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话题分析
本单元的核心写作话题是太空探索相关内容，包含两类高频写作方向：一是介绍中国航天成就/太空探索的意义，二是分享个人的太空梦想，要求学生围绕主题，从航天成就的基本信息（项目名称、发射时间、意义等）、探索太空的原因、个人梦想与感悟等方面展开写作，引导学生分享航天认知、锻炼说明类写作与书面表达能力，同时巩固一般将来时被动语态的运用。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
2.
3.
4.
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6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
[高分句式]
1. 近年来中国在太空探索领域取得了巨大成就，这让所有中国人感到自豪。
2. 我的太空梦想是在不久的将来在月球上建造一座空间站。
3. 太空探索不仅帮助我们更多地了解宇宙，还研发出改善我们日常生活的新技术。
4. 作为青少年，我们应该牢记太空梦想，努力在未来探索宇宙。
典例讲解
假设你是李华，你校将举办“我的太空梦想”主题分享会，请你写一篇英语短文来分享你的梦想。内容包括：
1. 你的太空梦想是什么；
2. 你有这个梦想的原因；
3. 你为实现梦想的打算。
注意:1. 词数100左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;2. 短文须包含内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:contribution 贡献
My Space Dream
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作的核心目的是向读者分享个人的太空梦想,包括梦想内容、原因与实现计划,兼具说明性和抒情性,属于说明文范畴。
▶审人称:介绍个人梦想与计划时以第一人称为主;分享航天成就时以第三人称为主,使表达更具主观性和真实感。
▶审时态:用一般将来时(含被动语态)描述未来的太空计划;用一般现在时描述梦想的原因、个人的打算等;用现在完成时说明航天成就带来的影响,强调过去的成就对现在的影响。
[写作提纲]
[优秀范文]
My Space Dream
My space dream is to become an astronaut and work on China's space station in the future. I've always been deeply fascinated by space exploration since I was a child.
The reason why I have this dream is that I want to explore the mysteries of the universe and do my part for China's space industry. China's amazing space achievements, like the Tiangong Space Station and Zhurong rover, have always inspired me a lot. To realize my dream, I will study hard at science and maths, keep exercising to build a strong body, and follow space news to learn more about aerospace.
I know the road to my dream is full of challenges, but I will never give up. I hope I can make my own contribution to China's space industry one day.
[实战演练]
假如你是九年级三班的李华,你校英语网站正在举办以“我最骄傲的中国航天成就”为主题的征文活动,你想向大家推荐天宫空间站。请你按以下内容要求写一篇英语短文上传到英语网站。内容包括:
1. 基本信息:China's first long-term manned space station; fully completed in 2022;
2. 作用:(1)provide a platform for Chinese scientists to do deep space research and develop new technologies (2)open a door for international cooperation in space (3)inspire young students to pursue their space dreams
3. 说明推荐给同学的理由(自行发挥)。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;2. 短文须包含内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine.
话题分析
本单元的核心写作话题是太空探索相关内容，包含两类高频写作方向：一是介绍中国航天成就/太空探索的意义，二是分享个人的太空梦想，要求学生围绕主题，从航天成就的基本信息（项目名称、发射时间、意义等）、探索太空的原因、个人梦想与感悟等方面展开写作，引导学生分享航天认知、锻炼说明类写作与书面表达能力，同时巩固一般将来时被动语态的运用。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
space exploration
太空探索2.
achieve one's dream
实现某人的梦想3.
be launched into space
被发射进入太空4.
space station
空间站5.
make great achievements
取得巨大成就6.
in the near future
在不久的将来7.
develop new technologies
研发新技术8.
take pride in
为……感到自豪9.
space dream
太空梦想10.
work together/cooperate with ...
合作[高分句式]
1. 近年来中国在太空探索领域取得了巨大成就，这让所有中国人感到自豪。
China has made great achievements in space exploration in recent years, which makes all Chinese people proud.
2. 我的太空梦想是在不久的将来在月球上建造一座空间站。
My space dream is that a space station will be built on the moon in the near future.
3. 太空探索不仅帮助我们更多地了解宇宙，还研发出改善我们日常生活的新技术。
Space exploration not only helps us know more about the universe, but also develops new technologies that improve our daily life.
4. 作为青少年，我们应该牢记太空梦想，努力在未来探索宇宙。
As teenagers, we should keep our space dreams in mind and work hard to explore the universe in the future.
