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七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·台州玉环)
76.假设你是李华,在过去的一学年里,你一定经历了很多,获得了不同的成长。近期你校英语社团正在举办以“My School Year Journey(我的学年历程)”为主题的征文活动,请你回顾过去一学年的经历,根据以下提示,任选两个方面,写一篇英语短文投稿。
Book(s) I have read: • what book(s) • what I learnt • ...
Place(s) I have been to: • which place(s) • what I experienced • ...
Volunteer work I have done: • what work • how I felt • ...
Special thing(s) I have had: • what thing(s) • why it is/they are special • ...
要求:(1)短文必须包括任意两方面的所有提示内容,并适当拓展;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)100词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.
76.假设你是李华,在过去的一学年里,你一定经历了很多,获得了不同的成长。近期你校英语社团正在举办以“My School Year Journey(我的学年历程)”为主题的征文活动,请你回顾过去一学年的经历,根据以下提示,任选两个方面,写一篇英语短文投稿。
Book(s) I have read: • what book(s) • what I learnt • ...
Place(s) I have been to: • which place(s) • what I experienced • ...
Volunteer work I have done: • what work • how I felt • ...
Special thing(s) I have had: • what thing(s) • why it is/they are special • ...
要求:(1)短文必须包括任意两方面的所有提示内容,并适当拓展;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)100词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.
答案
76. Possible version 1:
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly,I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship.
Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.
As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
(128 words)
Possible version 2:
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have been to many wonderful places and learnt a lot. Among them, the most interesting place I have ever been to is the film museum. I loved the old movie cameras there and learnt about the inventions that led to colour movies.
Besides, the most special thing I have had this year is some seashells. I got them during a family trip to the beach. The shells always bring back sweet memories and remind me of the fun times on the beach.
As I step into the new school year, I hope I will visit more places that inspire me and collect more special things that bring joy and knowledge.
(119 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文为谈论个人经历与成长的记叙文，围绕学生在校园生活中的经历（阅读、志愿、活动等）及收获展开，描述过去的经历多采用一般过去时。
【提纲演示】
|开头:概述过去一年的经历|The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.|
|正文:具体描述经历及收获|books/places/volunteer work/special things(choose two)|
|结尾:对新学年的期待|As I step into the new school year, I hope I will ...|
难题解析
【阅读理解】
A篇
文章是洛杉矶“海边健身沙滩营地(FBS)”的宣传信息，面向8—14岁儿童，营地位于圣莫尼卡和太平洋帕利塞德，提供游泳、航海、冲浪等水上活动，无论孩子有无海上经验或技能水平均可参与；同时介绍了营地的灵活参与天数、23年安全保障、付费巴士接送服务、营期时间，以及联系方式。
第17题:此题为主旨大意题。文章核心介绍FBS营地聚焦“swimming, sailing, surfing, and more”，均为水上活动；A(安全规则)是营地保障，B(海洋动物)未提及，D(健康爱好)范围过广，均非核心，排除。
