十一、读后续写。
上文介绍了明代医药学家李时珍,请参考其写作思路,以“A famous person”为题写一篇短文,介绍一位你熟悉或者崇拜的名人,不少于40个单词。




写作指导

【写作指导】
1. 主题:介绍一位名人。
2. 写作类型:人物介绍。
3. 人称:第三人称。
4. 框架:

5. 写作注意:介绍人物经历时,谓语动词用过去式。
【参考范文】 A famous person
Dr Sun Yatsen is a very famous person in Chi-
nese history. He was born in Guangdong. He tried to
free the Chinese people. He loved the Chinese people
and the Chinese people love him very much. Today
many streets, schools and parks are named after him.
He is my hero.

【分析】本题要求以“A famous person”为题写人物介绍短文，需遵循给定写作框架：首先开篇点明要介绍的名人；接着分三部分展开：人物出生信息（用“He/She was born in...”句式）、人生经历（用动词过去式）、对社会的影响（用“Today people still remember/learn from...”句式）；最后结尾回扣主题，表达对人物的情感或评价。写作时需用第三人称，经历部分正确使用过去式，字数不少于40词。
【解析】按照写作框架依次完成：1. 开篇点明主题，介绍孙中山是中国历史上的著名人物；2. 说明其出生信息：出生于广东；3. 讲述人生经历：努力解放中国人民；4. 阐述对社会的影响：如今很多街道、学校、公园以他命名；5. 结尾回扣主题，称他是自己的英雄。具体内容如下：
A famous person
Dr Sun Yatsen is a very famous person in Chinese history. He was born in Guangdong. He tried to free the Chinese people. He loved the Chinese people and the Chinese people love him very much. Today many streets, schools and parks are named after him. He is my hero.

【答案】A famous person
Dr Sun Yatsen is a very famous person in Chinese history. He was born in Guangdong. He tried to free the Chinese people. He loved the Chinese people and the Chinese people love him very much. Today many streets, schools and parks are named after him. He is my hero.

【知识点】英语人物介绍写作；一般过去式
【点评】本题为基础英语写作题，考查学生对人物介绍类短文结构的掌握，以及时态的正确运用，要求学生能清晰有条理地介绍名人，难度适中，注重基础写作能力的培养。
【难度系数】0.6