典例讲解
假设你是李华，你校将举办“我的太空梦想”主题分享会，请你写一篇英语短文来分享你的梦想。内容包括：
1. 你的太空梦想是什么；
2. 你有这个梦想的原因；
3. 你为实现梦想的打算。
注意:1. 词数100左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;2. 短文须包含内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:contribution 贡献
My Space Dream
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作的核心目的是向读者分享个人的太空梦想,包括梦想内容、原因与实现计划,兼具说明性和抒情性,属于说明文范畴。
▶审人称:介绍个人梦想与计划时以第一人称为主;分享航天成就时以第三人称为主,使表达更具主观性和真实感。
▶审时态:用一般将来时(含被动语态)描述未来的太空计划;用一般现在时描述梦想的原因、个人的打算等;用现在完成时说明航天成就带来的影响,强调过去的成就对现在的影响。
[写作提纲]
[优秀范文]
My Space Dream
My space dream is to become an astronaut and work on China's space station in the future. I've always been deeply fascinated by space exploration since I was a child.
The reason why I have this dream is that I want to explore the mysteries of the universe and do my part for China's space industry. China's amazing space achievements, like the Tiangong Space Station and Zhurong rover, have always inspired me a lot. To realize my dream, I will study hard at science and maths, keep exercising to build a strong body, and follow space news to learn more about aerospace.
I know the road to my dream is full of challenges, but I will never give up. I hope I can make my own contribution to China's space industry one day.
[实战演练]
假如你是九年级三班的李华,你校英语网站正在举办以“我最骄傲的中国航天成就”为主题的征文活动,你想向大家推荐天宫空间站。请你按以下内容要求写一篇英语短文上传到英语网站。内容包括:
1. 基本信息:China's first long-term manned space station; fully completed in 2022;
2. 作用:(1)provide a platform for Chinese scientists to do deep space research and develop new technologies (2)open a door for international cooperation in space (3)inspire young students to pursue their space dreams
3. 说明推荐给同学的理由(自行发挥)。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;2. 短文须包含内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine.
The Chinese space achievement I am most proud of is the Tiangong Space Station. It is China's first long-term space station, fully completed in 2022 after years of hard work by Chinese scientists and astronauts. It has become a shining symbol of China's rapid progress in space exploration.
Tiangong not only provides a perfect platform for Chinese scientists to carry out space science experiments and develop new technologies, but also opens a door for international cooperation in space. It also inspires millions of young students in China to pursue their space dreams. I recommend it to all my classmates because it shows our country's great strength, fills us with national pride, and encourages us to study hard to build a better future. It is truly one of the greatest space achievements in modern times.
答案
写作提优专题
[高分词汇]
1. space exploration 2. achieve one's dream 3. be launched into space 4. space station 5. make great achievements
6. in the near future 7. develop new technologies 8. take pride in 9. space dream 10. work together/cooperate with ...
[高分句式]
1. China has made great achievements in space exploration in recent years, which makes all Chinese people proud.
2. My space dream is that a space station will be built on the moon in the near future.
3. Space exploration not only helps us know more about the universe, but also develops new technologies that improve our daily life.
4. As teenagers, we should keep our space dreams in mind and work hard to explore the universe in the future.
【实战演练】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. The Chinese space achievement I am most proud of is the Tiangong Space Station. It is China's first long-term space station, fully completed in 2022 after years of hard work by Chinese scientists and astronauts. It has become a shining symbol of China's rapid progress in space exploration.
Tiangong not only provides a perfect platform for Chinese scientists to carry out space science experiments and develop new technologies, but also opens a door for international cooperation in space. It also inspires millions of young students in China to pursue their space dreams.
I recommend it to all my classmates because it shows our country's great strength, fills us with national pride, and encourages us to study hard to build a better future. It is truly one of the greatest space achievements in modern times.
[高分词汇]
1. space exploration 2. achieve one's dream 3. be launched into space 4. space station 5. make great achievements
6. in the near future 7. develop new technologies 8. take pride in 9. space dream 10. work together/cooperate with ...
[高分句式]
1. China has made great achievements in space exploration in recent years, which makes all Chinese people proud.
2. My space dream is that a space station will be built on the moon in the near future.
3. Space exploration not only helps us know more about the universe, but also develops new technologies that improve our daily life.