B篇
文章讲述了作者青少年时期因不擅长跑步、跳远等传统体育项目，且觉得这些运动无趣而讨厌体育课；如今学校的体育课发生了很大变化，比如杭州部分学校开设爬树课程以增加趣味性，这让作者回忆起自己大学时尝试爬树的经历；作者后来发现了骑行的乐趣，意识到没有人天生讨厌运动，只是尚未找到适合自己的项目。
第22题:此题为推理判断题。作者青少年时期讨厌体育课，后来发现骑行的乐趣，意识到“不是天生讨厌运动，只是没找到合适的”，暗含“坚持尝试就能找到喜欢的运动”；A(爬树是最佳方式)过于绝对，B(体育课对学生总是很难)与文意不符，C(多做运动健身)并非作者核心感悟，排除。
C篇
文章是“志愿者世界”组织的南非儿童托管志愿者项目招募启事，介绍了南非贫困地区的现状——贫困家庭难以找到廉价的儿童托管服务，相关托管中心缺乏工作人员和资源，导致许多孩子缺少照顾和早期教育；随后说明志愿者将在开普敦的托管中心工作，职责包括打扫、准备餐食、教孩子数学和阅读，工作时间为周一至周五，且会为新手搭配有经验的志愿者协助；最后呼吁有意愿的人加入该有意义的项目。
第26题:此题为主旨大意题。文章开篇介绍南非儿童托管志愿者项目，说明招募背景和工作内容，结尾呼吁“加入我们”，核心目的是“鼓励人们参与该托管志愿者项目”；A(解释早教重要性)、B(描述开普敦志愿者活动)、C(介绍南非生活条件)均为招募的铺垫，非核心目的，排除。
D篇
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Madame Frissette因无法支付国王新增的税款而面临失去农场的困境，她的四只鸡通过努力想出办法，最终通过表演杂技成功赚取足够税款的故事。
第30题:最佳标题题。通读全文，文章主要讲述了四只鸡为了帮助主人筹集税款，先后尝试下更多蛋、长更长羽毛失败后，最终通过秘密练习杂技表演成功赚取足够的钱的故事。整个过程是鸡的拯救之旅。A选项“小鸡的拯救之旅”最贴合文章主旨。
【完形填空】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Peter的爷爷因髋关节手术需要拄拐杖，Peter用自己攒的生日礼金为爷爷购买食物和礼物，希望爷爷康复后能再次一起去公园野餐的故事，展现了Peter对爷爷的关爱和期待。
第36题:句意为那清脆的声音总是让他兴奋不已，期待着他们的公园野餐。excited兴奋的；peaceful平静的；nervous紧张的；bored无聊的。根据“look forward to their park picnic”可知，Peter期待着野餐，所以听到铃声会感到兴奋。
第37题:句意为但是这几个星期，Peter感到非常难过，因为爷爷做了髋关节手术，现在需要拄拐杖走路。but但是；and和；because因为；unless除非。根据“Peter felt really sad”和“Grandpa had hip surgery”可知，前后是因果关系，前果后因，用because引导原因状语从句。
第46题:句意为只剩下四美元了，我还能给爷爷买什么呢？two二；three三；four四；five五。根据“10 dollars”和“with one dollar”以及“with three dollars”和“with two dollars”可知，Peter还剩下四美元。
第47题:句意为他四处走动，查看了一切，然后仔细挑选了一个可爱的自行车铃铛。hurriedly匆忙地；carefully仔细地；simply简单地；quietly安静地。根据“looked through everything”可知，Peter仔细挑选了礼物。
第50题:句意为这是为了你的拐杖。with和；to到；for为了；about关于。根据“When you're stronger, we can walk to our picnic in the park with a ring-ring again.”可知，铃铛是为了爷爷的拐杖准备的，等爷爷康复后，就可以一起去公园野餐了。
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly,I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship.
Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.
As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
(128 words)
Possible version 2:
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it.
Firstly, I have been to many wonderful places and learnt a lot. Among them, the most interesting place I have ever been to is the film museum. I loved the old movie cameras there and learnt about the inventions that led to colour movies.
Besides, the most special thing I have had this year is some seashells. I got them during a family trip to the beach. The shells always bring back sweet memories and remind me of the fun times on the beach.
As I step into the new school year, I hope I will visit more places that inspire me and collect more special things that bring joy and knowledge.
