2026年名师面对面先学后练六年级英语上册人教版第33页答案
三、书面表达。
本单元的话题围绕如何保持健康展开。我们要知道一些普通感冒症状及情绪相关的正确表述,学会提出建议并做出一个健康计划。
【写作指引】

答案

参考范文:
How can we live a healthy life?
Last week I had a bad cold. I coughed a lot and felt so sad. Now I make a plan to keep healthy. First, I should do more exercise every day, I can play sports with my friends after school. Second, I need to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit, and I won't eat too much sweet food. Third, I should go to bed before 9 o'clock, so I can have enough sleep.
Health is very important to us. When we are healthy, we can always feel happy and enjoy our daily life.

解析

【分析】
本题是围绕健康话题的英语书面表达题,需按照开头引出健康话题、正文描述症状/情绪并提出健康建议、结尾总结健康重要性的结构写作。解题思路:先确定开头用问句引出健康主题,正文结合自身感冒经历描述症状与情绪,再分点提出具体健康计划,结尾总结健康的重要性,确保内容完整、结构清晰,正确运用相关词汇和建议句型。
【解析】
1. 开头:用引出健康话题的句子,如“How can we live a healthy life?”;
2. 正文:先描述自身感冒症状(如had a bad cold, coughed a lot, felt sad),再分点提出健康建议:每天锻炼、吃新鲜蔬果、早睡;
3. 结尾:总结健康的重要性,如“Health is very important to us. When we are healthy, we can always feel happy and enjoy our daily life.”
【答案】
参考范文:
How can we live a healthy life?
Last week I had a bad cold. I coughed a lot and felt so sad. Now I make a plan to keep healthy. First, I should do more exercise every day, I can play sports with my friends after school. Second, I need to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit, and I won't eat too much sweet food. Third, I should go to bed before 9 o'clock, so I can have enough sleep.
Health is very important to us. When we are healthy, we can always feel happy and enjoy our daily life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题词汇、建议句型
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕健康话题的书面表达能力,要求结构清晰,内容贴合要求,能正确运用相关词汇和句型,体现了对单元话题的掌握,是基础的写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
【写作实践】
在“Healthy life”的主题班会上,同学们纷纷表达自己的观点。根据思维导图,写一篇关于健康生活的作文。要求:语句通顺,不少于5句话。可以适当发挥。

How can we live a healthy life?

Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables.

Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day.

Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day.

When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things.

Join clubs and teams. We can make new friends there. Health is very important to us.

答案

三、 How can we live a healthy life?
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day. Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things. Join clubs and teams. We can make new friends there.
Health is very important to us.
解析 开头点题,中间按照思维导图的饮食、作息、运动、情绪调节、社交五个维度逐一提出具体健康建议,最后以点明健康重要性的陈述句结尾全文。

解析

【分析】
本题是健康主题的英语写作题,解题思路为:1. 开头点明主题,引出“如何健康生活”的核心;2. 结合思维导图的五个关键维度(健康饮食、作息规律、日常锻炼、情绪调节、社交活动)逐一展开具体建议;3. 结尾点明健康的重要性,确保语句通顺、内容完整,满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
写作时,先以“How can we live a healthy life?”开头点题,接着分点阐述:健康饮食(多吃蔬果)、作息(不熬夜,每天睡约10小时)、运动(每天打球或跑步)、情绪(难过时想开心的事)、社交(加入俱乐部交朋友),最后用“Health is very important to us.”结尾,紧扣思维导图要点,语言连贯,符合写作要求。
【答案】
How can we live a healthy life?
Have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Don't stay up late. Students should sleep about ten hours every day. Exercise often. We can play ball games or run every day. When we feel sad, we can think about our happy things. Join clubs and teams. We can make new friends there.
Health is very important to us.
【知识点】
英语写作、健康主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“健康生活”主题,结构清晰,覆盖思维导图所有要点,语言通顺自然,符合写作要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5