Ⅲ. Writing(作文)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假设你是李华,计划和同学一起完成一篇关于"尼泊尔文化(Nepalese culture)礼仪"的英语研究性学习报告,需要向学校文化交流社团申请加入他们的"亚洲民俗调研小组"。请你写一封申请邮件,邮件内容需包含:
(1)明确说明你想要加入的小组及申请理由;
(2)结合自身优势(如文化积累、调研经验、语言能力等)说明你能为小组做出的贡献;
(3)针对小组后续调研活动,提出一条具体可行的建议。
Dear Sir/Madam,
(60)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假设你是李华,计划和同学一起完成一篇关于"尼泊尔文化(Nepalese culture)礼仪"的英语研究性学习报告,需要向学校文化交流社团申请加入他们的"亚洲民俗调研小组"。请你写一封申请邮件,邮件内容需包含:
(1)明确说明你想要加入的小组及申请理由;
(2)结合自身优势(如文化积累、调研经验、语言能力等)说明你能为小组做出的贡献;
(3)针对小组后续调研活动,提出一条具体可行的建议。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Asian Folk Customs Research Group. I am deeply interested in Nepalese culture after reading a passage about its unique traditions, and I believe this group will help me explore more.
I have read many articles about Asian cultures and can collect information efficiently. Also, I am good at English writing, so I can help organize our research findings into clear reports.
To make our activities more practical, I suggest we invite exchange students from Nepal to share their real-life experiences. This will make our research more vivid and reliable.
I am looking forward to your reply.
(60)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Asian Folk Customs Research Group. I am deeply interested in Nepalese culture after reading a passage about its unique traditions, and I believe this group will help me explore more.
I have read many articles about Asian cultures and can collect information efficiently. Also, I am good at English writing, so I can help organize our research findings into clear reports.
To make our activities more practical, I suggest we invite exchange students from Nepal to share their real-life experiences. This will make our research more vivid and reliable.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Asian Folk Customs Research Group. I am deeply interested in Nepalese culture after reading a passage about its unique traditions, and I believe this group will help me explore more.
I have read many articles about Asian cultures and can collect information efficiently. Also, I am good at English writing, so I can help organize our research findings into clear reports.
To make our activities more practical, I suggest we invite exchange students from Nepal to share their real-life experiences. This will make our research more vivid and reliable.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封符合要求的申请邮件,需涵盖三个核心内容:一是明确申请加入“亚洲民俗调研小组”并说明理由;二是结合自身优势说明能为小组做出的贡献;三是提出一条具体可行的调研建议。解题思路为:先遵循申请邮件的正式格式(称呼、正文、落款),正文分段落对应三个要求,语言需正式得体,确保所有要点都覆盖,同时满足字数要求。
【解析】1. 开头段:明确申请加入“亚洲民俗调研小组”,理由是对尼泊尔文化礼仪感兴趣,希望借助小组深入研究相关内容;2. 主体段:说明自身优势,如拥有丰富的亚洲文化积累、收集信息高效、英语写作能力强,能为小组整理研究成果成清晰的报告;3. 建议段:提出具体可行的建议,即邀请尼泊尔交换生分享真实生活经历,让调研更生动可靠;最后结尾表达期待回复,完成邮件写作。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Asian Folk Customs Research Group. I am deeply interested in Nepalese culture after reading a passage about its unique traditions, and I believe this group will help me explore more.
I have read many articles about Asian cultures and can collect information efficiently. Also, I am good at English writing, so I can help organize our research findings into clear reports.
To make our activities more practical, I suggest we invite exchange students from Nepal to share their real-life experiences. This will make our research more vivid and reliable.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语作文写作、文化类英语表达
【点评】该作文严格遵循申请邮件的格式,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,建议具体可行,符合英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 开头段:明确申请加入“亚洲民俗调研小组”,理由是对尼泊尔文化礼仪感兴趣,希望借助小组深入研究相关内容;2. 主体段:说明自身优势,如拥有丰富的亚洲文化积累、收集信息高效、英语写作能力强,能为小组整理研究成果成清晰的报告;3. 建议段:提出具体可行的建议,即邀请尼泊尔交换生分享真实生活经历,让调研更生动可靠;最后结尾表达期待回复,完成邮件写作。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Asian Folk Customs Research Group. I am deeply interested in Nepalese culture after reading a passage about its unique traditions, and I believe this group will help me explore more.
I have read many articles about Asian cultures and can collect information efficiently. Also, I am good at English writing, so I can help organize our research findings into clear reports.
To make our activities more practical, I suggest we invite exchange students from Nepal to share their real-life experiences. This will make our research more vivid and reliable.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语作文写作、文化类英语表达
【点评】该作文严格遵循申请邮件的格式,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,建议具体可行,符合英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.3
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