(119 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文为谈论个人经历与成长的记叙文，围绕学生在校园生活中的经历（阅读、志愿、活动等）及收获展开，描述过去的经历多采用一般过去时。
【提纲演示】
|开头:概述过去一年的经历|The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.|
|正文:具体描述经历及收获|books/places/volunteer work/special things(choose two)|
|结尾:对新学年的期待|As I step into the new school year, I hope I will ...|
难题解析
【阅读理解】
A篇
文章是洛杉矶“海边健身沙滩营地(FBS)”的宣传信息，面向8—14岁儿童，营地位于圣莫尼卡和太平洋帕利塞德，提供游泳、航海、冲浪等水上活动，无论孩子有无海上经验或技能水平均可参与；同时介绍了营地的灵活参与天数、23年安全保障、付费巴士接送服务、营期时间，以及联系方式。
第17题:此题为主旨大意题。文章核心介绍FBS营地聚焦“swimming, sailing, surfing, and more”，均为水上活动；A(安全规则)是营地保障，B(海洋动物)未提及，D(健康爱好)范围过广，均非核心，排除。
B篇
文章讲述了作者青少年时期因不擅长跑步、跳远等传统体育项目，且觉得这些运动无趣而讨厌体育课；如今学校的体育课发生了很大变化，比如杭州部分学校开设爬树课程以增加趣味性，这让作者回忆起自己大学时尝试爬树的经历；作者后来发现了骑行的乐趣，意识到没有人天生讨厌运动，只是尚未找到适合自己的项目。
第22题:此题为推理判断题。作者青少年时期讨厌体育课，后来发现骑行的乐趣，意识到“不是天生讨厌运动，只是没找到合适的”，暗含“坚持尝试就能找到喜欢的运动”；A(爬树是最佳方式)过于绝对，B(体育课对学生总是很难)与文意不符，C(多做运动健身)并非作者核心感悟，排除。
C篇
文章是“志愿者世界”组织的南非儿童托管志愿者项目招募启事，介绍了南非贫困地区的现状——贫困家庭难以找到廉价的儿童托管服务，相关托管中心缺乏工作人员和资源，导致许多孩子缺少照顾和早期教育；随后说明志愿者将在开普敦的托管中心工作，职责包括打扫、准备餐食、教孩子数学和阅读，工作时间为周一至周五，且会为新手搭配有经验的志愿者协助；最后呼吁有意愿的人加入该有意义的项目。
第26题:此题为主旨大意题。文章开篇介绍南非儿童托管志愿者项目，说明招募背景和工作内容，结尾呼吁“加入我们”，核心目的是“鼓励人们参与该托管志愿者项目”；A(解释早教重要性)、B(描述开普敦志愿者活动)、C(介绍南非生活条件)均为招募的铺垫，非核心目的，排除。
D篇
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Madame Frissette因无法支付国王新增的税款而面临失去农场的困境，她的四只鸡通过努力想出办法，最终通过表演杂技成功赚取足够税款的故事。
第30题:最佳标题题。通读全文，文章主要讲述了四只鸡为了帮助主人筹集税款，先后尝试下更多蛋、长更长羽毛失败后，最终通过秘密练习杂技表演成功赚取足够的钱的故事。整个过程是鸡的拯救之旅。A选项“小鸡的拯救之旅”最贴合文章主旨。
【完形填空】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Peter的爷爷因髋关节手术需要拄拐杖，Peter用自己攒的生日礼金为爷爷购买食物和礼物，希望爷爷康复后能再次一起去公园野餐的故事，展现了Peter对爷爷的关爱和期待。
第36题:句意为那清脆的声音总是让他兴奋不已，期待着他们的公园野餐。excited兴奋的；peaceful平静的；nervous紧张的；bored无聊的。根据“look forward to their park picnic”可知，Peter期待着野餐，所以听到铃声会感到兴奋。
第37题:句意为但是这几个星期，Peter感到非常难过，因为爷爷做了髋关节手术，现在需要拄拐杖走路。but但是；and和；because因为；unless除非。根据“Peter felt really sad”和“Grandpa had hip surgery”可知，前后是因果关系，前果后因，用because引导原因状语从句。
第46题:句意为只剩下四美元了，我还能给爷爷买什么呢？two二；three三；four四；five五。根据“10 dollars”和“with one dollar”以及“with three dollars”和“with two dollars”可知，Peter还剩下四美元。
第47题:句意为他四处走动，查看了一切，然后仔细挑选了一个可爱的自行车铃铛。hurriedly匆忙地；carefully仔细地；simply简单地；quietly安静地。根据“looked through everything”可知，Peter仔细挑选了礼物。
第50题:句意为这是为了你的拐杖。with和；to到；for为了；about关于。根据“When you're stronger, we can walk to our picnic in the park with a ring-ring again.”可知，铃铛是为了爷爷的拐杖准备的，等爷爷康复后，就可以一起去公园野餐了。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My School Year Journey”，要求回顾过去一学年的经历，任选两个提示方面写作。解题思路：1. 审题：明确需包含所选两方面的所有提示内容，适当拓展，100词左右，开头已给出，不能出现真实信息，时态需结合过去经历（一般过去时）和相关收获（现在完成时）；2. 选材：选读书和志愿工作两个易展开的方面；3. 结构：开头承接给定句引出下文，正文分别描述读书的书名、内容、收获，志愿工作的内容、经历、感受，结尾展望新学年；4. 写作：注意语言简洁，符合字数要求，避免真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定写作方向：选取“Book(s) I have read”和“Volunteer work I have done”两个方面，符合题目要求；
