主题写作专项 ＞＞练写作 答案D39
主题词网
介绍节日
时间 · fall on
庆祝活动 · celebrate
· hold parades
· family reunion
原因 · bring people closer
感受 · important
优选词汇
· take place on
· a spring outing
· admire the full moon
· express gratitude
· drive away bad luck
· popular
· be celebrated on
· set off fireworks
· eat mooncakes
· honour ancestors
· pray for good luck
· wonderful
· be observed on
· put up lanterns
· watch boat races
· celebrate the harvest
· welcome the new year
写作实例
→审主题
你校英语俱乐部即将举办一次主题为“ My favourite Chinese festival ”的征文活动。假如你最喜欢的节日是元宵节,现在请你写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。内容包括:
1.元宵节的时间及意义;
2.元宵节的活动(吃元宵、看灯会和舞龙);
3.你最喜欢元宵节的理由。
→审要点
→审人称: 第一、三人称
→审时态: 一般现在时
要求:1.紧扣主题,表达准确,语义连贯;
2.词数100左右。→审词数
参考词语:lantern shows 灯会;dragon dances 舞龙
写作支架
开头 → 开篇点题,并介绍该节日的时间和意义：Among many traditional Chinese festivals, is my favourite. It falls on . It marks and is believed to .
中间 → 详细介绍该节日的活动：At the , I can eat with . We also go to see . My favourite part is . Every time I see , I feel very happy and excited. (高分句式1)
结尾 → 结尾扣题,解释喜欢该节日的原因：I love this festival because . (高分句式2) When we get together, , I feel truly warm inside.
优秀范文
Among many traditional Chinese festivals, the Lantern Festival is my favourite. ① It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month. It marks the end of the Spring Festival celebrations and is believed to bring good luck for the coming year. ②
At the Lantern Festival, I can eat sweet yuanxiao with my family. They are like small white balls, delicious and warm! We also go to see beautiful lantern shows. The streets are lit up with lanterns of all shapes and sizes! My favourite part is watching dragon dances. Every time I see the colourful dragon moving to the lively music, I feel very happy and excited. ③ What great pleasure the dances bring to me!
I love this festival because it’s full of warm family time. ④ When we get together, laughing and enjoying ourselves, I feel truly warm inside.
亮点评析
①开篇点题,点明作者最喜欢的传统节日是元宵节。
②该句点明元宵节的意义。
③该句含有Every time引导的时间状语从句,描述了作者看舞龙时开心兴奋的心情。
④该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,解释了作者喜欢这个节日的原因。

写作支架填空答案
1. the Lantern Festival
2. the 15th day of the first lunar month
3. the end of the Spring Festival celebrations
4. bring good luck for the coming year
5. Lantern Festival
6. sweet yuanxiao
7. my family
8. watching dragon dances
9. the colourful dragon moving to the lively music
10. it's full of warm family time
11. laughing and enjoying ourselves
完整参考范文
# My favourite Chinese festival
Among many traditional Chinese festivals, the Lantern Festival is my favourite. It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month. It marks the end of the Spring Festival celebrations and is believed to bring good luck for the coming year.
At the Lantern Festival, I can eat sweet yuanxiao with my family. They are like small white balls, delicious and warm! We also go to see beautiful lantern shows. The streets are lit up with lanterns of all shapes and sizes! My favourite part is watching dragon dances. Every time I see the colourful dragon moving to the lively music, I feel very happy and excited.
I love this festival because it's full of warm family time. When we get together, laughing and enjoying ourselves, I feel truly warm inside.

本题是九年级英语介绍中国传统节日主题的征文写作题，写作要求如下：① 内容需覆盖元宵节的时间与文化意义、吃元宵/看灯会/舞龙的节日活动、个人喜爱该节日的理由三个要点；② 人称以第一、三人称为主，时态统一用一般现在时，词数控制在100词左右。写作可按照"开篇点题介绍节日基本信息-中间详细描述节日特色活动-结尾扣题说明喜爱理由"的三段式结构展开，可使用Every time引导的时间状语从句、because引导的原因状语从句等高分句式，让表达更生动连贯。