4. As teenagers, we should keep our space dreams in mind and work hard to explore the universe in the future.
【实战演练】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. The Chinese space achievement I am most proud of is the Tiangong Space Station. It is China's first long-term space station, fully completed in 2022 after years of hard work by Chinese scientists and astronauts. It has become a shining symbol of China's rapid progress in space exploration.
Tiangong not only provides a perfect platform for Chinese scientists to carry out space science experiments and develop new technologies, but also opens a door for international cooperation in space. It also inspires millions of young students in China to pursue their space dreams.
I recommend it to all my classmates because it shows our country's great strength, fills us with national pride, and encourages us to study hard to build a better future. It is truly one of the greatest space achievements in modern times.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以李华的身份向英语网站投稿，推荐中国航天成就——天宫空间站。解题思路为：①先审题明确体裁（介绍类说明文）、人称（第一人称）、时态（以一般现在时为主，介绍建成时间用一般过去时）；②梳理写作要点：开篇点明推荐的成就，介绍其基本信息，阐述其作用，最后说明推荐理由；③运用积累的高分词汇和句式，适当发挥使内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 审题：确定体裁为介绍类说明文，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，介绍建成时间用一般过去时；
2. 梳理要点：
（1）开篇：自我介绍后点明推荐的成就为天宫空间站；
（2）基本信息：说明其是中国首个长期载人空间站，2022年全面建成；
（3）作用：从提供研究平台、促进国际合作、激励学生三个方面阐述；
（4）推荐理由：结合自身感受，说明其体现国家实力、增强民族自豪感、激励学习；
3. 组织语言：运用积累的高分词汇和句式，确保语法正确，内容连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. The Chinese space achievement I am most proud of is the Tiangong Space Station. It is China's first long-term space station, fully completed in 2022 after years of hard work by Chinese scientists and astronauts. It has become a shining symbol of China's rapid progress in space exploration.
Tiangong not only provides a perfect platform for Chinese scientists to carry out space science experiments and develop new technologies, but also opens a door for international cooperation in space. It also inspires millions of young students in China to pursue their space dreams.
I recommend it to all my classmates because it shows our country's great strength, fills us with national pride, and encourages us to study hard to build a better future. It is truly one of the greatest space achievements in modern times.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、航天英语表达、说明文写作
【点评】
本题围绕中国航天成就展开写作，既考查学生的英语书面表达能力，又渗透了爱国主义教育，要求学生结合给定要点适当发挥，符合初中英语写作提优的目标，需学生熟练运用积累的词汇句式，确保要点齐全、内容连贯。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以李华的身份向英语网站投稿，推荐中国航天成就——天宫空间站。解题思路为：①先审题明确体裁（介绍类说明文）、人称（第一人称）、时态（以一般现在时为主，介绍建成时间用一般过去时）；②梳理写作要点：开篇点明推荐的成就，介绍其基本信息，阐述其作用，最后说明推荐理由；③运用积累的高分词汇和句式，适当发挥使内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 审题：确定体裁为介绍类说明文，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，介绍建成时间用一般过去时；
2. 梳理要点：
（1）开篇：自我介绍后点明推荐的成就为天宫空间站；
（2）基本信息：说明其是中国首个长期载人空间站，2022年全面建成；
（3）作用：从提供研究平台、促进国际合作、激励学生三个方面阐述；
（4）推荐理由：结合自身感受，说明其体现国家实力、增强民族自豪感、激励学习；
3. 组织语言：运用积累的高分词汇和句式，确保语法正确，内容连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. The Chinese space achievement I am most proud of is the Tiangong Space Station. It is China's first long-term space station, fully completed in 2022 after years of hard work by Chinese scientists and astronauts. It has become a shining symbol of China's rapid progress in space exploration.
Tiangong not only provides a perfect platform for Chinese scientists to carry out space science experiments and develop new technologies, but also opens a door for international cooperation in space. It also inspires millions of young students in China to pursue their space dreams.
I recommend it to all my classmates because it shows our country's great strength, fills us with national pride, and encourages us to study hard to build a better future. It is truly one of the greatest space achievements in modern times.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、航天英语表达、说明文写作
【点评】
本题围绕中国航天成就展开写作，既考查学生的英语书面表达能力，又渗透了爱国主义教育，要求学生结合给定要点适当发挥，符合初中英语写作提优的目标，需学生熟练运用积累的词汇句式，确保要点齐全、内容连贯。
【难度系数】
0.5
