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[2025江苏南京调研]同学们一定对《爱丽丝漫游仙境》很感兴趣。请按下列要点用英文续写下面的故事吧！
要点：
1. 吃完写有“吃我”的蛋糕后，爱丽丝越长越大；
2. 她向下看看脚，发现它们是如此远，于是感到很害怕。她坐下来哭了，眼泪（tear）变成一个水池（pool）；
3. 突然一只白兔来了，然后它因为害怕又走了。在池子里，爱丽丝遇到了一只老鼠和一些其他的小动物，它们在一起游来游去。
要求：
1. 注意文章的时态，可作适当发挥；2. 书写清晰、工整；3. 不少于80个词。
[2025江苏南京调研]同学们一定对《爱丽丝漫游仙境》很感兴趣。请按下列要点用英文续写下面的故事吧！
要点：
1. 吃完写有“吃我”的蛋糕后，爱丽丝越长越大；
2. 她向下看看脚，发现它们是如此远，于是感到很害怕。她坐下来哭了，眼泪（tear）变成一个水池（pool）；
3. 突然一只白兔来了，然后它因为害怕又走了。在池子里，爱丽丝遇到了一只老鼠和一些其他的小动物，它们在一起游来游去。
要求：
1. 注意文章的时态，可作适当发挥；2. 书写清晰、工整；3. 不少于80个词。
Alice ate the cake which had the note saying "EAT ME". Then she was quite surprised to find that the cake made her grow bigger and bigger.
When she looked down at her feet, they were so far away. Alice was very afraid. She sat down and began to cry. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her.
Suddenly, Alice heard someone coming. It was a white rabbit. The white rabbit was very afraid and ran away quickly. Alice had to swim in her own tears and met a mouse and some other animals.
They were all swimming in the tears. How amazing! But it was just a dream.
答案
【参考范文】
Alice ate the cake which had the note saying "EAT ME". Then she was quite surprised to find that the cake made her grow bigger and bigger. When she looked down at her feet, they were so far away. Alice was very afraid. She sat down and began to cry. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. Suddenly, Alice heard someone coming. It was a white rabbit. The white rabbit was very afraid and ran away quickly. Alice had to swim in her own tears and met a mouse and some other animals. They were all swimming in the tears.
How amazing! But it was just a dream.
Alice ate the cake which had the note saying "EAT ME". Then she was quite surprised to find that the cake made her grow bigger and bigger. When she looked down at her feet, they were so far away. Alice was very afraid. She sat down and began to cry. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. Suddenly, Alice heard someone coming. It was a white rabbit. The white rabbit was very afraid and ran away quickly. Alice had to swim in her own tears and met a mouse and some other animals. They were all swimming in the tears.
How amazing! But it was just a dream.
解析
【分析】
续写该故事需紧扣给定的3个要点，采用故事叙述常用的一般过去时，补充合理衔接细节让内容连贯。第一步，描述爱丽丝吃写有“吃我”的蛋糕后变大的过程；第二步，写她发现脚离得很远，害怕哭泣，眼泪变成水池的情节；第三步，加入白兔出现又逃走，爱丽丝在泪池遇到老鼠等小动物并一起游泳的内容，适当添加细节使故事更生动，同时确保字数不少于80词。
【解析】
按照要点依次组织语句，使用一般过去时，用then、when、suddenly等衔接词串联内容，补充合理细节。具体步骤：1. 开篇点明爱丽丝吃“吃我”蛋糕后逐渐变大；2. 描述她低头看到脚很远，感到害怕并坐下哭泣，眼泪汇聚成水池；3. 写白兔出现后因害怕逃走，爱丽丝在泪池游泳时遇到老鼠和其他小动物，它们一同在泪池游动，最后可补充一句收尾句让故事完整。
【答案】
Alice ate the cake which had the note saying "EAT ME". Then she was quite surprised to find that the cake made her grow bigger and bigger. When she looked down at her feet, they were so far away. Alice was very afraid. She sat down and began to cry. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. Suddenly, Alice heard someone coming. It was a white rabbit. The white rabbit was very afraid and ran away quickly. Alice had to swim in her own tears and met a mouse and some other animals. They were all swimming in the tears.
How amazing! But it was just a dream.
【知识点】
一般过去时、英语故事续写
【点评】
该续写紧扣题目给定的所有要点，时态运用准确，衔接自然流畅，适当添加细节丰富了故事内容，字数符合要求，是一篇符合标准的续写范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
续写该故事需紧扣给定的3个要点，采用故事叙述常用的一般过去时，补充合理衔接细节让内容连贯。第一步，描述爱丽丝吃写有“吃我”的蛋糕后变大的过程；第二步，写她发现脚离得很远，害怕哭泣，眼泪变成水池的情节；第三步，加入白兔出现又逃走，爱丽丝在泪池遇到老鼠等小动物并一起游泳的内容，适当添加细节使故事更生动，同时确保字数不少于80词。
【解析】
按照要点依次组织语句，使用一般过去时，用then、when、suddenly等衔接词串联内容，补充合理细节。具体步骤：1. 开篇点明爱丽丝吃“吃我”蛋糕后逐渐变大；2. 描述她低头看到脚很远，感到害怕并坐下哭泣，眼泪汇聚成水池；3. 写白兔出现后因害怕逃走，爱丽丝在泪池游泳时遇到老鼠和其他小动物，它们一同在泪池游动，最后可补充一句收尾句让故事完整。
【答案】
Alice ate the cake which had the note saying "EAT ME". Then she was quite surprised to find that the cake made her grow bigger and bigger. When she looked down at her feet, they were so far away. Alice was very afraid. She sat down and began to cry. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. Suddenly, Alice heard someone coming. It was a white rabbit. The white rabbit was very afraid and ran away quickly. Alice had to swim in her own tears and met a mouse and some other animals. They were all swimming in the tears.
How amazing! But it was just a dream.
【知识点】
一般过去时、英语故事续写
【点评】
该续写紧扣题目给定的所有要点，时态运用准确，衔接自然流畅，适当添加细节丰富了故事内容，字数符合要求，是一篇符合标准的续写范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
