51. 假如你是学生李华,想就如何提高记忆力的问题给同学们写一封建议信,发表在学校《英语周报》上。要点如下:
(1)提高记忆力的好处;(2)提高记忆力的方法(如锻炼大脑、健康饮食、充足睡眠等);(3)表达祝愿。
注意:(1)词数:80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
Memory plays an important part in studying. I write this letter to express my ideas on how to improve memory.
Yours,
Li Hua
(1)提高记忆力的好处;(2)提高记忆力的方法(如锻炼大脑、健康饮食、充足睡眠等);(3)表达祝愿。
注意:(1)词数:80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
Memory plays an important part in studying. I write this letter to express my ideas on how to improve memory.
If we have a good memory, we can study better and better.Besides, we can make the most of time so that we can have a good balance between hobbies and schoolwork.
Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory.First, we can exercise our brains more.Second, we should have a healthy diet.Last, we must have enough sleep.If so, all the students can do well in the subjects.
I hope my advice can help you.I am looking forward to your improvement.
Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory.First, we can exercise our brains more.Second, we should have a healthy diet.Last, we must have enough sleep.If so, all the students can do well in the subjects.
I hope my advice can help you.I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
Memory plays an important part in studying.I write this letter to express my ideas on how to improve memory.If we have a good memory, we can study better and better.Besides, we can make the most of time so that we can have a good balance between hobbies and schoolwork.
Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory.First, we can exercise our brains more.Second, we should have a healthy diet.Last, we must have enough sleep.If so, all the students can do well in the subjects.
I hope my advice can help you.I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear fellow students,
Memory plays an important part in studying.I write this letter to express my ideas on how to improve memory.If we have a good memory, we can study better and better.Besides, we can make the most of time so that we can have a good balance between hobbies and schoolwork.
Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory.First, we can exercise our brains more.Second, we should have a healthy diet.Last, we must have enough sleep.If so, all the students can do well in the subjects.
I hope my advice can help you.I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作(建议信)任务,要求以学生李华的身份,就“提高记忆力”给同学写建议信,发表在学校《英语周报》上。需紧扣三个核心要点:①提高记忆力的好处;②提高记忆力的具体方法(锻炼大脑、健康饮食、充足睡眠等);③表达祝愿。解题时需利用已给的书信开头、结尾,补充中间内容,注意词数控制在80左右,语言连贯,符合学生身份与书信格式。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,先阐述提高记忆力的好处:如能助力学业进步,平衡学业与课余爱好;2. 分点说明提高记忆力的方法:锻炼大脑、保持健康饮食、保证充足睡眠;3. 最后表达对同学们的祝愿,希望建议有帮助,期待同学们进步。需注意用词简洁,符合词数要求,行文连贯。
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Memory plays an important part in studying.I write this letter to express my ideas on how to improve memory.If we have a good memory, we can study better and better.Besides, we can make the most of time so that we can have a good balance between hobbies and schoolwork.
Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory.First, we can exercise our brains more.Second, we should have a healthy diet.Last, we must have enough sleep.If so, all the students can do well in the subjects.
I hope my advice can help you.I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书信写作、英语要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求紧扣给定要点完成建议信,既考查语言组织能力,又考查对写作任务的理解能力,是英语学习中常见的写作题型,适合学生巩固应用文写作技巧。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,先阐述提高记忆力的好处:如能助力学业进步,平衡学业与课余爱好;2. 分点说明提高记忆力的方法:锻炼大脑、保持健康饮食、保证充足睡眠;3. 最后表达对同学们的祝愿,希望建议有帮助,期待同学们进步。需注意用词简洁,符合词数要求,行文连贯。
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Memory plays an important part in studying.I write this letter to express my ideas on how to improve memory.If we have a good memory, we can study better and better.Besides, we can make the most of time so that we can have a good balance between hobbies and schoolwork.
Here are some suggestions about how to improve our memory.First, we can exercise our brains more.Second, we should have a healthy diet.Last, we must have enough sleep.If so, all the students can do well in the subjects.
I hope my advice can help you.I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书信写作、英语要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求紧扣给定要点完成建议信,既考查语言组织能力,又考查对写作任务的理解能力,是英语学习中常见的写作题型,适合学生巩固应用文写作技巧。
【难度系数】0.6
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