每个家庭都有不同的故事。本周五你们学校将举行一次英语口语比赛,主题为“我的全家福”。
请你根据自己的全家福,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
1. 你的基本信息(年龄、所在班级);2. 你的家庭成员(外貌、性格、爱好等);3. 表达你对家人的爱。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good afternoon, everyone!
Thank you for listening!
请你根据自己的全家福,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
1. 你的基本信息(年龄、所在班级);2. 你的家庭成员(外貌、性格、爱好等);3. 表达你对家人的爱。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good afternoon, everyone!
I'm Jane, a twelve-year-old girl from Class 2, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my family.
Look, this is a photo of my family. My mother is beautiful with big eyes. She is kind. She loves animals.
My father is tall and handsome. He is a Chinese teacher. He likes reading very much.
The boy is my brother. He is clever. He likes playing football with his friends.
I love my family so much.
They always stay with me and help me when I meet problems.
I feel lucky to have such a loving family.
Thank you for listening!
答案
【实战演练】
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm Jane, a twelve-year-old girl from Class 2, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my family.
Look, this is a photo of my family. My mother is beautiful with big eyes. She is kind. She loves animals. My father is tall and handsome. He is a Chinese teacher. He likes reading very much. The boy is my brother. He is clever. He likes playing football with his friends.
I love my family so much. They always stay with me and help me when I meet problems. I feel lucky to have such a loving family.
Thank you for listening!
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm Jane, a twelve-year-old girl from Class 2, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my family.
Look, this is a photo of my family. My mother is beautiful with big eyes. She is kind. She loves animals. My father is tall and handsome. He is a Chinese teacher. He likes reading very much. The boy is my brother. He is clever. He likes playing football with his friends.
I love my family so much. They always stay with me and help me when I meet problems. I feel lucky to have such a loving family.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“我的全家福”为主题写英语演讲稿,需涵盖三个核心内容:1.个人基本信息(年龄、所在班级);2.家庭成员的外貌、性格、爱好等;3.表达对家人的爱。解题思路:先利用已给开头,依次介绍自身基本信息,结合全家福照片逐一描述家庭成员的相关情况,最后抒发对家人的爱,确保内容连贯、词数符合要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出,先介绍个人基本信息,如“我是一名12岁的女孩,来自七年级二班”;2. 过渡到全家福,分别描述父母、兄弟的外貌、性格、爱好,让内容具体充实;3. 最后表达对家人的爱,说明家人的陪伴与帮助,情感真挚,符合演讲稿的语气要求。
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm Jane, a twelve-year-old girl from Class 2, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my family.
Look, this is a photo of my family. My mother is beautiful with big eyes. She is kind. She loves animals. My father is tall and handsome. He is a Chinese teacher. He likes reading very much. The boy is my brother. He is clever. He likes playing football with his friends.
I love my family so much. They always stay with me and help me when I meet problems. I feel lucky to have such a loving family.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家庭话题英语表达、英语连贯表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有要点,语言简洁流畅,符合演讲稿的写作规范,情感真挚,是一篇优秀的范文,适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以“我的全家福”为主题写英语演讲稿,需涵盖三个核心内容:1.个人基本信息(年龄、所在班级);2.家庭成员的外貌、性格、爱好等;3.表达对家人的爱。解题思路:先利用已给开头,依次介绍自身基本信息,结合全家福照片逐一描述家庭成员的相关情况,最后抒发对家人的爱,确保内容连贯、词数符合要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出,先介绍个人基本信息,如“我是一名12岁的女孩,来自七年级二班”;2. 过渡到全家福,分别描述父母、兄弟的外貌、性格、爱好,让内容具体充实;3. 最后表达对家人的爱,说明家人的陪伴与帮助,情感真挚,符合演讲稿的语气要求。
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm Jane, a twelve-year-old girl from Class 2, Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my family.
Look, this is a photo of my family. My mother is beautiful with big eyes. She is kind. She loves animals. My father is tall and handsome. He is a Chinese teacher. He likes reading very much. The boy is my brother. He is clever. He likes playing football with his friends.
I love my family so much. They always stay with me and help me when I meet problems. I feel lucky to have such a loving family.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家庭话题英语表达、英语连贯表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有要点,语言简洁流畅,符合演讲稿的写作规范,情感真挚,是一篇优秀的范文,适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.3
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