2. 开头：承接给定句“The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.”，用“Let me tell you something about it.”引出正文；
3. 正文第一部分（读书）：说明读的书（Harry Potter），介绍书的内容（勇敢男孩和朋友的魔法学校冒险），点明收获（懂得勇敢和友谊）；
4. 正文第二部分（志愿）：描述志愿内容（敬老院做志愿，聊天、打扫），经历后的感受（满足感，明白小善意的力量）；
5. 结尾：展望新学年的计划，呼应主题；
6. 检查：确保两方面都覆盖，无真实信息，字数符合要求，时态正确。
【答案】
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it. Firstly,I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship. Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others. As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、现在完成时
【点评】
本题围绕学生熟悉的校园生活与成长经历命题，主题明确，提示清晰，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生回顾学年收获，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，难度适中，学生易结合自身经历完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My School Year Journey”，要求回顾过去一学年的经历，任选两个提示方面写作。解题思路：1. 审题：明确需包含所选两方面的所有提示内容，适当拓展，100词左右，开头已给出，不能出现真实信息，时态需结合过去经历（一般过去时）和相关收获（现在完成时）；2. 选材：选读书和志愿工作两个易展开的方面；3. 结构：开头承接给定句引出下文，正文分别描述读书的书名、内容、收获，志愿工作的内容、经历、感受，结尾展望新学年；4. 写作：注意语言简洁，符合字数要求，避免真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定写作方向：选取“Book(s) I have read”和“Volunteer work I have done”两个方面，符合题目要求；
2. 开头：承接给定句“The past school year has been a colourful journey for me.”，用“Let me tell you something about it.”引出正文；
3. 正文第一部分（读书）：说明读的书（Harry Potter），介绍书的内容（勇敢男孩和朋友的魔法学校冒险），点明收获（懂得勇敢和友谊）；
4. 正文第二部分（志愿）：描述志愿内容（敬老院做志愿，聊天、打扫），经历后的感受（满足感，明白小善意的力量）；
5. 结尾：展望新学年的计划，呼应主题；
6. 检查：确保两方面都覆盖，无真实信息，字数符合要求，时态正确。
【答案】
The past school year has been a colourful journey for me. Let me tell you something about it. Firstly,I have read many interesting books, including Harry Potter. It is about a brave young boy and his friends' adventures at a magical school. From the book, I got to know something about bravery and friendship. Besides, I have done a lot of volunteer work. In July, I went to the old people's home with my classmates. I talked with the old people and helped them clean their rooms. Seeing their smiles, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. It made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others. As I step into the new school year, I hope to read more good books and do more volunteer work to make my life more fulfilling.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、现在完成时
【点评】
本题围绕学生熟悉的校园生活与成长经历命题，主题明确，提示清晰，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生回顾学年收获，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，难度适中，学生易结合自身经历完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
