!
Yours,
Li Hui
高分点评：1.采用“总分总”结构，思路清晰，详略得当。2.连词 but，so的使用，增强了文章的逻辑性。3. 短语 put up, answer English questions, try my best 等贴合真实情境，与学生生活实际紧密相连，能够做到对模块重点语言知识学以致用。 4. happy, enjoy, difficult,interesting,colourful 等表达个人感受的词汇运用恰到好处，使文章具有真情实感。
实战演练(20 分) 得分
学校英语周刊正在征集以“A New Start-MyJunior High”为题的文章，请你用英文写一篇文章，描述你开学第一天的经历和感受。要点如下：
1.描述你去上学前的心情；
2.谈论与老师和同学的交流；
3.表达感受。
词数不少于 60。
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假如你是李辉，你的美国笔友 Peter给你发邮件，想要了解你开学第一周的校园生活，请你给他回复邮件。要点如下：
1.谈论学习内容；
2.描述校园活动；
3.表达个人感受。
[审题指导]
1.体裁：应用文；2.人称：以第一人称为主；
3.时态：以一般现在时为主。
[思路构建]
点明主旨，
I'm very happy to tell yousomething about my school life.
引出下文
We have... lessons a day.
学习内容及校
My first lesson is...
园活动：可按
My favourite lesson is...
Myschoollife
照课程和活图1 There are lots of clubs. We can...的时间顺序进
行介绍
I'm now a member of... club
because...
总结个人感
My school life is busy, but Ienjoy my colourful school life!
受和收获
[精彩范文]
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail! I'm very happy to tell yousomething about my school life.
At school, we have three lessons in the morning andtwo lessons in the afternoon. My first lesson is math.My favourite lesson is English. In English class, I oftenput up my hand to answer English questions. Sometimesthe question is difficult but I want to try my best. So myEnglish teacher often praises me for my hard work. I feelvery happy! Besides, there are lots of interesting clubsin my school. We can draw, dance, play ball games in theclubs. I like playing ping-pong best, so I'm now a memberof the ping-pong club.
All in all, my school life is busy, but I enjoy mycolourful school life!
Yours,
Li Hui
高分点评：1.采用“总分总”结构，思路清晰，详略得当。2.连词 but，so的使用，增强了文章的逻辑性。3. 短语 put up, answer English questions, try my best 等贴合真实情境，与学生生活实际紧密相连，能够做到对模块重点语言知识学以致用。 4. happy, enjoy, difficult,interesting,colourful 等表达个人感受的词汇运用恰到好处，使文章具有真情实感。
实战演练(20 分) 得分
学校英语周刊正在征集以“A New Start-MyJunior High”为题的文章，请你用英文写一篇文章，描述你开学第一天的经历和感受。要点如下：
1.描述你去上学前的心情；
2.谈论与老师和同学的交流；
3.表达感受。
词数不少于 60。
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答案
A New Start—My Junior High
I am excited and nervous on my first day of junior high. I am excited because I am a student of junior high school. I am nervous because I don't quite know about the teachers and students in this school.
However, when I sit down at my desk and begin to know about my teachers and classmates, I find everyone is really nice to me. The teachers are very kind and ready to help us. One of the teachers asks us to introduce ourselves. My classmates are active and easy to get along with. After class, I play soccer with my new friends on the playground. I chat with my English teacher.
I really like my junior high. I'm going to work hard and make more friends.
【思路点拨】第一步,先总结去上学前的心情及原因;第二步,具体描述在学校的经历;第三步,概述一天结束后自己的感受。
I am excited and nervous on my first day of junior high. I am excited because I am a student of junior high school. I am nervous because I don't quite know about the teachers and students in this school.
However, when I sit down at my desk and begin to know about my teachers and classmates, I find everyone is really nice to me. The teachers are very kind and ready to help us. One of the teachers asks us to introduce ourselves. My classmates are active and easy to get along with. After class, I play soccer with my new friends on the playground. I chat with my English teacher.
I really like my junior high. I'm going to work hard and make more friends.
【思路点拨】第一步,先总结去上学前的心情及原因;第二步,具体描述在学校的经历;第三步,概述一天结束后自己的感受。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“A New Start—My Junior High”为题，描述开学第一天的经历与感受。解题思路分三步：第一步，开篇点明开学前的心情（兴奋又紧张）并说明原因；第二步，具体描述在学校与老师、同学的交流及活动，体现师生的友好；第三步，总结对初中生活的喜爱及未来打算，确保符合词数要求，采用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主，用连接词增强逻辑。
【解析】
按照写作思路，先写开学前的心情及原因：I am excited and nervous on my first day of junior high. I am excited because I am a student of junior high school. I am nervous because I don't quite know about the teachers and students in this school. 接着描述学校经历：老师让自我介绍，同学活跃好相处，课后和新朋友踢足球、与英语老师聊天；最后表达感受：喜欢初中生活，打算努力学习交更多朋友，确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【答案】
A New Start—My Junior High
I am excited and nervous on my first day of junior high. I am excited because I am a student of junior high school. I am nervous because I don't quite know about the teachers and students in this school.
However, when I sit down at my desk and begin to know about my teachers and classmates, I find everyone is really nice to me. The teachers are very kind and ready to help us. One of the teachers asks us to introduce ourselves. My classmates are active and easy to get along with. After class, I play soccer with my new friends on the playground. I chat with my English teacher.
I really like my junior high. I'm going to work hard and make more friends.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语时态运用、英语写作表达
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，采用“总分总”结构，先点明心情，再具体描述经历，最后表达感受，内容完整；语言表达准确，用词恰当，符合初中英语写作要求，体现了对模块重点语言知识的运用。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“A New Start—My Junior High”为题，描述开学第一天的经历与感受。解题思路分三步：第一步，开篇点明开学前的心情（兴奋又紧张）并说明原因；第二步，具体描述在学校与老师、同学的交流及活动，体现师生的友好；第三步，总结对初中生活的喜爱及未来打算，确保符合词数要求，采用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主，用连接词增强逻辑。
【解析】
按照写作思路，先写开学前的心情及原因：I am excited and nervous on my first day of junior high. I am excited because I am a student of junior high school. I am nervous because I don't quite know about the teachers and students in this school. 接着描述学校经历：老师让自我介绍，同学活跃好相处，课后和新朋友踢足球、与英语老师聊天；最后表达感受：喜欢初中生活，打算努力学习交更多朋友，确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【答案】
A New Start—My Junior High
I am excited and nervous on my first day of junior high. I am excited because I am a student of junior high school. I am nervous because I don't quite know about the teachers and students in this school.
However, when I sit down at my desk and begin to know about my teachers and classmates, I find everyone is really nice to me. The teachers are very kind and ready to help us. One of the teachers asks us to introduce ourselves. My classmates are active and easy to get along with. After class, I play soccer with my new friends on the playground. I chat with my English teacher.
I really like my junior high. I'm going to work hard and make more friends.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语时态运用、英语写作表达
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，采用“总分总”结构，先点明心情，再具体描述经历，最后表达感受，内容完整；语言表达准确，用词恰当，符合初中英语写作要求，体现了对模块重点语言知识的运用。
【难度系数】
0.5
